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Sectus
I am a fanfiction writer, mainly based off of the website newgrounds.com. I hope you will enjoy my work as much as I do writing it.
Sectus
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FIRST!
Great so far!
2154547 Glad to see you like chapter one! I'm currently working on chapter two. I'm hoping that this will be one of my better, and more popular pieces.
Fuck da po-lice!
This story has been reviewed by the Equestrian Critics Society
Title: Assertion
Author: Sectus
Reviewed by: Quillbit Marelor
Murder mystery fanfics haven’t exactly been very prevalent in this fandom and there are few that are actually spoken of or remembered. The reason behind this is that, with this fandom being what it is, reading a story that might possibly kill off a pony very dear to the reader might not come off as very appealing. While some may be completely apathetic to the ordeal, it still runs the risk of being cast in a negative light. However, when used correctly, murder mysteries can provide an audience with a gripping tale with plenty of twists and turns that will keep them on the edge of their seats. On the other hand, a writer must be careful when creating a story such as this, seeing as when it begins to spiral, it has the potential to leave readers unsatisfied and overall disappointed in what they have been given. Sectus’ story, “Assertion”, may be able to instill suspense into its readers, but holds some flaws that may cause some readers to turn in the other direction.
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Score: 6.5/10
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Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked what I have at least a little. Hopefully I can raise your opinion with upcoming chapters!