I'm a human being who writes stories about ponies.
Shining Armor has always seemed to have everything together, but what you don`t know is that behind this brave, clever pony was a tortured soul just hoping for something to go right. After a cruel twist of fate Shining Armor was forced to take care of Twilight. She was just a young filly and he was just a young teen. Somehow through all of this emerges some hope, harmony and friendship. Behind all gloom and depression lies a ray of sunshine in the cloudy skies.
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This is my first story. I hope you all love it!
I like the premise, but the chapters could be longer.
>>Grey the Mighty I know they could be longer, but this is my first story and I`m going to write this and then try to write something longer. I`ve written all of these in 2 days and I think I`ve done pretty good so far. Thank you for reading my story and liking it!
It was only later, with adulthood staring her in the face, that Twi began to doubt her epicness (epicity?).
There are a few structural issues here, but the only real complaint I have is that you're giving too much away in the description: it's almost enough to make reading the actual story superfluous.
Chapter One error. Should be "past".
2192660 Thank you for saying this, it has been fixed.
EDIT: I just realized that that is actually wrong, look the two words up. Thank you for trying to help though!
Ooh a carriage ride!!!!
This is a great story!
2095357 Epicnessity.
It's an interesting story, but it feels too much like you are just listing stuff. It's too rushed. Try to slow it down and add details.
4290401 Yeah, this was the first story I've ever written. I hadn't really tried to write a short story before then. I could rewrite it, but I don't want to change memories. I did edit it, though. My earlier work was… less than amazing to say the least.
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I think I like the sound of that better anyway.