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On Sweet Apple Acres...

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When they arrived on the Applefarm, they didn't see anypony. They looked around but the Applefarm was empty. What happend?

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Straight Shooter

Straight Shooter #1 · Mar 1st, 2013 · · ·

This is unreadable . The plot sucks , and was progressed to fast ...

kitsuneito

kitsuneito #2 · Mar 1st, 2013 · · ·

sorry, but this was like, walk onto sweet apple acres, die, mourn. YOU DEVELOPED NOTHING!

theroomwiththemoose

theroomwiththemoose #3 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · ·

I think it progressed a little to fast and i also think the other ponies and Pinkie would've made a MUCH bigger deal over pinkie killing anypony
oh, and dont call me stupid but I can't figure out how to post stories....HAVING RAGE