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Destructio23 3178

Joined September 2011
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    Destructio23's Stories (3)

    • Prism
      Twilight discovers that everything isn't as perfect as she thought it would be between her and Dash.

      9,367 words · 1,389 views · 97 likes · 14 dislikes
    • Winds of Change
      Applejack's and Rainbow Dash's relationship is at stake. Will it survive?
      37,368 words · 1,274 views · 55 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Last Days
      Luna feels that she was treated unjustly by her sister. It's time for her revenge.
      6,575 words · 283 views · 18 likes · 10 dislikes
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    Since all of the people commenting on the finale complained that the story wasn't 'wrapped up', I decided to write a epilogue, bringing closure to the whole story. I changed the status of the story from 'complete' back to 'incomplete', along with deleting the 'The End' at the end of the finale. The epilogue should be published soon, sometime next week or maybe later, depends on my school. Hear ya! Please comment what you think about it. EDIT - for anyone that still cares - School gone hard on me in recent days, and the worst is still to come, so I don't know when the Epilogue might be completed. Hopefully soon. Thanks!

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    #1 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I approve of this decision.  The ending before was nice since they got back together and all, but it didn't actually resolve any of the issues that lead to the problems in their relationship in the first place.  Having an epilogue to show how the two of them decide to cope with those issues, how their relationship progresses with those issues resolved, as well as whatever else you decide to put into it, would make this already fantastic story truly great.

    #2 · 61w, 5m ago · · ·
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    >>469316 Can you please tell me the rules of placing commas and fullstops within dialogue? I never really knew them to be honest... :ajsleepy:

    #3 · 61w, 3m ago · · ·
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    >>469513

    Here's a link.

    #4 · 59w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>508239

    I'm working on it, I simply was absent from the 21st to 30th (to be more precise, I was in Jordan, on a concert tour).

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