When Chris and Tyler are sent to Equestria through a magical door, they think it will be calm and peaceful, but what will happen when this doesn't turn out to be the case?
Finally a fic where the protagonist is a brony and knows what he want to do - or not.
Just write more and this will bee seen!
Also, you should have cut this into three different chapters, just sayin'!
Okay, separating it into 3 chapters now.
Then my comment leaves its meaning!
I could go on to say how promising this looks, how good the spelling and grammar is, or how much I like the story, but I'm going to go with:
The story itself looked too familiar, and now I know why: it was like this!
Very similar in a lot of places.
So we will see a lot of humor here!
Exactly. I got the idea from that exact fic.
I knew it!
Wow! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Very nice. Now... MOAR!!
OMGWTFBBQ a new chapter!
Now let's read it!!!
You are turned into a mare?
Well, I can already see certain consequences...
Are we really gonna go over this again.
What do you mean? :D
I don't do anything 18+. I already told you that in Mysterious Newcomer.
What about Skies Above?
Well, it was about 8 weeks earlier if not more, so don't blame me for not remembering it.
Btw, you will write more now, right?
I didn't describe that stuff in enough detail.
Yes I will. The only reason I haven't been writing much was because of school and I was waiting for Reaper to get off his lazy ass and finish chapter 1 of his werewolf fic.
Wait, now I have to reread the already uploaded chapters...
A story that was, in a certain way, inspired by mine? I'll have to read this when i've got time...
But let me ask, is this that one fic I was pre-reading some time ago?
Possibly so, though that could've also been Darkness Strikes.
I wonder about the consequences, what could possibly happen?
More important, when?
Maybe they'll involve you, considering you brought them up.
Oh-hooo, I'm looking forward to it!
Whatever they are, they'll probably be written by Tyler since he's the funny guy in this fic.
Hm-hm, funny it is, now I'm officially excited.
""I don’t want to,” he stated flatly. “You’re too adorkable!” He grinned and hugged her tighter."
This seems vaguely familiar, if you catch my drift.
I do. Tyler is almost a perfect match with Peter (He's just as annoying I can tell you that.).
Well, I was prepared for a few things, but not for this.
Done and done.
This is funnier then all hell! Great job guys and keep it up. You got a tracker!
Hello everyone! It's your favorite co-author Tyler! Just made this account. Tomorrow I'll be getting Chris to make me an avatar.
O_O that is all...
- My ultimate reaction to this chapter.
P.s.: Just call me Zeph.
While I'm sad to say I did not read any of the afromentioned stories and I could not possibly get the references, this story is quite entertaining and well written. Aside from not getting references its pretty good !
I wrote it when the 9th chapter wasn't up (if it wasn't obvious), my mind creates scenes and mini-stories like this almost every time...
What is wrong with me?
Molestia would be proud. Doesn't matter, had sex. Well he had a vagina at the time so I guess its fine, Damn this story is getting weird.
You've got a new vest, what's next? A guitar or something?
I hope the next chapter will come out soon!
Haha, sister suck.
I don't play guitar :P. Also, if you haven't noticed, the vest is part of my avatar, which is what I wanted myself to look like.
Alright, you'll play on a piano then!
Chris is the one who plays piano (he's pretty good at it too).
Damn, you ruined my joke!
U mad bro?
Nope, I'm perfectly fine! :P
Hm, a deeper storyline?... Interesting...
My turn now? Fuck...
first comment , whooooo yea lets party like its 1995 , I am killing tacos right now how bucking cool
Oh you made it a crossover?
And with the fic what gave the idea to write!
But tricking Lyra, oh, poor girl... :(
Erm, Yeah I know the fic. But still :
where all going to die!!!
And hey, something good for me at least! :3
I hope Tyler will write the next chapter soon.
Oh lol, shit just got real, and then... saved by the pony of Death, trololo!
....WHAT HAPPENED IN THAT BAR?!?
I WANT MORE DETAILS!!!
no : D ,it is perfect just the way it is
Oh you cheeky bastard, how dare you, HOW DARE YOU?!?
>>191813191813God, you really are EVERYWHERE! How do you do it?
Lo so. La lingua italiana è così fottutamente fantastico! E dannazione, mi dispiace Chris. Sembra che tu abbia una certa concorrenza.
Thats it. I'm done. Can't read this anymore. My brain is puking rainbows out my ears from all the god damn randomness.
Questa è una buona cosa.
And Chris, you sonova b... b-b-beagle, you little cheeky bastard, how dare you call me that?!?
>>11538441153844No, non è. Mi dispiace, ma con l'incredibile quantità di OC e la casualità, non posso continuare a leggere. Forse se si scrive un'altra storia cercherò di leggerlo. Io si guarda per ora.
Qui, i baffi per lo sforzo, almeno.
Possano le vostre parole essere forte, e l'oscurità sempre con voi.
I'm already doing an Assassin's Creed crossover lol
>>11574611157461Interesting. Didn't mean anything about AC, but interesting to know. I'll watch you to see when it comes out.
not enough Peter and Matthew, dickhead.