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Magnum the Critic


Magnum the Critic. I don't actually critque anything

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One night in the Everfree forest, a timid pegasus is cornered by one of the most feared creatures known to exist, a Timberwolf. But in the forest lies a dark power greater than Fluttershy could ever imagine. Powerful enough to even give a Timberwolf reason to fear.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 97 )

Wow. Continue this masterpiece

You defiantly have to make more of this. . . . . . this is just awesome writing and i would defiantly would love to hear why Houndoom is so caring towards Fluttershy:yay:

my god... How has nobody thought of this before?! Genius idea, I really want to see what you do with this story. Keep goin and stay golden^^

this is bloody awesome!
more chapters, as soon as possible! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

The pic shows Houndoom :pinkiehappy: and its gunna light stuff up.

Amazing!!! :pinkiecrazy: LIGHT IT UP!!!

Comment posted by NightmareKnight deleted Mar 7th, 2013

My god, this is a work of art. You make this work so well, and I really want to see you continue this. Mind answering me when you think you could update this?

2230003 I want the next chapter to be done by Sunday. Hopefully earlier.

I think I was so rushed to get to class that I forgot to favorite this. Problem solved now.

2230555No problem. Like I said earlier, this is truly a work of art. It deserves to be favorited.

Mother of mercy!
This is brilliant!

I think I prefer this version of Houndoom, it's quite awesome.

2237091 As opposed to what other version? As far as I know, this is the first fanfic on this site to use him at all. (which is partially why i began writing it in the first place)

2237159 As opposed to the one from the games, where it's just another pokemon and not even a particularly powerful or rare one. This story provides some real depth and makes Houndoom far more interesting.

I like the look of this! a Pokemon in Equestria that ISN'T a human! Keep this up!

Houndoom? Crazy guess, I know, but it would make sense in terms of the story line.

Houndoom might be too obvious so I'm guessing its going to be Dusknoir

New chapter, all of my yes!

And my guess... Houndoom.

calling the spirits of the otherworld and go to a place where no living being should ever enter to say goodbye to a squirrel?
That's Fluttershy for you cares for her animals even beyond their death.
And I'll be going with Giratina because its basically a deity and lords over his own realm.

Celebi. Nice chapter by the way, hope to see more of this soon. Keep goin and stay golden^^

Someone of the Dusclops family.

Hell yeah it's Houndoom!:pinkiecrazy:

Well, I would guess it'd be Houndoom. He is a dark type pokemon after all.

2216905 I sense a coverup of the plot! XD........... WHY ARE THERE NO HAPPY FLUTTERSHY EMOTICONS!?:flutterrage:

Ah, Houndoom. One of my favorite Pokemon. And of all the ponies to see this fire canine, poor panic-stricken Fluttershy had to be it. It must be fate! :trollestia: Or maybe....yup, just the plot. :eeyup:

Giratina? Or Darkrai? Hmmm...... Anyways, great chapter! :twilightsmile:

This finally updated. Hallelujah.

2639360 Thanks for sticking around through all the waiting.

interesting, hope to see more of this story soon, keep goin and stay golden^^

Zigzagoon AND Dusknoir?
Shit

2639796
Sweet Serrano Ham
Hnng

2242118>>2639751>>2639389>>2246475>>2242406 In case you guys are wondering, there will be a sequel to this........five sequels actually. One for each of the mane 6.

Duskanoir, I called it. Can't wait for more.

Dusknior? Really?
:facehoof:

2709744 What's the problem with Dusknoir?

Hmmm fire-fang, flamethrower, fire-blast maybe? Thats all i got

2639852 Whoa Whoa Whoa Five sequels??????? Wow sounds like a lot of work.
Anyways I'am loving this story so far, little short, but still. Really quick you should try reading Eevee's trip to Equsteria, its little destrping at so points, but I usaully just skip those parts. Can't wait to see more:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

2825960 At SOME points, my grammer sucks a lot :(:facehoof:

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