And the story goes from good to very good!  The extra descriptions of Cloudsdale really helped.

They should make an episode of this! It would be really good. Awesome story BTW! RD AND SCOOT 4EVAH.  

A success in inconsequential, pleasant writing if I've ever seen one. Very sweet little story you have here.

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW

So cute

Very nice Story. I see you going far my friend

This was a fun read! Nothing at all wrong with short stories, I've read some amazingly engaging fics coming in at 4k words or less.

Excellent story, just made me smile!

Oh, yeah, SCOOTABOOM FTW

>>163824163824 That is exactly what I was aiming for - thanks very much!

Makes you wonder where Scootaloo's parents are and why they didn't bring her to Cloudsdale... Oh well, Scootalove! I really like Scootaloo, best CMC in my opinion. The descriptions were pretty detailed, and I could totally imagine the story. Congrats!

See, that's more like how I enjoy seeing Rainbow and Scoots....well, outside Rainbow stories where she adopts Scootaloo and such. XD

Nice fic!

This is a perfect little heartwarming story.  I always like Scootalove, and this is great.  I like the way you detailed Cloudsdale, and the relationship between Scoots and Rainbow is really nice here.

>>163785163785 That would be an awesome episode!

This story was amazing! A nice heartwarming relationship between Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash, sort of like sisterly love. Loved it.

This story was nice :D

it made me feel happy inside :D

This story is made of awesome. It really could be an episode.

However..."but the truth was she had never been high before." say what?

Thank you for the scootalove fic :3

Awesome.  I was totally waiting for the moment when Scootaloo touches down on the clouds for the first time.  What will she do?

She rolls around on them and revels in it!  Such a natural reaction.  I laughed so hard at that my eyes were watering.   Nice job!  :)

This was adorable. I liked your depiction of cloudsdale, it was really fun trying to imagine it. I loved how we got to see Rainbow Dash's more generous/patient/sweet side. They definitely need to make an episode with these two.

this needs to be an episode

Spread the Scootalove!

Scootaverb.

pet peeve:

There are over ten million snowflakes in a single cubic FOOT of snow. I can see 'em designing new snowflakes and using clouds to crank out the rest, but hoof-designing each and every single one---for even a single winter?

I loved every part of this story.

That was absolutely adorable. Scootalove is bestalove.

This is adorable! I love the way that Scootaloo's enthusiasm rubs off on Rainbow Dash in what would otherwise be a routine trip to Cloudsdale.

Awesome story, I really enjoyed it! :D

What is it with me reading other people's stories, and then they get featured on EqD in the next couple of days? I'm cool with being hipster, but I've read my fanfic well over 50 times! Y U NO GIVE RECOGNITION?

But anyway, nice story. 5 stars.

D'aww, how sweet. Granted, not much really happens, but nevertheless it was a really simple, short and sweet story, very enjoyable slice of life tale. I especially liked the descriptions of Cloudsdale - I had never actually considered the evaporative properties of clouds in that regard, so including the explanation for how Cloudsdale drifts over the river was an excellent addition.

Beware! I am watching you!

Good story. <3 4 stars. But, I believe it's The Cloudasium, not Cloud Stadium.

Great read! Loved it!

Good story. I enjoyed some of the detail of Cloudales.

Wonderfully written, despite its short duration. I would love to read more of your stories

>mfw EQD feature gets me 3,000 more views

Thanks everyone for rating and commenting!  I'm delighted people like it so much; when I wrote it I never thought it would do so well.  Every comment makes me feel warm and happy.

A simple but cute story. I liked it.

Friendshipping is best shipping!

A few extra commas would do you some good, and there were a few places where the order of words were out of place, but other than that, this was really good and really sweet. Thank you for writing it. :)

Dawww, such a cute story.

I loved it!  Very well writen and easy to follow, with a decent amount of d'aawww to end it :D

D'awwww, that was a very adorable story!

Pony hugs!

...make me jealous...

I liked it!  Very nice, lighthearted, conflict-free story.  Not many authors can pull something like that off while still keeping it interesting, but you certainly did.  5 stars!

All my stars. Take them.

Really great story! I especially liked all these details about Cloudsdale, you have definitely thought it through to make it sound believable. I'd surely like to read more about this city :)

Also, for maximum epicness, read the description of Cloudsdale listening to "Laputa: Catsle in the sky" main theme.

Short but sweet this story put a smile on my face,

Such a delightful story. It's good to read these every now and again, and I left it with a warm feeling in my stomach. :D

>>166045166045

Exactly what I was thinking.

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But amazing story nonetheless.

Sweet Celestia, it really looks like the episode scenario ! Good work!

Man, this made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.  Scootaloo spending a day with her idol in a place she could only dream about.

Pretty Good Story different from what I'm use to reading. Most of the time I like reading dark and sad stories but I'm glad I can enjoy a plane simple story. Thanks for the great read.

Nice story, short and sweet.

Adorable. Especially the descriptions of Scootaloo's first time on a cloud.

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great story man i could picture it like it was an actual episode. i want to see more from you :P

Sweet Celestia, do I love the Scootaloo/Rainbow Dash interactions. Especially after reading Mothers.

+150 Internets

Amazingly sweet story. It's very in character with Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash, and it's so adorable I had to hug my Dash doll in the middle of it. I can see why Scootaloo loves Dash so much. She's like the perfect big sister

As for the writing style: Not the best, but did what it should and very efficiently at that. Though I like my writing to be something that drags me in and glues my eyes to my screen, for a feel-good story such as this one it's just fine. Only a few grammar mistakes too And I gotta admit: It was very imagery. Especially the description of Rainbow Dash's dream at the beginning had me believe I was watching an actual episode.

So all in all: Loved it. It gave me just the right feelings, much Scootalove and nicely performed, though the writing could have been a little more catchy

Excellent story .

I always love reading Rainbow Dash/Scootaloo storys and this is one of the best ones I've seen.

This needs to be an episode, or at least RD helping Scootaloo to fly. Definitely made the right emotions come forward. Have some more internets/moustaches:

Scootalove is best love

A LOT simpler than what I was expecting, but good nonetheless.

>>534637534637 Leonardo Da Vinci: "Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication".

>>534790534790 Good point there.

Haha, I'm months and months behind on my "to-read" list and I'm glad I got to this one (eventually). I think it's a good reminder that words can paint a picture and show us a moment in time, without the need for a traditional plot or conflict.

It's good stuff.

D'aww.

A short, to-the-point, sweet story that is very nicely done.

All the feels are here and it makes me smile.

I suppose, in a very real sense, for a Pegasus, going to Cloudsdale is going Home.

Nice little story. You should think of a way to expand it.

This was a nice little friendshipping story.  I really liked it.

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

This may be the sweetest Scootalove fic I've ever read.  Not too dramatic or anything, just a pleasant, heartwarming story.  I love it!

I like this one even though it's mostly plotless. A quite pleasant read. Go Scootaloo!

>>176373176373 You know, this is a true story, but no story dosen't have a conflict. Yet this is conflict free. What would my ELA teacher say about it...

BEST STORY EVAR! I'm jelly of scoot's. She is younger than me and SHE get's to walk on clouds. If I could I would jump at the first chance to.

Bless my stars, it's been translated into Russian too. Thanks Akvinikym!

http://tabun.everypony.ru/blog/translations/61259.html