• Member Since 9th Aug, 2012
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Cruz Oscar


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Equestria is home to many magical wonders, and thanks to their great rulers and their friends, peace and Harmony have prevailed, however their are heroes whose stories haven't been told. These are the tales of the unsung heroes, who protect the world from the shadows.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 3 )

There are a lot of grammatical and diction errors. (Ponyville not Ponivill, seen not scene) The quality of your writing changes throughout too, going from well written to very sloppy.

I would really like to reread this after you edit it since it got deleted and you had to salvage it.

Sorry about that, Just wanted to leave it here where it can he preserved better. I originally had a few chapters planned out so going back to square one its a chalenge:fluttercry::fluttercry:
In the mean time please keep pointing my flaws, Ill need all the help I can get.

Nice idea with the story.

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