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BRYAN numba 2


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When working on teleporters, a young man from Russia is sent to Equestria. He must learn there customs and adapt to his new life until he can find a way home. He will become a friend and maybe a little more to some ponies, but is it what he really wants? Does he want to just go home, or will he find true happiness here.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 11 )

Beterov was living in Kazakistan

What the hell is Kazakistan? Did you mean Kazakhstan?

young man from Russia

Mkay. Russia and Kazakhstan are different countries. Are you trying to make a Borat crossover?

Dude. Where are you from? :trixieshiftright:

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I shall very much like to have the seeings of how Kazakh man learns customs of technicolor ponies! Wawa-we-wah!

I give you my like to ward away all the gypsies.

I like!:twilightsmile:

Though, I don't know why the're are so many dislikes:applejackunsure: I mean, for a first fic, this was done very well in my book. However, I would've preferred you explained the emotions and feelings of the main character. Without them, stories like this,(to me) seem very vague...

Also, there were many minor flaws throughout this story... those of which will probably be brought out in comments after this one, you should watch out for these kind of things... it sort've ruins the feels.

Know what I mean?:rainbowhuh:

He moved from Russia to Kazakistan, and I don't know why I missed spelled that :P i dont live any near that area so forgive me XD i just thought it would make a good story. Great feed back and remember, first fic so this Is just a trial. Im also doing this from a really slow iPhone cuz its all i got :( chapter two will be out in a couple of days. Again great feed back! Never thought i would get 45 views in less than a day! Even though i have 11 dislikes, its still all good to me, and thanks a ton for the likes!

God dammit! Stupid iPhone spell check! I misspelled Kazakhstan again! Sorry abou that,

And I am from the states

what is a particle execrator?

Ok, im scrapping this fic for now! May return to it later. Really did have a good story line going

I just liked it but not sure how many other people will. What if you get 19 over say 14 or 15 dislikes?

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Holly shit, its been forever since i checked my comments! Sorry for not answering you for so long. I am probably not going to continue because im righting a new one do CGG. Thanks for the support though.

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