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Master Lyra


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MOAR!

This is new and exciting. I can honestly say I eagerly await the next chapter.:pinkiehappy:

Now this... this is a strange tale. A strange tale, but an interesting one all the same! I think I shall be tracking, friend.

Whoa, I can tell this will be interesting! :pinkiesmile:

I want moar of this.
Can't wait to see this explained!
:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:

Oh my, this looks like such an interesting concept. I eagerly await to read more.

Whoa, nelly!
I go to sleep and then wake up to find people actually like it!:yay:
I thank everyone who tracked/commented so far, encouragement always helps!
Now, then. Think of the first chapter being like the prologue to this story. I plan to take the actual story a totally different direction, so keep that in mind.
As for the next chapter- I may have it done by Wednesday.
I await your return.
Peace out~

Interesting...

Never seen anything done like this before. I assume there will be audio clips, text logs, and maybe pictures? (just described of course)
Anyway, liked it and tracked :pinkiehappy:

What country is this supposed to be anyway? Can't really tell.

But good story!

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In all honesty, I have no idea if I'm going to do something like that.
Reason being I have a little mini story that's going to take place now. In this mini story I probably won't use that stuff, but hey; who knows? <--(INSPIRATION)

My... this is interesting.

I'm really liking the unconventional method in which you've chosen to tell this tale!

Well, there you have it folks. I had a couple ideas I was going to go with this one, but this is the end result. The rest of the story may be like this; mini stories, or it may become a large story. I don't know, but I hope you like it no matter the turn it takes.
Anyway, I hope you like the chapter, and remember to rate/comment/criticize! :pinkiehappy:
Peace~

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HOLY MOLY, YOU BEAT THE AUTHOR :rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

enjoying this :D

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You mean a bunch of mini-stories that slowly progress the plot, and have connections to each other, right?
Maybe later on you could show how they relate, and have them crossover...

one more thing:

MOOOOAAAAAAAAR

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Pretty much what I had in mind, my friend. WAYTOSPOILEVERYTHINGEVERDUDE
:moustache:

Okay, sorry for the pause, I will have the next chapter done by Wednesday or sooner.

I enjoy this. The style of writing is unique and I don't think I've ever read a fiction written in such a way before. Even better, the plot seems to be very intriguing. I can't wait for the next installment and great work on an interesting and original story.

Thank you for reading the chapter. Hope you enjoyed it! Here are the translations:
ja- yes
Johan- John (German adaptation)
scheisse- shit
fick- fuck
es- it
Dieses- these (it works how it's used, okay?)
Aufweidersehen- Goodbye (Of next seeing)
der Welt- the World
und- and
ist- is
Yes, I do speak German, but I am American. I just lived there.:pinkiehappy:

Remember to rate/comment/criticize/review!

SOMEWHAT FIRST!!!! Wow, cool story bro, keep them coming.:yay::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

This is great! The way the story is told is really unique. Got me gripped.

Small note though-I think you're missing some of the colons and instead hitting semi colons for the computer prompts.

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Ahem. After going through the whole story, I found that I did that a grand total of *shuffles papers*
Once in the first chapter. That's pretty good considering how many there are.
So no, this is not really a problem. Although you did notice one I failed to see...
Glad you liked it.:pinkiehappy:

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Oh I will, I wiiiiiiillllllllllll.

Ally joking aside, the new chapter will probably be posted by Saturday-now you have 2 things to look forward to!
If anyone was wondering how I make these chapters, I use the first day to think of something to write of. The second day all I do is write at school on paper. The third day I see how far I can get with writing it and type all of it up, including the stuff I didn't finish at school.
Well there you go. Peace~

This is getting interesting.

Needs more german.:twistnerd:

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Do you speak German? Order magst du Deutch? Ich mag Deutch auch. :moustache:
Also, your avatar is scary! It reminds me too much of the story "Balloons":fluttershbad:

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Uhh, no comprende.:rainbowlaugh:

I just like how you wrote the german accent.:twilightsheepish:
That was german, right?

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*sniff* You got me all excited...:ajsleepy:
Yes, it is a German accent. Though it could be a Switz or Austrian accent...:coolphoto:

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Sorry, I dont even know spanish.:derpytongue2:

About your comment on my avatar ... I can show you sooo much wooorrrssseeee...

Ich kann Deutsch sprechen (a tiny bit)
I did German in year 7 and 8, but that's about it

Ich heiße Zack. Wie Heißt du?
Ich speile gern tennis.
Ich wohne in Australia.

I know more, but that's the some of the major stuff.
That's all correct, right? As I said, did it the past 2 years as a compulsory subject, but have stopped it now.

202095
I can get the second bit: "I do German also", right?
I think it was "Do you do German?" Not to sure what the "Order" was though... I think it might be "or"... can't remember.
As I said, I've done very basic German, nothing more.

this is creeping me the hell out...

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Not sure what to say to that. I'll put you down for a mixed review...

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Well... you got all of it correct except for the "mag" Mag is like.
Otherwise, spot on.

I really enjoy the unique way that this story is told and how it somehow still advances the plot. I wonder what will happen with Discord and the Mane Six + Celestia when they meet up again. It would be awesome of the one who got turned into Discord was the only one capable of using magic because I really can't imagine him without his reality shattering powers.

Anyway, I really enjoy this. Kudos.:derpytongue2:

Sorry this was a little late! I hope you enjoy this nonetheless. As always, rate/comment/criticize!
MisterFluttershy~

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This story is epic, no its incredibly interesting, NO! ITS! ADDICTING! I just can't get enough of it I am actually curious how all this plays out and who is actually using the terminal is it me (being the reader/watcher and all)? Is it some other guy who is using it? Or is a unicorn using magic to press the buttons to view all these videos. But I swear to god if it is a unicorn using the terminal I will flip my shit while flipping every bucking table in this comment area! :twilightangry2:

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Glad you like it!:twilightsmile: Also, cookie to first picture post. *throws cookie*

To everypony else: this stoy is going on a hiatus while I write for the Febuary Write Off. I'm sorry that I am putting it on hold only 3 chapters after my writers block, but duty calls! Wish me luck! (the prompts are so bucking hard DX)

Also, if anyone wants to make some cover art for this story, it would be greatly appreciated! ( god I hate begging)

I'm wondering, do you guys think I should submit this to Equestria Daily? I'm not so sure myself...

So, the ponies were once human, and now think that they're on a quest from Celestia to purify the world?

God, this is getting weird. Please tell me all will be answered when this is over.

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Wellllllllllllllll…
I'll probably leave a few blanks in-between.
:trollestia:

you probably thought that was a real pony

nope, mad scientist

also, pinkie pie is best pony

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I thought I already established that in he beginning...
Oh well. :moustache:

219712
Wait.
I just looked at your comment again.
Pinkie Pie?
...
(>~,~)> |) ---> clap2times

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It was a joke... I knew that, I just thought of the chuck testa joke... I should make my joke more obvious

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I used to think Pinkie Pie was best pony, then I took an arrow to the c
actually I still think Pinkie Pie is best pony

GETTING A PINKIE SHIRT!!! FUCK YEAH!!!!!

Also, with your avatar I always think your angry no matter what you say

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If you have enough balls to wear a pony T-shirt to school/college/work whatever, then you sir have balls of steel. All the more power to you man.
Do you like my avatar then? Well, do ya? I SAID DO YA?!:flutterrage: ERBRHRBRHRBH *dies of heart attack*

Yet another interesting chapter to one of the more unique stories I've seen on this site.

Great writing as always. Kudos. :moustache:

ps. Good luck with the write off.

Well, there it is. Don't rage too hard, keep it somewhat peaceful. :twilightsheepish:
Sorry about the long wait, the Write Off took up a lot of my time. Hope you enjoy the chapter nonetheless!
Remember to thumb up/down, and comment/criticize!

*cough* Post anytime you want chapter. [sarcastic] I've got alllllllll day.
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Applejack: Ah hate ta say Ah told ya so... but Ah told ya so!

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