This is a collection of stories that I started in a resturant (I was bored, okay?). It centers around Doctor Whooves and his companions Lyra and Bon-Bon. There's also a little Jack Harness thrown in (yes, Jack Harness; not Harkness).
Workers in an dull clothing store, Bon-Bon and Lyra have little to look forward to, until a strange, frazzled stallion pops in and whisks them away in his box called the TARDIS. Whatever happens next just gets out of hand, in the good kind of way. The timey-wimey kind of way.
Chapters (3)
I gotta say, the quality of the writing surprised me. With such short chapters I usually expect, well, you know, but that really caught me off guard.
But the length of the chapters is the problem, a chapter of a story should be at least 1100+ words, as you want to contain a large amount of content. 1000- just feels rushed, which this seems to be.
Who is Jack Harness?
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He's a pony parody of Jack Harkness, a Doctor Who character.
in one of the stories, lyra overhears the doctor mention humans. I would love to see a story that involves the doctor telling lyra all about humans. I also wonder if the doctor will discover that equus is actually the earth in the distant future. this seems to be in the background of a lot of HIE stories, and a lot of lyra stories, as well. in this story, he is travelling with lyra and bonbon. it may mean that the doctor, didn't break into another dimension, but somehow travelled into the far future. it says that he did regenerate, but maybe he just evolved to fit in with the new sentient and dominant species on this new world that he now inhabits.