The Federation Starship Voyager is lost in the Delta Quadrant, 70000 Light Years from home.
They stumble upon Equestria.
Events may develop in a disastrous way.
A MLP/Star Trek Voyager Crossover
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Thanks to ReiDuran for permission to use his art.
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This dosen't seem to fit in with the Prime Directive. Kinda unbalevable, but whatever I would like to see where this goes.
I like this.
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I'm glad to hear this
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well, to quote Picard:
"The Prime Directive is not just a set of rules; it is a philosophy... and a very correct one. History has proven again and again that whenever mankind interferes with a less developed civilization, no matter how well intentioned that interference may be, the results are invariably disastrous."
And assuming a civilisation has graviton-manipulating technology, one can think that they are advanced enough.
Also, Janeway 'bended' the Prime Directive before (VOY Equinox)
This story has been added to the folders of our group, Star Trek Ponies
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Not to mention, it's just the right amount of stupid for Voyager.
*prefers TNG*
*meanwhile, in the continuum*
Q- 'hey discord, my favorite people to annoy are meeting your favorite people to annoy. want to annoy them both together?'
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Please good sir.
Continue.
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I did not schedule to write another chapter soon, but since this story got some attention I find myself working at the next chapter.
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...nice
I read the first chapter on-site, but when this updates, I'm gonna switch to my phone, along with all the other fics.
As a massive nerd, I feel there has to be some sort of Q/Discord John-De-Lancie-ception type stuff going on. That opportunity is just too perfect to ignore, those characters would play off each other like a ball and a wall. Here's to hoping
Keep up the good work Thanks.
Super Awsome.
I'm going to say that Janeway's blatant disregard of the prime directive is that she is trying to make some friends/allies when they desperately needed them in the series, when they had like 3-5 enemies too worry about at once.
Heh. This is really nicely done. From the gravitational anomaly, to the magic messing up their sensors, to the very first instant voice communications experiment on the whole planet mistaken for hailing them. Really well thought out.
There are quite some problems with the writing though... incorrect separation of paragraphs, the fact you never seem to end quotes on a punctuation mark... you should really take better care of the details, and then get yourself an editor, because this story really seems worth it
Not too long ago, I compiled a bunch of hints on self-editing into a blog post, because it's generally the stuff I end up saying to all people I do prereading for. You may want to check it out; it should help you improve this story
You may also want to take a look at Ezn's excellent guide, which is linked to at the top of the page whenever you edit or create a story here on Fimfic.
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Pfffhahahaaa! I guess all Star Trek crossovers get this joke, but still
Star Trek and ponies. . . This is relevant to my interests.
Well, looks like Janeway and her crew have just received the most luckily tuned radio signal to have ever been transmitted. I say Hurrah! Cheers to cosmic coincidence!
Although, I do suppose that the captain made a rather badly thought-out and severely rushed decision in communicating with the planet's occupants. Even despite this supposed hail and the poorly analyzed observation of heavy gravometric disturbances, the ship should have spent far more time taking some scans of the planet, studying the signal that they picked up, and finding out exactly what they were looking at. It's not every day that you see a geocentric solar system, I would make sure I knew what I was getting into before responding to a message from an unidentified source... that somehow managed to send a proper hail, again Wow lucky.
I just figure that things were a tad rushed here, but I'd still like to see this story continue. Star Trek and Pony makes for some swell entertainment value in my opinion.
Good luck to you and all your future endeavors.
-The Human (Mark II)
Well, like the idea, we have far too few stories with Star Trek. However, the pacing seems way too fast and the characters seem out of character. I don't know...
If you can do better in the next few chapters I might enjoy this story, but right now its hard to get past the problems.
If anyone is wondering, have a brilliantly drawn flight trajectory:
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Moooore....
Crap, they think the ponies shot down the Delta Flyer.... maybe a Unicorn did? I am not sure.
Any ways MOAR!
Why would they land when they have transporters?
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Transporters & Sensors don't work because of the Energy Fluctuations (magic *hint hint*)
It’s nice to see another Voyager story, though I did have a few thoughts.
I think the bridge crew dialogue is a bit too casual. I don’t think any Starfleet officer would simply respond “Sure” while on duty.
If Icheb is aboard, then this story takes place during the 6th or 7th season, thus Voyager would be 35 thousand light years from earth, (they reached that distance after using the transwarp coil in season 5).
Equestria’s first wireless communications system is capable of sending and receiving subspace messages. Impressive.
While I can definitely see Janeway bending the Prime Directive, her reasoning here seems a bit flawed. You might want to flesh out the discussions on the bridge and add a bit more back and forth, making her defend her position. (I know she’s the captain, but I think even she would try to justify herself before ordering her crew to break Starfleet General Order #1.
The story’s pace is pretty crazy fast. It’s alright to take some time to expand on things and some description. Describe voyager taking damage, or what Chakotay is thinking as the ship is being torn apart by the unknown force from the planet.
I’m interested in seeing what you do with this.
2243207 lol that's Twilight for you
only she could try to make a shortwave radio and end up with a subspace transmiter
really I can kinda understand Janeways' jumping to respond to a hail, Delta quadrant was not a nice place to traveling through for them so the saying hi when somepny says hi first is good manners as well as a way to say 'Please don't torch our asses!'
How's Voyager the first of its Class when it's an Intrepid Class, not a Voyager Class?
Either way, Janeway has never cared that much about the Prime Directive unless following it would cause someone to die (or make life difficult for her crew, especially poor dumb Harry).
Carbon Dioxide makes up 0.0387% of Earth's atmosphere, not 4%.
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Good thing it's not taking place on Earth.
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The Voyager was the first Intrepid Class ship introduced in the Series. The second was the U.S.S. Bellerophon.
A U.S.S. Intrepid as the first Intrepid class was never mentioned (neither in the series nor the movies).
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please update soon! love this story but I agree with some of those reviews up there on Janeway you may want to rethink that out
About damn time a VOY crossover was made. I've been waiting for one forever. Lovely work so far!
I'm a Trek fan and I like it......gimme more story please.
I don't get why Celestia or Twilight always think that teleporting whenever you want is polite. If I was in the Captains situation I'd at least try punching her.
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No way. Did you see what happened when TD did that?
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I meant that if I was the Captain and only had her knowledge at the time. If it was literally me there I would have simply said, "Hey, while your at it, would you like stick your hoof in my mouth?"
2249095 tHEY ARE TALKING ABOUT OTHER PLANET, GENIUS.
moar, MOAR I SAY!!!!
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I didn't have time to type the more important part of my objection in the first comment. Humans would find an atmosphere containing that much CO2 to be uncomfortably stale. Nowhere in this story did any members of Voyager's crew make note of Equus' air, and how stuffy it would have seemed. While the higher partial pressure of oxygen would mitigate the ill effects of the CO2, the air would still feel stuffy to any humans who were not acclimated to local conditions.
"Were these horses pink and blue?"
Hey now, don't be rude. Celestia is white.
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Rainbow Dash is cyan and Pinkie is...pink?!
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Also, white Horses are quite common on Earth. Pink ones are...not.
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After crashing down on a foreign planet and being surrounded by mythological creatures "stuffy" air might be not your main topic to think about.
Besides, the air aboard a Borg Cube might be a bit worse so "Equus's" air is not that bad in comparison
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Teleportation spells are nothing else than magical transporters.
Celestia asked if they should move the conversion to a more private location. And since Janeway is used to being beamed it's not a reason to punch somepony
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Most likely this weekend but I cannot guarantee that.
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HEY! DON'T TRY FOOLING ME WITH YOUR LOGIC! I'M TO SMART FOR THAT!
I feel like Janeway is out of character... No offense, but she's acting much less mature/controlled/professional then I would have expected her to. Still a good effort
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One time Janeway locked herself in her ready room for about a week. Was that mature/professional?
I have noticed that I wrote Janeway a bit different than she used to act but it's kinda necessary for the course of story.
when can we expect the next chapters