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Very nice, a lot of comedy and great set up looking for moar
Bad hay! That right there earned you a track.
A Twilight/Spike fic. ...Okay, so Rarity's in it too, but we can deal with that. CONTINUE THIS!
Hey, I saw this premise on Ponibooru!
You didn't steal it, didya
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Of COURSE not. ...he gives credit right in the description, see?
That said, I'm not SURE if I want to read this. Different species or not, TwiSpike just strikes me as incest as asuridly as MacinJack does.
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I understand your concern, that was why the first TwiSpike bit isn't written romantically. Twilight is investigating the properties of dragon semen, and needs fresh samples. Her view of later intercourse is simply that of a meal or exercise routine that she does solely for the magic boost. This plays into the RariSpike bits, but I don't want to spoil any more.
I don't know... I find it weird that Twilight would just use her mouth without a second thought. I thought it would be cute if she liked him "like that," and used this moment as an excuse (and also to collect data on it, killing two birds with one stone) to get closer to him. But, this is also a comedy, and I want to know how this goes.
It stands to question as to why Twilight hadn`t started off by using her mouth. It`s quite logical and easy to rationale as "emulating the natural environment for an ejaculation".
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Because she wanted to collect the cum, and using hooves would minimize spill. Mouth was the second best option once hooves didn't work out.
"Uh, yeah, everything's fine. Just, you know... masturbating."
*tracks*
Interesting idea. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Great so far. But can you just do one thing for me? Why don't you have a seat write over there.
Love. This. Must. Have. More
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Hooves? Minimize the spill? Does not add up well. Don`t even need fancy math to see that.
"After fifteen minutes of patient waiting, the purple unicorn couldn't help but knock on the door. "Spike, is everything ok in there?"
"Uh, yeah, everything's fine. Just, you know... masturbating."
Comedy gold right there, just gold.
"...fabulously sensual..."
I mentally read that in Rarity's, and then Sapphire Shore's voice.
this is very funny and enjoyable.
Why is everypony a pedophile?
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Perhaps there's a different, or non-existent, age restriction in Equestria.
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Spike's only a few years older than Twilight, so....
I stopped at the semen that has the power to boost unicorn magic.
And laughed.
186370 He is a few years younger, not older.
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Yeah, that's what I meant. Sorry.
186784 I was wondering the same thing, I hope we get to find out.
Falcon Bitchslap! lol Funny chapter great job.
Aspiring lunar colonist
HAH
And, here we go.
"Well, look at that. Another aspiring lunar colonist." LOL 5 stars
186370 Its the other way around
Sending Pinkie to the moon might be the worst idea Celestia's ever had
212011 We call them "bee-yetches" where I come from.
This fic is getting better and better.
Okay, I nearly died laughing while reading this chapter. Keep up the great work!
<---this guy, this guy right here is THE man xD
Funny story, looking forward to more.
Have a good one.
Ending could have been better, was hoping Twilight was gonna get in on that action. Also First first EVER!!! Woot
BWAHAHA! The end of this is bucking hilarious. If we still had stars, you'd have 5 from me
Wut
Wow. That ending came out of nowhere. Kinda... disappointing. But it was funny, I guess.
I gotta agree. The ending, while amusing, was pretty random. I'm still thumbing this up, though.
That was fucking hilarious! And terrible, but in a good, comedic sort of way.
Sweetie Belle's theory of relativity.
Looks like Pinkie is a biooooootch that likes bananas... or doesn't.... or isn't really sure...
That is all.
Have a good one.
Good show, man
This was quite wonderful
Bahaahaa defintely a funny ending XD
Can't tell if Celestia is talking about Spike
Or Pinkie..
Yeah, the ending was funny, if a bit sudden.
Still seems kinda lame that Twilight didn't join them in the action though.
That would have made the sex scene a lot more interesting.
Good Clop-fic, keep writing! The ending was very rushed and weird though..
The only thing I could think of after Twilight taking the load, was her yelling "IT TASTES LIKE POOOWWERRRRR!!!!!".
242147 On the MOOOOOOOONNNA!