• Member Since 27th Dec, 2011
  • offline last seen Feb 11th, 2023

Dark Lightning


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The weird tale of 2 brothers and their search for a new home. They come across the quiet town of Ponyville, not knowing what to expect, but to make the most out of what happens.

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 1030 )

Well here it is.......I'm bored now, i'm going to write some other thing now....

If your pony look human with fingers and people didn't like them I'm gonna guess they will flip them off. Good so far I'm guessing it was just made for a past time.:moustache:169758

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ACTUALLY, MY PONY IS JUST LIKE ANY OTHER PONY, JUST MORE BADASS AND ME AND MY BRO ARE VERY SIMILAR WITH THE MANE 6, WERE BETTER THAN THEM IN THE STUFF THEY EXCEED IN, SO THEY'RE GOING TO HATE US LATER....

Plz us quoteation marks!!! Hard to tell when some1 is talking...

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SORRY ABOUT THAT......:twilightsheepish:


IN THE BEGINNING I WAS DOING THAT, BUT THEN I GOT LAZY, SORRY.....I'LL EDIT RIGHT NOW SO IT WON'T BE CONFUSING.....

169787 someone needs to work on using caps lock

Interesting...I'll be checking this out.:coolphoto:

Lol:rainbowlaugh: You know how to make someone laugh good work. Hope you survive Like a boss.:rainbowlaugh: Tracking with five stars in the center:pinkiehappy:

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YEAH!!!!!

For you sir:moustache: and all you guys that like my story and give me good feedback:fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/218/b/e/epic_brohoof_by_mixermike622-d45m32o.gif


THANK YOU!!!!!

That was.....:pinkiegasp:.....Awesome!:flutterrage:

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Don't know if you're talking about the story or Epic Bro-Hoof but THANKS A BUNCH!!!!!!!!!!!

The story is good yes but, I'm talking about the epic brohoof you must send me that link or tell me where to find it please:raritystarry:

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I'll do it if I get bored or if you anger me....

I won't do it for NO reason though cause thats just plain bogus

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See....back talk like that is what gets your comments deleted.....:pinkiesad2:

Ice

170454 I never said I didn't like it you just assumed that. So really you've just trolled your own story.

Ice

170465 Your the worst kind of person.

Ice

170476 The fact you use Gifs to illustrate your point loses you three points but the response gives you two so your at -1.

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Well I believe that is so BULLSHIT....my story my rules....

Ice

170494 If that's the case I'll make you a Eunuch in mine.

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Ok,Ok, sorry.....Damn.....don't change me man.....

Ice

170516 Do you even know what that is?

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Yeah, its a.......:rainbowderp:

No.....I don't:ajsleepy:

Ice

170522 It's a guy who has non functioning testicals

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Well now that I know what it is.......DON'T Make ME INTO ONE OF THOSE!!!!1:raritydespair:

Ice

170531 Or to more specific....a guy who has his P**** removed

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:raritycry:

That's even WORSE!!!

Don't make either happen!!!:raritydespair:

Ice

170538 Oh the temptation.

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You know what....I'm tired of us 2 fighting a lot, so let me ask you something, the thing that started this battle....DO....YOU.....LIKE the story or not?

Whichever you chose, whatever.

Ice

170555 I haven't decided yet I'll see where it goes.

Ice

170557 *starts typing* Can't help it

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FUCK!!!!

I'm going to have to force you to not do it.....Wait there I'm going to go get Pinkie Pie to help me break the Seventh Wall so I could get to your house easier.....

Ice

170583 Bitch my house is in the 50th wall

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That's all right then....I'll ask Pinkamina to take me ......she can go through the Invinite Wall.....

da buck did i just read? its a good story but it feels....like you make your OC's seem badass...which they arent...and maybe if you dont delete this comment then i might fix your characters "problam" in my alts stories

:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

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I like how you think, OK, Ill allow you tu make an alternative to my story.....FIX their "PROBLEMS"

and what not....If you're alt-story is any good and it actually amuses me, I'll do something for you.....We'll go on and write the story.....I'M WAITING!!!:flutterrage:



Oh and thanks for the feedback, don't worry, I'll change their attitude in a couple of chapters.....maybe:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

SO MUCH CAPS N CURSES... Anyways, cool story bro four stars from me and I WILL be tracking

this is a good story, i'm hoping to see more :):twilightsmile:

hello, this is a surprisingly good story. i'm hoping for more :):twilightsmile:

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We'll thanks....I'm working on Chapter 3 right now....:pinkiehappy:

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