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BronyWriter


I write pony words. Millions of them. Some people actually think they might be worth reading. I am very thankful for that. Also, I have a Patreon now?

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After the incident with the Mirror Pool, Pinkie Pie begins to realize just how close she came to losing everything and how the ramifications of the event manifested in more than just a ruined barn raising. She seeks the comforting help of one of her best friends, who is more than happy to help.

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Inspired by this song here.

A story written by BronyWriter that isn't in the TDverse?
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Ah well, it looks cute, I'll give it a read tomorrow.

Not sure what to think of this yet. I will adopt a fav-and-see approach...

2201144 Using the same method.

Very interesting to see the aftermath of Pinkie Keen from Pinkie's perspective. Also, yay a short story :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiesad2:

Poor Pinkie Pie. It seems that even when things have sorted themselves out, the guilt can sometimes linger. I wanted to give her a hug myself, but I guess the best remedy for the Mirror Pool Doldrums is a dash of loyalty. :rainbowdetermined2:

This tale was simply lovely, dear author. Hats off. :heart:

So many emotions with this story, I don't know where to start. Definitely fav'ed and liked.

I wonder why Pinkie Pie didn't ask Luna for help with her nightmares...

2203263 That, actually wouldn't change anything. Luna would probably just tell Pinkie not to push everypony away while her guilt consumes her and causes her to suffer.

Surely Twilight was more humane than that.

My jimmies have been rustled.

Otherwise okay.

2201127 Hey I have more depth as an author than an interesting self-insert HiE that generated interest because of an in-your-face title and became popular because TD punched Celestia!

R...Right? Uh, that is true, right? I'm not a one-note author right? G-Guys? Hello?

...oh.

Nah I'm only half-kidding. I hope you like(d) it!

And then they proceeded to copulate:trollestia:

Well, well, well! Very good! Been waiting for a broken Blossom update, and since it's be a little while and I saw this on the homepage, I thought, "In the meantime, why not check out Bronywriters other stories?" Certainly glad I did. I expressed a lot of interest in how Pinkie seemed to just shrug all that episode off, and this sums it up quite nicely. Helluva lot better than the other two I've seen where it's (of course) grimdark as all hell and either ties in with some "cupcakes"-esque style story :pinkiecrazy: or in some other form of insanity. :pinkiehappy: But, anyway, I digress. Another great story BW, keep it up! :twilightsmile:

That was great. Thank you. :pinkiesad2::rainbowkiss:

2306297 Thank you for reading!

2306316 Thank you for writing :pinkiehappy:

Awww... poor Pinkie. I'm glad Rainbow was able to cheer her up! :pinkiesmile:

Great read! I only have one teeny-tiny problem; on the fourth sentence, there is "hears" instead of "ears". :derpyderp1: But anyways, great story, exactly at the quality expected from you! :pinkiehappy:

Love this. I felt my heart cringe. Thank yo

:pinkiegasp:
Umm... uhh... ehhh...
Oh- my- G-d... THAT WAS AMAZING!!!
I've been reading a lot of really good Pinkie Pie fan fics, which you can tell by my favourites list, but this one just blew my mind!:derpyderp1:
This has to be the best Pinkie Pie fan fic I've read yet. I'm not sure if it's as good as My Little Dashie, but then again, the one who wrote that story obviously knew what he was doing to in the writing realm. But I think it's close to standards with that story, and it's not often I say that!
(I'm not saying another word, time to add to favourites)!

This was a nice take on Pinkies feelings after the Mirror Pool event. It makes sense that she would have trouble dealing with these events and I enjoyed how you handled that and had Dash help her through it.

Great job on this story. I thought for sure the outcome for pinkie would be far worse, but thanks to dash always being there for her friends, pinkie pie can live to smile another day. which is why I like dashie so much.

Wow...that was a rather deep story. I really enjoyed this piece and just want to hug Pinkie and never let her go. :pinkiesad2:

Well done! I cant fault anything in this story, you got Pinkie and Dashie perfect in character.

-Frost :pinkiesmile:

I may be going against the crowd here, but I can't find anything really heartwarming about this to be honest.

:applejackunsure:

Pinkie had some legitimate concerns about them (her friends/Pinkie Clones), and other than a token discussion about them, and a rather (iron cloaked in velvet) blunt, "Don't know (because despite being friends for years, we don't really know you), don't care (because they're just clones, and despite you having made them, you should just ignore that part that makes you such a good friend).", Rainbow Dash then distracted her with a rather cleverly veiled, "I'm sorry, I can't hear your worries over how awesome me and Twilight are since we know better than you!".

:applejackconfused::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::rainbowhuh::rainbowderp::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::facehoof:

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