Equestria is such an awesome place. Kind natives and friendly attitudes make it hard to ever consider leaving. And an incredibly awesome cyan pegasus with a rainbow mane adds a bit of incentive to stay, too.
But, as a human who somehow wound up in Equestria (As a pony, no less!), you knew you'd have to leave some time.
After returning to the realm of humans, you plan to return to your mundane life as an average person in college. That is, until the previously mentioned cyan pegasus appears to have come through the portal as well. And to top it off, she's been transformed into a human.
Just how will this all work out? Stay tuned to find out!
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Also, constructive criticism is encouraged. This is my first writing in a long time, so I'm a bit rusty.
Thanks to Nataliadsw for letting me use this pic.
pretty good, i'll give it a shot
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Danke!
Why did he have to go
Btw is that RD that made that thud
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No, it was obviously Bon Bon.
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2158161 Thanks!
Damit it rainbow
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"What?"
Dry it is probably rainbow I'm so sorry she is my favorite but she makes some mistakes forgivnes
Sry not dry I'm a idiot
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Heh. All is forgiven.
Maybe, toss a fave this way so you can find out what happens next?
I will toss a fave but not through a window
Wow I like where this is going... Human turned pony in equestria comes back as human with pony turned human... Interesting... Fav and like.
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Have a moustache
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HOLY SHIT! SOMEONE ACTUALLY GAVE ME A MOUSTACHE! THIS IS SUCH AN HONOR!!!! THANK YOU!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ABzWafwY20o
-Twitches-
TWILIGHT! Stop tearing holes in the fabric of time and space! I still need to fix the other ones where your alternates ripped it! Gah, my work will never get done at this point!!
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She will never stop.
NEVER.
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Graflaghlebarghsl. . . at least give me some time before more holes can appear, I don't particularly want reality to collapse.
Still, this looks good so far. Got an idea out of it.
That being that universes have a specific set of rules unique to them, and that conflicting rules sort of "compromise". So "Only Ponies" and "Only Humans" would result in something else. And then a few other things. Still hammering them out.
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Um, well, neat! Glad I gave somebody an idea!
That matches me to a T. Are you following me around or something?
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No. Because it's who I am too!
UNGH.
Thank you all! This is amazing!
(We are happy. Quite happy. Happy. Yes. Quite. Happy. Don't fuck with drugs kids.)
(Or you'll end up like... Well.. I mean just look at my avatar.)
Nice story. Interesting spin on the normal HiE Fics.
$20 dash walks out naked not knowing she has to wear clothes, later on gets pissed about lack of wings?
Looking forward to more.
3 out of 5 for now. Let's see how you go.
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It's the beginning.
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PoE
2170791 Please learn to spell. Also, You should check out a group called "Humans are not bastards"
"Hey Mom, Dad! Remember me? I'm your son who vanished for a couple months and then suddenly returned! Also I've got a naked girl up in my room!"
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Ohh yeah, because the ACLU and a dozen other groups wouldn't be ALL over the Government if they started dissecting people. Not to mention the party opposed to the one currently in power would have the scandal of the century to play with.
Ok so theres some form of wacky time dilation between the two worlds then? Well thats super awesome. Also I demand moar.
Im loving this, keep it going, how oftenwill it be updated?
Yea British insults do sound worse
Ya pisshead
Sweet.
Hawt!
The mental fighting is making me not breath, soo much funnysss
Learning to walk? Here's how...
Oh and nice job with the portal ref
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It will be updated as often as chapters get finished.
2177673 We've got a little trick around that. Absolute bullshit, but hey... MAGIC.
2177791 As often as possible... vague but true. All I do is get the ideas going, and when Brony's stuck... yell at him.
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When "I" said that, that was the exact song that came to mind.
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ok thank you for saying 
Ooh! Figures. The first thing Rainbow Dash learns to do with her legs was to do a intercontinental ballistic kneecap into Sharpie's ballsack. Ouch.
This pretty much sums up my expression 24.media.tumblr.com/1fe473293d7da5a13e47492d997ec5e6/tumblr_mg4j0bQyJY1rziyy4o5_1280.png
i just think the brain conversation is the lost cause it does not capture my interest in any level shape or form other than that its a very good story keep up the good work.
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Awwwww, that's my favorite part!
Ninjabaho
Wow I like the brain dick its funmyespecialy with British voice