Trixie returns to Ponyville at the same time as Twilight`s father Night Light and Twilight hopes that Trixie`s visit won`t mess up her father`s time in Ponyville. Little did they know that he had news for both of them.
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Princess Glitzy
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calling it
Trixie's Night Light's mistress.
2538648 You can call it all you want, but it`s bigger than that! Reach for the stars in your guesses!
Not reading it yet, since I hate reading fics on my phone, but I bet they're going to end up being sisters.
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I'd be disappointed... thats some m night shamamalama plot twist.
m night shamamalama should be a llama in mlp.
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Night Light sold her daughter's hoof for marriage to the daughter of an random pony, and that daughter happens to be Trixie.
2538695 Good, I'm not a fan of that type of plot.
And yes, he should.
I love your guesses, but could we please keep these to ourselves or in a blog. I don`t want anypony to read the comments and choose which one they say is right. You will find out it the next chapter so calm yourselves.
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I haven't read it... but somehow Trixie is Twilight's -real- mom. :O
I'm kidding, I'm kidding.
I CALL SISTERS!!!
There was an accident when Twilight was a foal and it created Trixie who is Twilight's boastful and more confident half.
Obvious plot twist is obvious.
Great beginning!
IDK if somepony has told you this already, but after you put sentences that are in quotation marks, you put a comma, exclamation point, or question mark at the end, not a period.
Still a really funny story though
I give it... six out of five Spike Mustaches
2538695 A llama that eats combustable lemons and perpetually craps grenades in its wake.
...No, wait, I'm thinking of Michael Bay...
2538736 How long will that be, asks the American. Bloke who hasn't read a word of the story yet?
2539164 Probably a day or so.
2539423 There shall be no shipping!
I say they are twin sisters separated at birth cause Trixie was taken by the great Houdini and trained her to become the great and powerful Trixie.
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Cause man, it is so hard to find stories with these two that are shipping free.
Why does this have 40 favorites, but 20 likes?
Wow, some people called it.
<_<
>_>
Very clever idea, (Kind of saw it coming mid-ch1 though)
Well my call for the great Houdini taking her is still up for grabs.
Twilight and Trixie as sisters?
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I was hoping it'd be a bit longer, but I still love this story.
2548068 It`s not done yet! If you meant make each chapter longer, well then... let`s just say that it was hard to get the chapters that long in the first place.
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Ahh well, I suppose one can't complain with daily updates.
I can only assume you meant eyes?
2548303 It said ."..your mother and I`s wonderful, blue coat..." You would write mother and I, but it was possessive so I added it to the I. I`m not sure that it works, but that`s what I did.
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Oh, right, I misread that whole thing.
I thought you meant eyes as in... the orbs in your skull.
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That`s my new favorite definition for eyes. The old definition for eyes: Each of a pair of globular organs in the head through which people and vertebrate animals see.
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Thanks.
I thought Twilight forgave Trixie at the end of 'Magic Duel'?
2548521 She said that, but she still didn`t really look like she did. Not to mention that this is a story that doesn`t exactly have to fit in with the show.
...Wow. That was...really OOC to me. Since when does Twilight freak like that and resort to violence?
When did she almost "Kill her friends"?
She was corrupted by the amulet. This was covered already.
Twilight is straight up calling her an evil liar. Again. Just plain OOC. She learned back with Zecora not to judge a book by it's cover. I really doubt this kinda reaction would happen.
All in all this chapter really killed my enthusiasm for this story. I'll keep an eye on the next chapter and make my final judgement then.
2548804 I just wanted to add excitement and people need to stop tying it with the actual show. The next chapter is totally different. I just needed an exciting filler for the chapter and them fighting did the trick. Don`t give up hope on this story!
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It's a fan fic. A fan made fictional story based on a show. It's gonna be compared none the less. Changing characters to fit your story isn't very good. Just being honest here.
2548949 Have you seen Twilight when she goes crazy? She goes mad. When she gets mad she can literally light on fire. What happens if she reaches the breaking point? You don`t know. Nobody knows how she would react. Also, we can`t see her thoughts. What if she has a deep hatred for her? Who knows?! It is based off of the show and Twilight will regain her normal personality after this chapter.
Amazing chapter.
And then Trixie got friends!
I like.
That was rather anti-climactic.
2558646 Just wait. Everything will happen in sweet time. The action awaits you. (I made that much more poetic and suspenseful than this comment should be)
Awwwwwwwwww...
Good job with the naming, now every time I see this I think of Night Light by Thyrai (the greatest bittersweet fic I will ever read).
You get a hug! You get a hug!
EVERYBODY GETS A HUG!
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2543800 I knew it when I read the description.
2578494 It was supposed to be somewhat implied by the title and description. I mean, it`s not like I was trying to tell the readers completely, but I wasn`t exactly subtle either.
Pacing's looking a bit hurried.
2580409 It`s mostly because of the fact that I have a hard time writing things slowly. The only story where things weren`t rushed is probably my story Diamonds and Butterflies. Sorry!
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because this isnt youtube