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After a long drought Apple Jack's farm is in desperate need for some rain but what she gets instead is not what she was thinking of.

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Um. Cooked animal flesh falling from the sky on vegetarian ponies. Seems to be a shortage of the normal panic mode here.

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I didn't even have any other ponies really than Apple Jack, Pinkie Pie, Dashie, and Twilight Sparkle. Everypony else was hiding away. We don't know how scared they were.

"Raindrops keep falling on my head,
keep falling on my head...

I don't know the name of that song but is it a reference? Also 'Cloudy with a Slight Chance of Meatballs' comes to mind

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Yes indeed it is. But I don't know the name of the song either...:pinkiehappy:

Sweet :rainbowkiss: got something right in my life

wonderfully random and bizarre. from the title pic, i expected :derpytongue2:.

"whadd'ya mean ah cant count tah four?" :ajbemused:

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Just something I joke about with my friends based off the Raise this Barn song.

2103966 ....oh, I GET IT! :rainbowlaugh:

Hey Kazlene,

I want to let you know that this is a GREAT story. You writing style fits the story perfectly and the humor is very effective. The ending is great too; a great plot twist. I did notice a few grammar/spelling errors but other than that it was fantastic.

I made a full video review if you'd like to see it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WBKFKy0RiH8

SlipperPutty

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I'm glad you enjoyed it!:pinkiecrazy:

it was nice an' silly, but reread it for grammatical mistakes and run on sentences.

Comment posted by Goygoror deleted May 29th, 2014

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When did they call kitty a shit?

First of all:
"-I never did learn how to count past four-"
So Applejack think in Quinary (base-5)? Or should I say E-Quinary?
RD - "NERD!!!"
Me - "Oh, shut up Rainbow."
Second:
Pinkie's line "They thought it'd be funny."
That had me in stitches.

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