The sequel to Paging The Doctor : A year had past since the Doctor Departed with Ditzy, Sparkler, and Dinky Doo. The Time-pony The Shield has not been seen in the same amount of time as he was dispatched on a mission by the Princess Celestia to familiarize himself with the world he now called home. Twilight Sparkle had become quite bored with the fact that after both of the Time-Ponies had left the excitement seemed to fade with them. A week before her birthday she hears a rumor of a Crimson Knight who wields a blade of light with a small plush of her attached to it's hilt. Apparently from the rumor he would arrive in Ponyville on her birthday, she had hoped this was the sign she needed to break free of her boredom. When the Crimson Knight arrives in Ponyville, Twilight will learn a valuable lesson. Be careful what you wish for. (There may be some more explicit than teen rated stuff in this story but it will be contained in a format that will make it unimportant to the plot. You can thank the writers Crowley and Coal Buck for teaching me if there is a mature section of a story it should be handled in a manner that makes it perfectly fine to skip it.)
FINISH EET
THEES NEEDS TO BE FEENESHED!
did you get the fluttershy in heat insanity from a fic called beating the heat by any chance?
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Indeed my friend and for your information I took a weekend off from Tumblr to see if I could do just that. Get some writing done. So hopefully I'll have at least a chapter or two to show for it.
there is no z in Allon-sy. just an s
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Alright sorry I've never seen it written. Give me a break I'm dyslexic.
EXTERMINATE
TARGET: CAMILO
THREAT LEVEL: MINIMUL
SOLUTION: PURE EXTERMINATION!!!
391567 it's okay dude. lots of people get it wrong. I'm just one of those Whovians who can't stand grammar mistakes. please forgive me and you will get a cookie. :D
394490
I would like that cookie. Cookies are cool. So I forgive you.
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Right then... *Pulls out a glowing green sword.* Bring it on Pepper Shaker.
395806 yay forgiveness. For giving forgiveness you win a free internet. Just don't use it all in one place. :D
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*Holds up the internet and the cookie.* I have no clue what this is but, kickass! I got a cookie. *Om nom nom the cookie.*
396237 lawl. BTW I'm using my 3ds to view stories because I am banned from my computer. My stupid grandma should've destroyed my interwebs connections to truly hurt me. BWAHAHAHAHA!
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A question for you sir. Might I inquire as to if you have a suggestion for where the sequel to this story takes place?
396512 Barsalona. Not the city, the planet. :D
JK. How about the Medusa Cascade?
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Would that location still be available? I mean in my stories canon both the normal and equestrian universes have merged together. Which explains the now Bipedal shape of the Pony folk.
396790 That location would still be viable, but I've never actually seen it in Doctor Who canon, so you would probably have to use a fanon version of it. Hope that helps. :)
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It does indeed my friend.
397038 Awesome
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If you think that's awesome I've just posted the preview chapter for the next story. Which will have the link once it goes up.
397402 You sir deserve a hug and a brohoof. Sadly I can only supply the brohoof /).
Are you going to include the Master in your new story, because the Master is amazingly awesome.
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Who do you think would help the Pirates against a pissed off Keyblader, The Doctor, And Jean Starwind? If you said god your way to damn religious.
You used the Medusa Cascade idea. 1000+ internets for you and another brohoof! /)
397442 It would obviously be an entity that is a fixed point in time that goes by the name of Captain Jack Harkness. :D
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Well I did make some changes to it because I can't recall if he's ever been there in the series before the continuation with the 9th doctor which brought our favorite Time Lord back into the eyes of everybody. So I made it into a Dimensional Maze style place. Because of the fact that two separate universes collided and combined has led to spots where there are now hundreds of alternate universes pressed together. These are Dimensional Mazes.
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I think he's a good guy though... So I'll use him in this story but, he's gonna be chilling with the Doctor, while Leo rides shotgun on the Outlaw Star.
397466 That would make perfwct sense in the Whoniverse and in our universe if it collided with another. And also, does a certain fixed point in time that would do anything with a pulse somehow make his way into your story?
397473 awesome
sorry my 3ds is a bit slow when it comes to letting me comment on stuff
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Sorry but the Doctor is giving me that your spoiling the fun look. Talk to you later buddy.
397502 but is Captain Jack going to be in the story?
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Yes... and that's pretty much all I can say at this point. The Master will be too but, might not be in this section. Mind you that all of the Doctor Who/MLP Stories I've written are a series. I'll set up a Blog that I'll edit that keeps track of the names and order along with major characters.
397502 *GIANT GASP* If I had any internets left I would give them to you even though I already gave you all mynother internets.
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Here's a question for you friend. Do you think Leon will meet Captain Jack before or after reuniting with the rest of his friends? I was thinking that Jack would show up because of the fact that he's giving off energy like the TARDIS does and yes I will explain why in the story. Let's just say that our boy Leo has some really big secrets.
397604 I thonk Jack would probably show up after the reunion and promptly have a Captain Jack Harkness death and back to life thing where the Doctor explains what's up with him to the others.
And you consider me your friend?
yay
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I thought so too but, then I had a moment of brilliance. How about Leon finding him and then Jack gets shot during the reunion Leon becomes enraged by the Pirates and shows off something that I'll have the doctor hint at in the first chapter. Which I think I'll get writing.
On another note. I consider everyone my friend at first. Only if you prove yourself unworthy of that title will you lose it. This happens to be one of Leon's defining traits as well. So...images.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw1347_To2nl.jpg
397657 that would be cool.
on another note, if that giant space is an image, I can't see it because of the crappy capabilities of my 3ds's crappy internet
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Oh right sorry... But then again when you can use your computer you'll appreciate that picture. Well then I need to get some sleep before I write my next stories opening chapter cya.
397692 bye
395813 EXTERMINATE EXTERMINATE EXTERMINATE!!!!
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*Swings sword chopping off the eyestalk.* Oh sorry did you need that?
399348
STATEMENT: MERCY
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Hahaha... no. *Sets the body's interior on fire with pyrokinesis.* "Oh how does your line go? EXTERMINATE!"
402736 MERCY MERCY MERCY!!!!
*casing explodes*
You...cant destroy...the Daleks...Davros the creator will make more! Hehehehaha! *Explodes*
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Well I can try. *He says as he spits on the destroyed casing.*
403184 The end?
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You know as much about time travel as I do friend. It's never the end. Only intermission.
403867 well of coarse i know about time travel...I've traveled with him