Little did Raindrops know that deciding to go out for drinks on desperation day would lead to the experience of a life time. This is that story. A Lunaverse Fic.
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That was fun, from the middle section I thought that Luna was mind controlling Raindrops in order to get a date, creepy, however, a neightmare makes more sense, however, we know who's in charge of dreams, don't we?
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Yeah, part of what I wanted to do was subtly hint that Luna was doing that in her dream intentionally, just to mess with her. Why? I honestly have no idea, but it seemed like a plan at the time.
HA!
Why is Cheerilee having sexy dreams about Raindrops and Princess Luna? Is it that time of year for her?
The scary thing is, lots of ponies probably have sexy dreams about Princess Luna, which must be really awkward if the real Princess happens to stumble into them.
Anyway, cute story! I can really see Raindrops as the type who actively doesn't care about Hearts and Hooves day.
Heh. Desperation Day.
Cheerilee is so desperate on desperation day that she dreams of her friends hooking up with goddesses. Hilarious.
Ok, this was weird.
Well that was... weird. Can't really think of much else to say really.
I must admit, I was feeling a bit reluctant about reading any of these H&H Day fics, but this was pretty funny.
You wrote 'people' and words like that a few times when 'ponies' would have worked fine.
2098183 Or maybe Luna is the one delivering the dreams...
LOL, okay. First off, I loved the beginning, it was nice and entertaining. Then there is the middle, which I found confusing, odd, rushed and just out right strange and OOC. Finally there was the end, which was beyond hilarious, explained everything and made me truly enjoy this oddity that I consider a webisode and not fanfic.
2120508 A story that left you speechless! the constructive criticism guy? No way, I don't believe it!