• Member Since 29th Oct, 2012
  • offline last seen Jun 22nd, 2015

VelocityOfTheNight


E

Hearts and Hooves day is on it's way. Twilight Sparkle is tasked to organize the week with the Help of Discord. Discord soon changes Hearts and Hooves day from being a day to week, and as the week passes by, himself and twilight come to realize that their maybe be as alone as they thought they would be. Discord, The Master of chaos organizing Hearts and Hooves day week?
What could possibly go wrong?

[UPDATE] : I'm sorry to say, but i cannot continue this fiction for quite awhile and i am thinking about not completing it at all. This is because i had 3 more chapters ready on my computer but unfortantley it needs to be repaired and is going to be completley wiped. This has lead to a great amount of stress for me and i don't have the time to re-write the chapters. I may write again, once my computer is safe and fixed.
My apoligises.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

Holy shit that's long! No wonder it took you a while! :raritystarry: LOL. This is NOT terrible at all! :twilightsmile: I love this actually! :heart: You did awesome!! I am anticipating the next chapter now! :pinkiehappy: Oh and: :yay: :heart: :eeyup: is what I'm seeing in the future chapters!

Good, but watch your grammar, and put in a new paragraph after every speaker change.

2322888. Thanks for your help. I really appericate it.

2319773 I'm so happy you like it! And thank you. I need your oppinion , later on (SPOILER) twi and dissy might make this fanfic mature ( hint hint) but i dont know whther to do this or not. What do you think?

2329254 *Me Gusta* Sure! I guess. Just make sure it's AFTER they're married. :rainbowlaugh: Lol jk. Go for it! :twilightsmile: Oh yeah, and make sure that Shining Armor finds out. Like, it should be on a magazine. (You know how magazines are almost always about gossip and.... xxx?) And then the cover of the magazine should be So mature it was illegal for kids to look at it. *Giggle* *Snort* That would be hilarious! Shining Armor would have Liquid Sadness! LOL Oh yeah, and I think the mature part should be near the end so that those two can get out of all of the mushy romance and into a rather STICKY situation. Lol.

2333626 LOL well the first to find out is::moustache:
Poor Spike. But Discord blames it all on Twi::twilightangry2:

2338582 King Sombra: "Fucking Discord." :twilightangry2: :rainbowhuh: :flutterrage:

I'm interested in this story...
MOAR :flutterrage:
But do space out your paragraphs better, there's just so many walls of text. And make a line after every speaker, its a bit confusing.

I love the Fluttermac you have in there :yay:

2386564 Thank you and thanks for the advice , it helps me out alot.:pinkiehappy:

Dammit. You're going to get more likes than me! No fair! LOL Just kidding. You deserve it, after all. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by JeromeSaur deleted Nov 18th, 2013

I can't believe that I forgot to fave this... :pinkiegasp:
Oh well, problem solved! :raritystarry:

Login or register to comment