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This story is a sequel to For Me, For You


It's been several days since a romantic dinner for two. Showing up at Golden Oaks library, Rarity finally managed a response to Spike's confession.

[Like the previous poem, very free verse form]

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Comments ( 16 )

oh my, I'm so silly with non direct words, lol I didn't get what she meant lol
so will this continue, sir?

wow, this made me smile

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So intense. Please, continue. Reply, Spike. REPLY! Get the mare. GET HER! :duck::heart::moustache:

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Oh my OH MY!!
thankys for explaining... :raritystarry:

ANOTHER!! *spikes mug*

... Well, this was certainly a mystifying and intriguing response...

Very nice choice of artwork (are you "Kris C."?). And please, how long did it take to think out and write down this ? :)

No more talk Kiss her you foal:raritywink::moustache::twilightoops:

Ooooh, this is very much like Rarity here. I am quite impressed. While Spike's words were sincere, I would guess that she would write something like this as a reply to bring him out of his dreaming and fantasies. She wishes for more than sweet words of what he would do and what he wants to do, yet I didn't read a no from her there either. I certainly hope that you continue this so that we can find out if Spike is brave enough to reply to something like this, or if he will simply kiss her instead.

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