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oh, another on of these.
Joy Stick's joystick is pleased.
And I'm not talking about the videogame controller.
Huh, wasn't expecting to ever see more than one of these. Well, I'd expected to see a couple more fics with Milky Way in them over time, but I hadn't expected to see another HiE about her.
2171427 yeah, well originally I was going to do a street racing story but it failed moderation, then when I was milking a dairy cow I got booted in the head and "Oh snap... I have an idea"
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Well that's one way to get insperation! XD
Did gon be good.
Wait, how many stories are there of Milky Way?
I should sue you for copyright! That's what I had planned on doing to my Master!
2171721 Are you a farm hand or something?
2173060 Yeah I live on a small farm just outside Barrie, but I work on a larger dairy farm. When the cow kicked me in the head I was like 'Oh idea'
2172770 oh... sorry, didn't mean to uhh... ruin your idea
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There aren't enough, and there will never be do you hear me.
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Doncha worry I'm still going to milk him dry!
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Can I get links please?
2173177 This one is one of the only ones I can find, though she has her own tumbler page called life in the milky way or something along those lines. I have to agree that she is a very adaptable character and that she was fun to do a story with
Did you have plans to continue this story or make more stories involving Milky?
Congradulations. This wasn't a bad clop. I loved how you said, it only slid in a few millimeters. I'm American so it sounds scientific and funny to me.
2174484 maybe but I'd have to think about it. I'm not much one to write clop but it's not as disturbing to me as it first was when I wrote Secret Crush
2173087 The cow must have smacked some sense out of/into you.
Not a bad story, I enjoyed it for the most part. Only one complaint and that would be the "I love you's' during the sex. They meet, he milks her, they fuck then suddenly they love each other? Just seems a bit contrived and kinda disturbs the flow of a story for me. That aside it was still a decent read.
you’re utters are full
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"Your udders"
Good story, little fast maybe but good. Only one thing, please, it's (udders) not [utters]
And don't feel to bad about that, you are the second author I've seen do this.
Remember: new speaker, new paragraph. That includes his conscience (which is what I assume you mean - "my conscious" doesn't make much sense). Italics might be good for that, to make it clear that its not someone else, but his inner thoughts. Also udders, but I think someone else also mentioned that. Otherwise not bad.
oh gawd fuck getting kicked in the head the arms etc are bad anough (i work on a 1700 cow farm with 2 sheds 1 rotary and 1 herring bone0
2179775 Yeah really. I'm lucky that I we don't have that many, but fuck it hurts when you kneel down beside them to hook up the suckers and the cow decides it's gonna get jittery and knee you in the fucking eye
Dude i expected clop but instead got hilarity
I went to the first chapter expecting clop but got comedy I came to the second chapter because it was clop
Im sorry that pun was bad I deserve to be punished
*Giggety*
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Hey Spetsnaz i havent seen you since my first story git cancelled im working on yons of new stuff I posted Guardian of Nature and am wtiting Tobuscus in Equestria The Quest for Changeling Dust Noiony wants this and a story I havenr named yet
I'd enjoyed it.
This is how it ends? I was expecting more from this story.
2185603 well I was going to continue it on with a little bit where it turns out Lyra was the one who summoned him to Equestria (Due to her human fetish) but then I looked back to the story Love and Honour and figured that I didn't want to write another collasul book that would never seem to end with random problems that just keep appearing so I ended it with a happy ending with no tragic parts
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Love and Honour was one thing, but since your guy isn't a soldier fighting a war, I'm just saying that the story could have gone a little bit longer(and I don't mean 60 chapters long)
2188385 true... true, but you know I just wanted to screw around with something really quick and when that cow booted me in the head I immediately thought "Guy milking cow and gets booted in head... could make a story of this"
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Same, yo. I live for these moments. Not necessarily clop, mind you, but just any story that hits the ball waaaay out into left field and tricks me .
Well this is different
I like this story.
I'm imagining Bill from L4D but with a scagglier beard, tan cordoroy jacket, stained wife beater, and a tan baseball cap.
"Goddess this is so embarrassing."
who is she, Liara?
"didn't feel the dildo"
AWWW SHYT
not bad, seemed kinda sudden for love but watevs, a good story.
You are my favorite person now.
Um, you mentioned in the first chapter they are only as tall as his belly button, that being the case how he possibly be "small" in comparison? Other than that slight bit of confusion i must say i very much enjoyed it
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With you on that. Maybe more of a cross between Bill and Francis, with a touch of Nick for the added attitude.
Going good so far.
A few spelling errors here and there, confused words, and line spacing/breaking needs work.
What? I'm being honest.
Yes I know that I make mistakes too. But I'm not condeming the writer for them; just mentioning them.
At least you begin' nice, SugaCube.
I try...
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You just described him in my head better than I did
Are you a wizard?
The milk-gasm strikes again!
Happy happy happy.
That Milky is a Spy!
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Pony stallions--though smaller than normal horses--would still have a considerable endowment for their species.
Think of comparing the size of your arm to the average endowment of man. For ponies, a teenage/preteen arm vs same.
loved the story
Not sure how to relay critcism n shit... But where were her "assets" during the sex scene? They were kinda ignored...what it felt like...
hahahaha this story gave me a great laugh. well done sir!