Did this one for fun on a whim. Really I just wanted to see if I could...and I did .

If only this could be a comic like the original V for Vendetta.

V for vendetta... YES YES YES, oh YES! You have good taste sir.

Take my stars, just take them!

awesome chapter i find this mare do well to be as interesting as V was in the movie

That was boss bro, never even seen V for Vendetta and you've got me interested. 5 for you, taken them and run to the sunset,

I imagined all of Mare-Do-Well's lines in Pinkies voice. And because of that, you get five stars.

I just read all of that in V's voice. It was glorious.

Sometimes I worry something is wrong with me, other times I am sure not enough things are wrong with me.

Awesome.  For some reason, I imagined Rarity speaking Mare-Do-Well's lines, and it just seemed to fit perfectly.

Some has to voice this...

>>162224162224

If you've really never seen V for Vendetta than you need to. Stop reading fanfics and watch it right now. It's a fantastic movie.

You sir, have earned 5 stars without me even reading it yet! It's V, how could he not?

And now that I've read it, you are more than deserving of those stars. Bravo, good sir! Bravo!

Also, why was I hearing that in V's voice?

Damn, she sounds like Trixie and I love it. Good story, awesome start, please write more. Magnificent!

>>163564163564

I was actually planning on this thing being a one-shot. I really just wanted to do the intro with all the alliteration and such. But if I get enough positive feedback I might continue this, though I have no idea where to go with it   

>>163666163666

You can always go with "Tyrant Celestia" routine (or more jovious and funny "Troll Celestia who irks everypony" and rebels who just want to leave without getting pranked 24\7).

>>162484162484 Never mind the film, read the Alan Moore comic it was based on.

>>166731166731

But the scene I'm parodying isn't in the comic.

>>167154167154 Well, technically it was, but the dialogue was a lot different. But really it was just me pointing out that everyone seems to ignore the comic in favour of the film.

Mare-Do-Well as V?

I approve. Solid four stars, and I have to say well done with her alliteration.

...only four stars

TOO MANY WORDS THAT START WITH 'M'!

>>187731187731

did you not see V for Vendetta? thats kind of the point.

Man, Mysterious Mare-do-Well, must masked marauders meander, manipulate, and mold my mother-tongue merely to make me mark a message?

MY MIND!!!!

Enjoyed. Some grammatical mistakes here and there (that I would gladly fix), but not bad.

FAV FOR YOU!

Huh. Rose some how actually comes across as more sane here than when she was speaking normally. I bet you had fun writing this. Personally, I like the V for Vendetta graphic novel, but the movie was eh...

Cool story bro.

>>15413281541328

Oh no, no, no, sorry about the mix up. This story has absolutely nothing to do with the Eyes series. Rose isn't the Mare-Do-Well here; in fact, part of the fun of this story is that the reader isn't supposed to know who Mare-Do-Well is.

And yeah, I had a blast writing this. I was watching V for Vendetta one day, and I was thinking how awesome the opening scene with all the crazy alliteration was. I figured it would be an interesting challenge to see if I could do something like that. Like I wrote in the above comment, I really only did this to see if I could. You should try it too; it's really fun.

>>15449581544958

I might do that at some point, a simple little thousand worder built around a funny idea, but I'm behind enough on my writing as it is.

>>15449581544958 It's Luna, duh!

Source: My headcanon

stumbling clumsy over trashcans

That ought to be "clumsily"

“Who are you,” asked the little colt.

You want a ? here, not a ,

leaving not but a mire

I think you mean "naught"

Much, much more.

In truth,

This is apparently a kind of obscure rule, but in cases like this, there should be a quote at the start of the paragraph (not the end of the first, though)

messy misconduct fill mortuaries

Either "misconducts" or "fills", take your pick (I'd go for the latter, personally)

And It is

...

And now I have to ask: was this proofread?

Ah, well, you did a good job regardless

>>25677622567762

Actually no. I only wrote it to have fun with the alliteration and honestly didn't take it all that seriously.