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*Typing up blog, looks at the Recently Updated header*
*Reads clever title*
I am definitely intrigued. I am going to read this the second I finish getting ready for tomorrow. ![]()
I will say this again: Oh, you.
(Dang like 5 stories in 20 minutes. Jeez.)
My god i started laughing out loud good thing no ones home
Me: Ooh, interesting title. *sees mature tag* ooh, better put that on the "read-while-everyone-else-in-my-house-is-sleeping" list ![]()
Hmm, much more sfw than I expected, probably didnt need the mature tag
Oh god. I wasn't expecting this. XD
More FUN and HILARITY ensures! *squees*
I shall now proceed to calmly and methodically read this. ![]()
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Definitely didn't need the mature tag (it isn't THAT bad, though you know, if you want to be on the safe side ;]) this was pretty funny!
Good job, once again ![]()
"I mean, one, I would expect. Two? I could understand. But all five?"
You had me sold right here..
.. and then the start of the flashback made it obvious. I still can't stop laughing. I. LOVE. YOU. ![]()
I was disappointed when I found out that it I wasn't going to get a vivid description of "all five, at once..."
Did it have to be a prank?!
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would have made for one helluva clop...
this made my day, also Dash and Pinkie are the best trolls in history
Heh, do I spy a reference to Martial Law? IF so ... I'm impressed.
I don't think it would need a mature tag. Possibly a teen. Also. Typo.
Twilight Sparkle nodded approvingly, and bit on the tip of her quill as she considered what to write next. Before she could finish, Pinkie --->Pike<--- grabbed her and pulled her deeper into the bush. "Write quieter!" Pinkie said, conspiratorially. "They're almost here!"
look between the arrows.......
this, is an epic win, wish it wasnt a prank tho, would make for awesome clop, as has been said
Amazing...and did Twilight one-up The Pie and Dash Pranksters? Awesome. ![]()
"'So it's extra credit?' Luna bravely fought the urge to break out laughing. It was a losing battle."
It was a losing battle, as that was the point I lost it! ![]()
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Have some stars! All of them, in fact!
at "I mean, one, I would expect." ![]()
at "Two? I could understand." ![]()
at "But all five?" ![]()
at "At once?" ![]()
Pretty funny, though I do hope Pinkie and Dash get paid back for such a mean prank big time.
Also I wouldn't describe Luna's mane as snowy. In fact it's pretty dark so snowy is actually one of the last things that comes to mind.
Too bad Pinkie was just too damn random to be weirded out, then it would have been truly priceless. Quite frankly I think Twi should've used a certain quote from Molestia.
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Twilight Sparkle didn't let Pinkie Pie finish. Instead, she just wrapped a pull cord around her hoof and gave it a mighty yank. Immediately, the well oiled engine roared to life. Its steady purr was so loud, the unicorn had to yell. "Really, it was easy!" Twilight Sparkle said. "I mean, all you've got to do is take out the shock absorbers, and the vibrations go directly into-"
"Uh." Rainbow Dash said, "Isn't that a little, um...overkill?"
"It's not overkill, it's science!" Twilight said with all the pride of a mad scientist. "Prepare your anus!"
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See fits in perfectly.....pun intended
OMFG i was like DAFUQ about twilight taking 5 stallions at once
but then i luled at pinkie and rainbow![]()
All five at once!
Should have included Big Mac in there too.
Oh well.
Best. Prank. Ever.
Oh man, Rainbow and Pinkie will really be in trouble when Twilight finds out.
Hah! I was right! Twilight's retribution (as well as the subsequent prank on Rarity and Applejack) was hilarious. Great work.
LOL... it sparked...
also a story with twi and all 5? lol... i would like to see that happen... XD
Loved it, but there should have been some *ahem* action
considering its marked mature.
Ok three things...WTF Celestia? I thought you weren't into that!
Also...Pinkie Pie...Don't stick bumpy cucumbers in your mouth...finally...it sparkled O_O Oh my...
WTF did Twilight build? Some kind of dildo-vibrator-stun gun-chainsaw? ![]()
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DAYUM.
This is confusing and hilarious. I NEED MORE FUNNY STUFF LIKE THIS!
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I dunno man...
Not the best EVERRRRRRRRRR...
...but good anyway.
>>Phoenixfire92
C'mon now
she's a thousand years old.
AND SOMETIMES OLD PEOPLE JUST WANNA HAVE FUN.
Don't hate.
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"Twilight reached behind a bookshelf and pulled out a device of...intimidating proportions."
This. This did it for me. Yes it did.
Oh you...
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"It's not overkill, it's science!"
Yep. That sounds about right. Twilight should work for Aperture.
I this reminds me of that time I ordered a sex toy online and had it shipped over to my friend's house. To this day she has no idea who sent that package to her.
Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash? That can only mean one thing... pranks *dun dun duuuuun!*
Great work guy, laughed pretty much the whole time. I love how quick witted Luna is.
Off to part two... *whoosh*
Whole neighborhood's awake because of my laughter. Just want to say "amazing job" before I get arrested for disturbing the peace.
*runs*
This definitely doesn't need the mature tag nor the sex label. this is tamer than many teen rated fics on here that contain gratuitous non-graphic sex. This one doesn't even have anyone having sex in it.![]()
i had forgot i had already read this but once i started i really had to finish it again, so damn hilarious!
No, really. It was hilarious. And actually, Pinkie might have turned the prank the other (third) way around. ![]()
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Laughed hard enough my teeth started chattering. Well done, sir!
Great story, lets see ho Twilght will react ![]()
But someting bothers me:
"But who knew you could copy Twilight's handwriting so well?"
That should be hoovewriting, or maybe hornwriting.
I realized about 3 paragraphs in that I have already read this. It did not stop me.
Okay, not to myself, never EVER, prank Twi like that, she is more than likely to return it in her own egghead... did I said egghead? I meant, her adorable brainy way. Kudos to you my friend, I just died laughing.
i've seen other stories with a teen rating that went a good deal farther than this fic, that aside, this was genius. ![]()
...I'm curious to find out how Twilight would find out...unless Luna sends her a congratulatory fruitbasket or something....![]()
I have to admit, my favorite partof this was Rarity's reaction to what they did to one of her mannequins.
Appropriate music for the last bit: Derp Roll'd followed up by Yakety Sax.
Luna trolling Celestia, oh god the Irony ![]()
goood story sir
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best team eveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer







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