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    Ice's Stories (7)

    • A Cold World
      It's never easy growing up, things like school, a social life etc all come into play....but what if in one sudden moment that's all taken away? This is the story of one little colt and his life.

      3,749 words · 167 views · 20 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Why us? [Redone]
      Okay so this follows Why me? to the letter up until the spell casting which caused the coma.
      21,398 words · 960 views · 23 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Cupcakes: An escape guide.
      All you need to know when a pink pony has you strapped down and has a knife in her hoof
      1,187 words · 2,016 views · 21 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Days of Darkness
      The time of peace is over a dawning of darkness beigns...
      1,067 words · 774 views · 12 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Why us?
      14,653 words · 1,530 views · 23 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Why me?
      16,038 words · 2,570 views · 40 likes · 16 dislikes
    • Macintosh in the ring.
      1,251 words · 243 views · 7 likes · 6 dislikes
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    Okay so this is an alternate timeline to the current Why us? it follows the orginal story but Brice dosen't get put into a coma. This will change how the story works removing his powers and the confusion of the readers.

    First Published
    29th Jan 2012
    Last Modified
    11th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 276 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 72w, 3d ago · · ·
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    good. now i dont have to worry about having something confusing happen in every chapter. so are you just gonna do this one or continue both?

    Ice
    #2 · Chapter 1 · 72w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #3 · Chapter 1 · 72w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>169707 One like this and one for the random

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    sorry, haven't read it yet, but that picture is fantastic. Where did you get it?

    Ice
    #5 · Chapter 2 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>178370 Went hillwalking with a friend forever ago he took this(We went up real early because his dad knew we'd take all day to get up) so he took a picture. Also there is an almost identical picture on google.

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Grand chase...?

    As in Grand Chase grand chase or some other grand chase? :rainbowhuh:

    Anyways, don't force yourself to write. Just don't write, except if you made a promise :twilightsmile:

    Ice
    #7 · Chapter 3 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>186846 Yheah that grand chase....you wanna play me?

    #8 · Chapter 3 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    DUDE WHAT'S GOING ON

    That is exactly what I would have said, lol

    Good job so far Ice!

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I have to re-read this ahahaha

    Ice
    #10 · Chapter 3 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>187244 Not sure if that's a good thing.

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #12 · Chapter 3 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Um someone broke a Pinkie Promise....There are no questions...Only phrases like" Let's get the fuck outta here!" or "We're fucked."

    #13 · Chapter 4 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    TFS wha?

    LOL

    But seriously, what is TFS.

    #14 · Chapter 4 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Bro, if you are Brice, say I

    Also you're going to havta explain what's happening a bit more... Great fic though, i just got a bit confused sorry

    Ice
    #15 · Chapter 4 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>194038 Yheah, I have an amazing track record for confusing people. Also I am Brice but I'm don't like writing in a first person POV.

    #16 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    valentines not valentimes.

    Ice
    #17 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>212863 *begins typing*

    "I'm sorry Mr. Breeze but due to your constant sexual activites....we're going have to remove your testicals." said the doctor.

    "I...but....how.....she.....I.....how...."

    "That sucks....then again Luna never wil*Smash*

    #18 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>212885 god dammit, and i was hoping for kids:applecry:

    Ice
    #19 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>212941 You'll have kids beleive me I'm not missing out on the chance of you being tortured by a pregnant Luna for nine months.

    #20 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>212945 you do realize youve given me permission to use you in my story right? oh the things i could do:pinkiecrazy:

    Ice
    #21 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>212951 Wait me or pony me?

    #22 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>212971 pony, but its still you. i just dont feel like putting humans in my story

    Ice
    #23 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>212978 Fair enough...am I getting shipped?

    #24 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>212981 possibly. i do have an idea of who to you with, but am still thinking of how youre going be put in the story

    Ice
    #25 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>212985 ...I'm gonna go read....six chapters...of a story....that....is totaly not yours.

    #26 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh shit.....Sounds like Celestia is alittle(read SUPEREXTREMELYMEGAULTRAAWESOMELY) pissed at the guys.....

    Ice
    #27 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>214463 Yheah, well she can suck it 'cause I look like Goku.

    #28 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>214465

    But can you fight like Goku....this skill seems like a necessity with the way looked at you guys

    Ice
    #29 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>214477 I took out three royal guards first day in, I think I cam handle a *spoilers*

    #30 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ok...But it's not the guards you gotta worry about....It's Celestia.

    Ice
    #31 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>214493 Knocked her out when Trixie did that stunt with the mares.

    #32 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh riight......Wait Why'd you knock out.....crap time for a little backtracking

    (Don't tell me. It'll spoil te suprise)

    Ice
    #33 · Chapter 5 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>214600 Found out yet?

    #34 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Douchbag Graze......

    #35 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh and like I said in you blog....FUCK YEAH I AIN'T FIGHTNING ANY BITCH!!!!!!!!

    #36 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    so i guess the incident with brice thinking he saw ice because of discord never happened in this timeline?

    #37 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >> I see everywhere you go :trollestia:

    Ice
    #38 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217188 Yheah, I'm also doing the whole muiltiverse thing which means....there's two grazes and Ice is Brice sort of just the pony version of him.

    Ice
    #39 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #40 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217194 Lol, Dark

    Ice
    #41 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217195 XD you seen who your fighting?

    #42 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217197 Diamond dog :rainbowlaugh:

    Ice
    #43 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217205 who can go super sayian:pinkiecrazy:

    #44 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217195: SHUT UP!!!

    I have to go against 2 blood Dragons.....Turns out they can control ALL the elements.....Im screwed:ajsleepy:

    #45 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217220 you and I should team up... and if they control all elements, that means their powers are split up into sections to be equal among the elements... tis a fact

    Ice
    #46 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217220 I have to against pony me.......the universe won't survive.

    #47 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217222: Indeed:moustache:

    >>217224: HOLY SHIT!!!!!!

    #48 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217224 dont go blowing up the universe yet, hot shot. this is only the preliminaries

    Ice
    #49 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>217275 Yheah well I'm gonna post fight one tonight.....who's fight? Dark vs the twins.

    #50 · Chapter 3 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    ok this proves just how bad breaking a pinkie promise is. she followed you THROUGH dimensions.

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