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Trixie has finally rebuilt her life in the northern must parts of Equestria and is once again a popular show mare, but a dark stranger comes and offers Trixie a cryptic opportunity. Will Trixie forget all she has learned, and throw away everything she has worked so hard to reclaim for just one final chance at glory?

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GLORY still awaits you in the Frozen North!

Return the horn... complete the circle.... RELEASE ME, FROM THIS PRISON!

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That's pretty close. :trixieshiftright: But they'll be more than that, no worries.

Sombra.... oh Sombra... this is gonna be SA-WEET!! :pinkiehappy:

Why didn´t Sombra become an alicorn himself, giving he had everything ready?

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It was explained in Chapter 3, it comes down to he was afraid it might not do what he thought it would do and just turn him into a monster like Starswirl the Bearded. (I'm a big fan of the theory that Discord is Starswirl because his last spell had a flaw in it)

And the other reason is when he did test it on his daughter it used up over 50% of the Heart's power and the only way to recharge the Heart was with love which the empire didn't have anymore at the time.

I hope that explains your question, and thank you for reading.

“Actually I can do that. You weren’t arrested by the police, or the guard, or even the royal guard. My forces have the authority to strip ponies of their rights for the greater good when the scenario calls for it

If the higher powers can take yout rights away when they deem fit, then you don´t have rights at all, only privileges.

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Well said, and describes the character to a tee. It's pretty much how I envisioned the way Cannon Fodder views the world.

Another thing: you didn´t put the LD tag on the story. Does that mean her rol in the story is over? I don´t imagine someone like her forgetting about the treacherous mare who used and throw her under the bus so easily.

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Well, her roll in this fic is pretty much over, but I have plans for her later down the line. I have a lot of ideas for future fics that I want to all take place in the same continuity, but with how slow I write I don't know if I'll be able to write all of them or not.

The next fic I want to write I think will be about Sweetie Belle ten years later as a singer with Trixie as her manager. LD would appear in this fic near the end of it.

Or a fic where Pro Bono moves to Canterlot to rebuild his career, I'm thinking something like a Phoenix Wright parody with this one. I really want to expand on his charterer and back story some more. I haven't decided which one I will write next and either way I need to finish this one first.

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The next fic I want to write I think will be about Sweetie Belle ten years later as a singer with Trixie as her manager

I´ll take Trixie´s alicornication didn´t work as planned. :ajsmug:

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Maybe, Maybe not you'll just going to have to wait and see. :trollestia:

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Kinda anticlimatic. Still wondering about what Trixie has done to herself.

IF you just killed off Trixie, I swear you will get the biggest unlike you ever had. :twilightangry2:

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Before you hit that unlike button, I would like it if you remembered what happened in the season three finale. :scootangel:

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What if she has fused with the entire Crystal Kingdom, becoming a genius loci?

I know, I was attempting to be funny. Humor fail. :facehoof: I am looking forward to the next update. Being Trixie's number one fan here.

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That's okay. I figured! Just playing along.

I am glad to hear you're looking forward to the next chapter, it should be a good one. Only two or three chapters to go, and I know I'm excited about it. It will be the first fic I actually finish, and then who knows? I have a couple of sequel fics planed as well. :ajsmug:

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

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The idea has crossed my mind, and I probably will right before the next chapter comes out. Hopefully I will have some cover art to go with the story by then.

Thanks for the link.

Yay:yay:, I finally got some cover art for this story

Luna is kinda of a bitch, isn´t she? :trixieshiftleft:


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I like Luna, and since she has so little screen time in the show, I can write her however I want (the magic of fan-fiction). And I just so happen to like subtle evil, very manipulative, kind of bitchy characters :trixieshiftright:

So if you don't like her in this chapter, you probably won't like her in the next one either :trollestia:, but I hope you keep reading because I'm so close to finishing this fic I can almost taste it. :yay:

Yay alicorn Trixie luna as her mentor best fic ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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So, Luna and NM were one and the same the whole time?

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That is my head canon, so as far as my fic goes yes Luna and NM were one and the same the whole time. :ajsmug:

I know a lot of bronies like to separate Luna away form NM but I don't like doing that because I think it just takes a lot away from not only Luna's Character but from Celestia's as well. That and there is nothing in the show that suggests that NM was any thing else then just Luna the whole time anyway.

Well that happened. I wonder if Trixie will be able to speak normally now.

“Twilight Sparkle?” Trixie whispered under her breath as she looked at the photo of her would be rival, now with wings. The article went on to tell of the new princess and her life up to this point, daughter of nobility, child prodigy, sister to the Captain of the royal guard, personal student of Princess Celestia, Element of Magic, defeater of Nightmare Moon AND Discord. It also briefly mentioned the Ursa Minor incident but luckily didn’t seem to mention Trixie at all. It also didn’t bring up the incident where Trixie took over the town with the Alicorn Amulet, either. Before, hearing this kind of information would make Trixie scared, or angry with envy, but right now all Trixie felt was discouraged.

Now Trixie, remember what your therapist said.

“R-RAINDROPS! My n-name is Raindrops, hah hah.” The mare’s face turned bright red again. “And no, I’m not mad at you. I mean, I know it wasn’t your fault. The last Time you were in Ponyville you were under the influence of that evil amulet thingy, and the Ursa thing was more the fault of my little brother and his stupid friend.”

Finally someone recognize that

Okay so moonbutt is a bitch and can I be Sombra's lawyer?

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Minus how she became a student was through blackmail. But it's fine since shes a princess. Well as much a princess as blue blood is a prince

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