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After realising that Scootaloo has never been to Cloudsdale, Rainbow takes the filly to the citadel of the pegasi, much to Scootaloo's excitement.

A short sketch for Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo; gentle friendshipping.

Update:  It was translated into French!  Have a link: Scootaloo à Cloudsdale

Update 2: And then it was translated into Russian! Wow! Скуталу в Клаудсдейле

First Published
27th Jan 2012
Last Modified
28th Jan 2012
#1 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

And the story goes from good to very good!  The extra descriptions of Cloudsdale really helped.

#2 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

They should make an episode of this! It would be really good. Awesome story BTW! RD AND SCOOT 4EVAH.  :trollestia:

#3 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

A success in inconsequential, pleasant writing if I've ever seen one. Very sweet little story you have here.

#4 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW:rainbowkiss:

So cute

Very nice Story. I see you going far my friend:raritystarry:

#5 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

This was a fun read! Nothing at all wrong with short stories, I've read some amazingly engaging fics coming in at 4k words or less.

#6 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

Excellent story, just made me smile!

Oh, yeah, SCOOTABOOM FTW :scootangel:

#7 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

>>163824 That is exactly what I was aiming for - thanks very much!:rainbowkiss:

#8 · 151w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Makes you wonder where Scootaloo's parents are and why they didn't bring her to Cloudsdale... Oh well, Scootalove! I really like Scootaloo, best CMC in my opinion. The descriptions were pretty detailed, and I could totally imagine the story. Congrats! :pinkiesmile:

#9 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

See, that's more like how I enjoy seeing Rainbow and Scoots....well, outside Rainbow stories where she adopts Scootaloo and such. XD

#10 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

Nice fic!:yay:

#11 · 151w, 2d ago · · ·

This is a perfect little heartwarming story.  I always like Scootalove, and this is great.  I like the way you detailed Cloudsdale, and the relationship between Scoots and Rainbow is really nice here.

#12 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

>>163785 That would be an awesome episode!

#13 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

This story was amazing! A nice heartwarming relationship between Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash, sort of like sisterly love. Loved it.

#14 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

This story was nice :D

it made me feel happy inside :D

:scootangel:

#15 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

This story is made of awesome. :scootangel: It really could be an episode.

However..."but the truth was she had never been high before." say what? :rainbowwild:

#16 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

:scootangel: Thank you for the scootalove fic :3

#17 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

Awesome.  I was totally waiting for the moment when Scootaloo touches down on the clouds for the first time.  What will she do?

She rolls around on them and revels in it!  Such a natural reaction.  I laughed so hard at that my eyes were watering. :rainbowlaugh:  Nice job!  :)

#18 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

This was adorable. I liked your depiction of cloudsdale, it was really fun trying to imagine it. I loved how we got to see Rainbow Dash's more generous/patient/sweet side. They definitely need to make an episode with these two.

#19 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

this needs to be an episode :scootangel::rainbowwild:

#20 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

Spread the Scootalove! :scootangel::rainbowkiss:

#21 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

Scootaverb. :scootangel:

#22 · 151w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

pet peeve:

There are over ten million snowflakes in a single cubic FOOT of snow. I can see 'em designing new snowflakes and using clouds to crank out the rest, but hoof-designing each and every single one---for even a single winter?

#23 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

I loved every part of this story. :pinkiehappy:

#24 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

That was absolutely adorable. Scootalove is bestalove.

#25 · 151w, 1d ago · · ·

This is adorable! I love the way that Scootaloo's enthusiasm rubs off on Rainbow Dash in what would otherwise be a routine trip to Cloudsdale.

#26 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

Awesome story, I really enjoyed it! :D

#27 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

What is it with me reading other people's stories, and then they get featured on EqD in the next couple of days? I'm cool with being hipster, but I've read my fanfic well over 50 times! Y U NO GIVE RECOGNITION?

But anyway, nice story. 5 stars.

#28 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

D'aww, how sweet. :twilightsmile: Granted, not much really happens, but nevertheless it was a really simple, short and sweet story, very enjoyable slice of life tale. I especially liked the descriptions of Cloudsdale - I had never actually considered the evaporative properties of clouds in that regard, so including the explanation for how Cloudsdale drifts over the river was an excellent addition.

#29 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

:raritystarry: Beware! I am watching you! :raritystarry:

#30 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

Good story. <3 4 stars. But, I believe it's The Cloudasium, not Cloud Stadium.

#31 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

Great read! Loved it!

#32 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

Good story. I enjoyed some of the detail of Cloudales.

#33 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

Wonderfully written, despite its short duration. I would love to read more of your stories :twilightsmile:

#34 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

:pinkiegasp: >mfw EQD feature gets me 3,000 more views

Thanks everyone for rating and commenting!  I'm delighted people like it so much; when I wrote it I never thought it would do so well.  Every comment makes me feel warm and happy. :scootangel::twilightsmile:

#35 · 150w, 6d ago · · ·

A simple but cute story. I liked it.

#36 · 150w, 5d ago · · ·

Friendshipping is best shipping! :yay:

#37 · 150w, 5d ago · · ·

A few extra commas would do you some good, and there were a few places where the order of words were out of place, but other than that, this was really good and really sweet. Thank you for writing it. :)

#38 · 150w, 5d ago · · ·

Dawww, such a cute story.

#39 · 150w, 5d ago · · ·

I loved it!  Very well writen and easy to follow, with a decent amount of d'aawww to end it :D

#40 · 150w, 5d ago · · ·

D'awwww, that was a very adorable story!

#41 · 150w, 5d ago · · ·

Pony hugs!:scootangel:

...make me jealous...:rainbowderp:

#42 · 150w, 4d ago · · ·

I liked it!  Very nice, lighthearted, conflict-free story.  Not many authors can pull something like that off while still keeping it interesting, but you certainly did.  5 stars!

#43 · 150w, 4d ago · · ·

All my stars. Take them.

#44 · 150w, 4d ago · · ·

Really great story! I especially liked all these details about Cloudsdale, you have definitely thought it through to make it sound believable. I'd surely like to read more about this city :):rainbowkiss::scootangel:

Also, for maximum epicness, read the description of Cloudsdale listening to "Laputa: Catsle in the sky" main theme.

#45 · 150w, 2d ago · · ·

Short but sweet this story put a smile on my face,

#46 · 150w, 1d ago · · ·

Such a delightful story. It's good to read these every now and again, and I left it with a warm feeling in my stomach. :D

#48 · 149w, 2d ago · · ·

Sweet Celestia, it really looks like the episode scenario ! Good work!:rainbowdetermined2:

#49 · 148w, 6d ago · · ·

Man, this made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.  Scootaloo spending a day with her idol in a place she could only dream about.

#50 · 148w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

Pretty Good Story different from what I'm use to reading. Most of the time I like reading dark and sad stories but I'm glad I can enjoy a plane simple story. Thanks for the great read.:pinkiehappy:

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