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Neon Venue


Just doing what I love. A fledgling writer. Currently looking for a pre-reader or two just for some ideas and advice. "Ignorance is bliss; Tis folly to be wise..."

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In the Canterlot Underground Research Facility: Equestrian Warfare Division, a technologically advanced weapons developer, progress is at a halt. Attempts are made to create P.M.D.s (Ponies of Mass Destruction), Equestrian super-soldiers infused with concentrated Rainbow. All test subjects coming through the facility come out either horribly mutated from the radiation from the Rainbow, or in body bags. Celestia has sent word that they will no longer be receiving test subjects, and it looks like C.U.R.F.E.W. will be shut down or converted into a munitions factory.

Yet there is hope. Test Tube, a genius scientist working within the division, comes to a conclusion:

If the Princess will not supply us with experiment ponies...why not make our own?

AN: First official fic. I've done other writing, but never a fic.

*Warning: Will contain gore and sex later on. You have been duly warned!*

*^Credits! Thanks to my pre-reader, Starlight Scratch, as well as the artist of my cover art, Rose Brush.^*

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

It is good but I have one question. Are these two chapters fashbacks or "present" time inlined with the show because it is kind of confusing.:rainbowhuh: But besides that it good. Update soon.

:pinkiegasp: Good point!

Fixed. :|

Uhm, you said 'there" instead of "their" a couple of times.
Otherwise, no grammar/spelling mistakes I can see.

Good story. Rather gruesome, but that's science! :coolphoto:

I nominate myself for prereading.

I'm rather interested in how this story is turning out so far... Tracking this to see how things turn out.

Though I would like to volunteer for pre-reading if possible...

wait a second... They're making a partner for Celestia/Luna.

Ah, the difficulties of creating artificial life...

I think I know where this is headed. [LAUGHTER REDACTED]:pinkiecrazy:

PRO-CEED WITH WRI-TING!!

ok, this should be good. enough gore, I must say.
-Never stop writting-

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