The mane six have descovered a new species known as a human. But this human has a dark past and has brought a great evil to equestria. Can the mane six uncover their new friends past, and can he defeat his enemy.
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Emeris Moonglade
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FIRST!
Well well well, i see something nice is coming and developing! Keep up, i'll be happy to read next part!
Off to a promising start. I like how you didn't infodump on us all at once.
Well thank. It does happen to be my first. Happy to know I have fans on the first day. If you have any questions I'll get to them as soon as I can.
Not bad, Id like to see where this goes.
Awsome dude cant wait for next update
Great Chapter Man! Cheers
Oh yeah... s**** getting real!
"Alright, there are some errors I would like to point out:
"bake the same mistake twice." That one should be obvious
“Your one strange creature.” Your, should be You're
“Common. You’re not afraid are you?” Common should be C'mon
There are a few more, but they aren't that big of a deal. Other than those, I really like the direction this story is headed. Very rarley is there a nice post-apocolyptic HIE story, but this one is pretty good.
300250 Thanks. I appreciate the criticism. Hope there are more fans out there that can point out some more.
First! dunno why just first.
this good cant wait for next update
Keep up the good work my friend
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............Then everypony was scared for life and commited suicide the end
im lovin this story keep it up
Simply awsome keep it up
AWSOME is the word i would use to describe this story
This story is really great.It has adventure,a good plot,and even hints at romance.All in all a great work of fiction.Although I would have liked it to be a bit more lengthy.And a few more details and character interactions.But I suppose I should just be grateful there's a sequel.:) I give this story a thumbs up.
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Thanks. Quite honestly I didn't think I did too great of a job at the romance part. And the sequel is because a sort of did end it a bit too soon. So A New Beginning 2 is to wrap all that up. I also might have a plot for the third one as well.
this is awsome cant wait to read next installment