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  • Monday
    Darn, that's a lot of cobwebs.

    It's been a while since I have done anything on here. I'm still around but underwent a long period of hardship. This may sound insane but I think that I balance my interests with my emotional state in an inverse. Meaning that when I am happy emotionally, I write horror as a balance. Now, conversely, when I am unhappy, I either don't write or write happier stories. Typically, I don't write which is why there is only one "happy" ending in my story library. Anyway, since July I have been dealing with terrible things that were (are) difficult to combat. That's why I have been a ghost for so long on here.

    I'm working on something again though, have 2-3 unfinished stories, and plans for at least 2 other stories in the future.

    Don't expect the story to get finished this week though, I have a new (awesome) job and have been dedicating a lot of time to it. On top of that, it's Black Friday week and I will be working insane hours Wednesday--Saturday.

    I do wonder though if there are any stories that you wonderful people would like to see sequeled or finished. I know there's not a lot of you out there but I'd like to hear what you think.

    Thanks.

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  • 18w, 1d
    ABC's

    A is for Arsenic someone thought fun

    To include in the icing on top of a bun.

    B is for bats that swoop out of the air

    And squeaking inaudibly catch in one's hair.

    C is for cord of a moderate length,

    To hang oneself from it requires no great strength.

    D,E,F,G,H,I, J.

    K is for Kris with a blade that is wavy,

    One wonders why somebody smeared it with gravy.

    L's for a letter that lay in a trunk,

    Its contents explain how the dinghy was sunk.

    M is for madhouse where is confined

    A lady whose friends say she's out of her mind.

    NOP.

    Q is for quilt wrapped around a dead torso,

    A sick-making sight could hardly be more so.

    R is for Ray's wicked invention,

    Dissolves at a distance the parts you don't mention.

    S is for suicide so it would seem,

    But then who was it uttered that unfinished scream.

    T,U,V,W, X.

    Y is for yonder where something is lying,

    Which proves, seen close, to be somebody dying.

    Z is for zero, the hour of doom,

    It will strike any minute but no-one knows whom.

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  • 18w, 2d
    The Thousand Violins

    I'm calling out but no one will be hearing

    I'm laughing but I cannot be heard

    I'm crying but no one will be drying

    These tears that fall

    So how do we ever face a thousand violins

    And how do we ever even start to begin

    It's raining without a sign of stopping

    It's sunny but no-one's getting warm

    In Heaven the harps have all been broken

    And these tears they fall

    So how do we ever face a thousand violins

    And how do we ever even start to begin

    All through the days now faded away

    One thought remains one thought does stay

    It haunts me still it will remain

    I'm lost in wonder and I hear again

    Tell me how do we ever face a thousand violins

    And how do we ever even start to begin

    Tell me how do we ever face a thousand violins

    Tell me how do we ever even start to begin

    Thousand violins

    8 comments · 80 views
  • 18w, 3d
    New story up tomorrow

    As the name of this blog implies, there will be a new story up tomorrow. Well, chapter 1 of a new story. There may even be a chapter 2 by tomorrow night. I would upload it tonight but I don't have a title or a picture I can use. I stated a new idea yesterday and began working on that one but it needs some more thought on how to continue and this story that will be going live tomorrow is a kind of filler while I work out the problems I've run into on the other one. Not that it means this story is weak. I think it's going to be very interesting by the end but I will say that it is of a different tone than my usual stuff. There's a distinct lack of horror in it and it focuses on Pinkie Pie and her need to be a part of the lives of the ponies in Ponyville. It details Pinkie's attitude toward the other ponies and her isolation by her perceived differences in mindsets. I think it's interesting and it's a story I've been wanting to do for a long time. The plot has been done before but never in quite this way. I've been waiting to do the story in my own way and have struggled with what would make it different. Well, I think I have discovered the way to make it unique. Whether it will stand with its peers is unknown as of yet but we'll just have to see. I also don't have a conclusion to it yet but an arcing story element is somewhat insignificant to the journey through Pinkie's mind. It will explore her need to make others happy, to give them something that really makes them feel alive, and how different she feels she is. In a way I think it will be a tragic story because it will show the weakness Pinkie has for others and the lengths she goes to in order to help them.

    I realize I've posted a lot of blogs lately and I thank you for reading them.




    Scootaloo may be in it as well.

    6 comments · 85 views
  • 18w, 5d
    Idea

    So, I got this great idea for a story today while discussing possible shipping with a person I've recently been talking to. However, this story would get a lot of negative feedback. A whole lot. Like, RD Gets an Abortion negative responses. It would involve a love that has long since passed, bitterness of growing older, and domestic abuse. I don't have a twist for the ending because I don't think it necessarily needs one. I sometimes think that the real world gives us all the horror of fiction. This story wouldn't need the ubiquitous twist at the end because it would be based so heavily on the real world.

    I think that we tend to try to escape the world we live in with games, movies, and stories. I think MLP is an escape for a lot of people. I think this story would sort of shatter their happy little escape. I'm not demented or like doing that to people, but I do like horror stories and this one would probably hit pretty close to home with a lot of people. Hell, it would be like living my early teenage life again. I'm not exactly comfortable with that, but it would be a captivating story and it would be very, very true to life.

    So, I don't know if I want to experience another shitstorm like RD Gets an Abortion, but I think it's a very plausible story with horrific elements and the best horror is often the one right next door.

    “We make up horrors to help us cope with the real ones.” --Stephen King

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jmj
#1 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Thanks for reading!

I'd like to know your opinions on this story so far. I will most likely continue the story between Pinkamenace chapters and random one-shots. I just love the idea of psycho Pinkie and the name Pinkiewise came to me one day and I felt I had to write it.

And in case you're having trouble visualizing Pinkiewise, here are some pics of the repaint I did.

#2 · 93w, 4d ago · · 1 ·

What is this a crossover with, might I ask?

#3 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2098529

Have you ever seen a movie called "It"?

Comment posted by Rainbow87dash deleted at 11:33pm on the 9th of February, 2013
#6 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

IT is one of my favourite King novels. I hope you continue to do it justice.

#7 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Oh god why.

#8 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

i hope you dont mind if i try to draw a crossover between pinkie and pennywise now :pinkiehappy:

if i finish it and think it worthy, ill put it up on my deviantart page and put the link here for your viewing pleasure.

#9 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Pennywise gave me nightmares

#10 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Ahahaha, here it is!  :pinkiecrazy:

They all float down here, Georgie.

#11 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Well that cover pic is my child hood I remember watching a certain movie about a clown that lived in the sewers and ate kids... What the name of that movie or where did you get the pic at. :eeyup:

#12 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

"I'm pinkiewise the dancing clown." I'm sorry, but I just couldn't take it Srsly after that.

jmj
#13 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2099639 Never seen/read "It" before I imagine. It's a wonderul mesh of "This is hilarious" and "Holy Fuck I'm feaked out."

>>2099467 "It" is the name of the movie and novel. Both are good but the book is tremendous.

#14 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Ahh Stephen King...fond memories. :rainbowderp: Oh dear god I have a terrible feeling Diamond Tiara will be involved in this...

jmj
#15 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2099850

hehehehehahahahaha. Yes.

#16 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2100063

If she plays the role I think she will, she deserves what she gets.:pinkiecrazy:

#17 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

http://crimsondash1.deviantart.com/art/Ponywise-353429798?ga_submit_new=10%253A1360471444

i dont have a scanner at my disposal currently so i had to take a picture with my webcam and crop it. i can scan it later, probably tomorrow, but heres the teaser.:pinkiecrazy:

feel free to do with it as you will, anypony.

(as a sidenote, JMJ, i have trouble sending PMs or replies to such, and i wanna say that yes i did see the repaints and i used them as inspiration a little. i can always edit the hair if you want the image to be a bit more like your repaints)

Finished product:

http://crimsondash1.deviantart.com/art/Ponywise-353607883

I used MS paint. 'nuff said. :ajbemused:

jmj
#18 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2100404 i think the image looks great! Once you get it uploaded feel free to plant it right here in the comments. Good work, she looks creepy as all out!

#19 · 93w, 21h ago · · ·

Will this "follow" (as in not "It, reenacted with ponies") the book or the movie?

jmj
#20 · 93w, 18h ago · · ·

>>2115973

Had never heard of "It, reenacted with ponies" I did a few different searches to see if anyone had already done a story like this and came up blank on each search. I have had several ideas that died because others had already done it. Oh well, fuck them, I'm doing it anyway. The opening scene is the only one that's going to be so similar to the book/movie. I think it's an iconic scene that demanded to be written. From there it is going to take off on its own version and not borrow scenes from the book (except for the House on Neighbolt Street, based off of the chapter called "The house on neibolt Street" because it was my favorite part in the book and I felt that the movie really needed to incorporate it.) So, in the long run it will not be borrowing from the movie or the book a ton. I'm also toying with the notion of ending it with the CMC as kids and not pursuing the older half of the story. We'll see. Right now I'm not planning on a second half. I just paused to do a search for any other ponified versions of "It" and failed again. Nothing. Some dick, whose comment was deleted, came on just to give me crap about how his friend had already did it and downvoted me. Once again, Fuck him/them. It was uncalled for and rude, therefore I don't care about being cordial in response, anyway, stay tuned for more of the story but don't expect quick updates. I've got about 5 stories rolling around in my head and Pinkamenace to update so this is getting pushed back for now. It will update, but it's not my pressing concern at the moment.

Also, there will not be a gang sex scene on Apple Bloom like there was on Bev in the book. That was just creepy.

jmj
#21 · 93w, 18h ago · · ·

>>2100404

Crimson Dash did this really great drawing of Pinkiewise. Thanks! I appreciate it very much and I'm glad C-Dash had fun with it. Anyway, here's the pic.

#22 · 93w, 18h ago · · ·

>>2116271

<SOMETHING> reenacted by ponies is  what you usually get when people try to cross mlp with a movie or something. The result is a rather dissatisfactory, boring and bland version of said movie (or something), only reenacted by ponies. Since I don't think that you're a lowly author--not to mention the fact that you stated so on your comment and in the author's notes--I just know that this won't be It reenacted by ponies. My question should've been better phrased, for I intended to ask "how much from the movie/book will this borrow?", which you already answered for me. :twilightsmile:

I concur when you say "fuck them!", dear author. Even if it had been made before, you thought of it now. And nobody, no matter how stupid they are, should ever tell you that. But since such internet denizens will always try to compare e-dicks (even if not with their own), we can't expect much from them, can we? :duck:

I was JUST ABOUT to add: "will you add the gangbang in there as well?" :rainbowlaugh:

But truly enough, that scene is much more creepy than It itself, in my opinion.

jmj
#23 · 93w, 18h ago · · ·

>>2116299

Lol. Well, in all fairness I try to be polite when I talk to people, even if they dislike my story. I just have a sore spot for blatantly rude posts for absolutely no reason. I'm fine with "I didn't like this story and somebody else actually already did it" but not just rude statements. I have never went onto another story and commented rudely about it and I expect the same. Comments of that nature are deleted and sometimes reported depending on the severity of the comment. And you never know, I could write this one better than the other. I had planned on reading it but since it apparently can't be found I won't.

Yeah, no gangbang. I'm not a fan of clop in general and I won't resort to writing clop of any kind. If sex happens in one of my stories it is glossed over and in no way detailed. Plus, they're the CMC. So there won't be any sex to even gloss over. I may allude to such perversions from Pinkiewise, but I don't know yet. I don't like that idea but it is really creepy. I think I can work around it though. Thanks for the comments.

#24 · 92w, 4d ago · · ·

I don't like that idea but it is really creepy.

meh, you've done creepier stuff before.:pinkiesick:

#25 · 91w, 4d ago · · ·

Your dark stories are always good, and I can see this is no exception. Don't leave me hanging!

#26 · 89w, 3d ago · · ·

I actually really liked this first chapter, mostly due to the believability of the characters.  I actually believed all of the emotions that Babs expressed, really felt like they were the characters from the show that they were meant to be, and felt what they felt, which is usually lacking in fan fictions nowadays (sadly), so good job.  Plus this kept me in a little bit of suspense the whole way through, which i can definitely appreciate in a story based off of "It"

jmj
#27 · 89w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2248411

Thanks. I appreciate your time in reading the story. I don't know when an update is coming though. I'm working on another one shot and then I have to get another chapter of Pinkamenace updated. By the way, I love your handle. The cycle of birth, life,d eath, and rebirth? Awesome. We only escape it by realizing we are all Brahma.

#28 · 89w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2250984  Thank you very much :twilightblush: not many people take the time to look it up (or just happen to know it for that matter) so it's always nice to share a little bit of philosophy when the chance arises.  Good luck with your stories, by the way, I'm a little on the slow end of producing my own right now, but hopefully it'll get better for the both of us.

#29 · 88w, 3d ago · · ·

Oh my God, why.:raritycry:Time to read now...

#30 · 86w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2279532 The real question here isn't why.

It is: Will it float?

That is the question.

#31 · 86w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2097938  Those images will haunt me...  But seriously, this was awesome.:twilightsheepish:  You know, ever since I saw that movie when I was nine, I have never looked at a storm drain without picturing a clown in it.  At first I was concerned that your story would just be a ponified version of the book, but your author's note set me at ease.  (Crossovers are more fun when the story is original, I think.)  Excited to see where this goes.  (Also, your writing is really great.)

Also, there will not be a gang sex scene on Apple Bloom like there was on Bev in the book. That was just creepy.

Thank God!  (I didn't touch a Stephen King book for years after reading that scene.  It took a friend whose opinion on books I value recommending the Dark Tower series to get me to read him again.)

Oh, and do you happen to follow the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic comic book series?  There is a hilarious reference to It in issue #4.:pinkiehappy:

jmj
#32 · 86w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2338580

Lol. i saw that. It was funny. I lvoed the book and think about it from time to time. I just thought the Georgie scene was such a perfect opening that I had to do it that way.

Man, don't get me started on the Dark Tower. That was liek a year of my life wasted. The first 3 1/2 books are amazing and then it begins going downhill until the ultimate slap in the face at the end. I sometimes wonder if King ruined it on purpose. The Spider baby, no real conflicts worth speaking of after being built up and built up and built up, and the Crimson King is a demented Santa Clause? Just a crazy old man stuck on a balcony? WTF. So after all of the denizens of the Crimson king have made Roland's journey hell, not to mention Randall Flagg, who is a great villain with lots of powers who is CK's right hand man, it turns out the King is just an old man with NO POWERS whatsoever? He throws sneetches... omg. He throws fucking sneetches. Yep... killed the entire series for me right there. I could forgive the blatant Yojimbo rip off that was Wolves of the Calla, but not making himself god in one of them, having Randall die in such a pathetic way, and then having the Crimson king being a senile old man. How could it sink so low.

And Randall dying.. ugh... Here's a guy with HUGE power and ability and he dies pulling his eyes and tongue out because a spider baby commands him to do so. not to mention that the spider babyw as the son of both the CK and Roland (Somehow) from that spirit woman thing in The Gunslinger...or maybe the one after that, I can;t remember, but regaardless. Roland wasn't supernatural and neither was the King. The spirit woman thing was supernatural but had no real powers other than being a spirit woman/succubus. Where did it get all that power from?

#33 · 86w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2338615  I definitely had mixed feelings about that last book.  The Crimson King was probably the biggest disappointment in the series.  After all of that lead up... and then he gets erased by some magical artist kid that came out of nowhere!  The friend who recommended them to me has read the entire series several times and still gets mad about how Randall died.  (I was angrier about how Mordred died.  The prophesied dark power rising... and he goes out like that.  Ugh.)  King admits that he doesn't really focus on plot in his stories.  Sometimes I wish he would.:derpytongue2:

My favorite Stephen King book is now The Stand.:rainbowdetermined2:

Even though the end of It freaked me out and made me stay away from King, I still think it was a good book.  The way he writes his children characters is great.  There are scenes from that novel that have stayed with me.  And not just the horror scenes.  I feel like King really understands friendship in his stories.  (We can see that in Roland's group too.)

jmj
#34 · 86w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2338659

mordred. Yeah... i hated him as a character but dying of food poisoning is pretty crappy.

Check out "the long walk" and "the running man" by king (bachman). They are novellas and are wonderful.

#35 · 86w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2337665I don't know.

Will it?:trixieshiftright:

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