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I'm just a person that likes to write, slowly getting the handle on writing with a schedule.
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"Your" is possessive. "You're" is a contraction.
"Take me to your leader."
"I know you're in there."
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Sorry bout that, I always get those two mixed up. I'll fix it up
That cover art...
HNNNNNNNNGGG
No, my name is Simon; you can't change my name!
*walks away*
... Sorry, the urge to do that was way too big to handle
Jokes aside, giving a name to the main character of a 2nd person story feels odd, as if this story was written as a gift/commission for a particular person (in this case, a person probably called Matthew), and can be a moodkiller. No one likes that our couple calls us by another name, and in these kind of stories, we have the same problem.
I didn't give you permission to write about me!!
Not a bad start, I'll definitely track and see where 'I' end up.
2069332 chrystfag get outa here blarghgjkf atheism winrars all
Psst, can I give you a suggestion?
I find the best second person writers keep their characters nameless and ambiguous. So it could be anyone. Get creative enough and you can describe sex organs ambiguously.
Derpy Approved
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(Joke) Alt. Title: I Want To Hold Your Hyand
I gotta hyand it to ya... Actually, I don't know what to hyand to ya. But I can say you're the first one say "your name is [blank] in a second-person. I would have said "Second 'You' Pony", but that's just me... Yand that's all I have to say about that.
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yay~ finally someone comments on the title.
It was a typoe that I just sort of liked, so I kept it.
>really enjoyed this
I can't wait for the next installment :D
Interesting... Was Lyra in heat or something? Damn she wanted release pretty fast after that kiss! Following because I kinda like where this is going.
Pony in earth.
Meh...
Clopfic.
Ooo...
2nd person.
OOO!
Lyra.
Ya know i don't have to be told what my name is and what people call me i am perfectly aware of that
Pure wish-fufillment. Not bad, but could use some grammatical touches. Should be fine if the audience doesn't try to take it seriously.
Seems a bit rushed, but that often happens to many authors when they really want to write their favorite scene.
I'd favorite this, but apparently people like to stalk me so I'll keep it on my Read Later list where it can't be seen.
"Today, your name is Matthew, and you are a clop writer."
Other days you are know as Dan the plumber.
But on special days you are known as ZARBON THE DESTROYER OF WORLDS!
Uhm, uhm , yay
2069170 Y-O-U-R...
Y-O-U-Apostrophe-R-E...
They're as different as night and day.
Don't you think that night and day are different?
What's wrong with you?
Extra nerd points for whoever knows where that came from.
>huge, stupid grin
check.
>boner
check.
>DAMN I JELLY
check.
Carry on with this highly enjoyable piece of literature, kind sir.
what no fanzy hornplay yet ?!
I....well...dammit now I'm gonna start having sexy dreams about Lyra.
Please, good sir...continue...
O30 woah . . . that . . was . . epic!
-shudders slightly- oh fuck that was awesome.
0.O this story 
absolutely fucking must
be continued. .3. totally fucking epic story
. and i love Lyra now too
. so many ponies so little time
. for myself, that is. : P
shouldnoneedsnoall i have to say is... NGGFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF- okay im done
2161489 you picture hurts
Brilliant. You need to continue this.
please continue this.
PLEASE.
>tfw the fucking writefag fucks on off to wherever, leaving a bunch of unsatisfied anons and a lovelorn Lyra with no more hot monkey dick.
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>yfw I've been trying to bounce ideas around for a good means of continuation
> tfw using le meme arrows outside of 4Chan
Update?
WHAT THE FUCK!?!?! I HAVNT EVEN READ IT AND MY NAME IN IRL IS MATTHEW!!!
STRANGER MOTHER FUCKING DANGER MAN!!!!
HE EVEN HAS THE SAME NICK NAME AS ME!!!
WHAT DA FUCK!?!?!?!?!?!
-passes out-
Less than three hours, one screw, and she's in love?
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If Lyra shows up at your house, let me know, okay?
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In this case, the father of many centaurs?
More! I need more.
4598337 Has this been abandoned? I haven't read a Lyra X Human story in a while, and figured I'd see this one... After reading some comments and the post date, I decided I'm for certain going to, and would like to see if there is more even being considered...
7468472 I wouldn't say abandoned, but i've never been able to come up with any ideas for a follow up sadly.
Oh jeez...
Sad to day, but... I don't think this aged all that gracefully.
gahd, this was cringy as hell. take the mustaches, take them all!
Hi and when are you going to continue with this story? And how long will it take for you to continue this story and if you do plz continue!!