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Humanity


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Out of sight and out of mind, a dark figure contemplates the past and the impending future.

Side story and minor prequel to The Lost Element

Written in a burst of inspiration

Available in paperback.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 51 )

HOW!!! TOO AWESOME!!! *explodes*

:O Humanity, THIS IS EPIC!!! :D

in the picture at the last chapter, Is that James' Inhumanity? or the last emperor of humans?

6934398 Neither. It was placed there in that chapter for a specific reason. You'll see much later during the Endgame arc of The Lost Element.

This was fantastic. An absolute hidden gem of Fimfiction. It's an absolute tragedy that stories like Squeaky Clean Fun get more than 20,000 views whereas stories like this get a mere 130. But this was an awesome origin story of how the world of Equestria came to be. I like how you wrote it in the first person, it's not often that we get to see inside the mind of the embodiment of all evil, and of course it makes the most sense, it's his story, the story of how the world came to be, the world which he changed from nothing to a thriving civilization. I also like how his name is never said, and you let the reader work that out for themselves over the course of the fiction. It gives such a cool sense of power and mystery to his being, that by reading this fiction you don't know his name, you have to work out who he is for yourself.

I was a little intimidated by the word count of The Lost Element, so thanks for helping me get around that, and you gave me an awesome place to start. I have liked and Favorited this story and I plan to read at least some of The Lost Element.

6935034 Already, I'm anticipating the Endgame arc! any idea when the main story will be completed though? (Just so I can read it again from start to end ;)

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Oh. (btw, how old are you? Forgive me for asking.) And I shall stick with this story till the day i die!

Sunflare was supposed to represent Faust, correct?

7843499 Nope. She and Orbash were OCs developed by another artist in the fandom a few years back to be used in a short comic. I just liked them so much in terms of design and name that I chose to incorporate them into my works. The artist even gave his blessings.

Try searching their names on Derpibooru and DeviantART.

7843641 Coolio. Welp, here's to reading the sequel and not the alternate ending to it! I'm sorry, but that first chapter is too cruel... I hadn't even read the regular ending and knew that was painful... You're a great writer man.

7843682 It's appreciated. But now that you've read the whole thing, may I get your full opinion on this story?

7847646 Still working on The Lost Element, but it looks awesome! A little rushed for the Fluttershy love scene since he had only been there for a week, but hey, I couldn't care less! I get a feeling that you'll make it feel right at home in the later chapters!

7847653 I do admit that the first volume is the story's weakest link, but what I meant was this story. Before Time Began to Flow. Feedback has been extremely sparse, so I'm eager to hear what your thoughts on it are.

7847691 :ajbemused:This thing? I'll give it to ya straight...:pinkiehappy: It rocks!

I sooooo want to use the early world you created, after the miasma or shortly before it's containment, as a pathfinder setting, adventurerers sent forth into a world taking it's infant steps, taming the wilds and becoming history

7860372 You can, so long as you credit the source.

7952211 Long time no see, Teldryn. You chased that little snot out of Riverwood again recently? Maybe across the brook too?

That is how you should start a story. Continue the good work.

I'm way behind on the story still, the chapters are fucking huge. This has intrigued me though so I'll probably come back to it soon.

It is entirely strange to me that the equator would be warm without a sun to warm it. I doubt that worlds spin in its own would cause that. Whatever.

8131991 Depends on how much warm air was actually carried to that section. And being "warmer" doesn't necessarily mean it was actually warm. The whole planet was cool at best before the creation of the sun.

Is the narrator of this story the main villain of Endgame?

I have been trying to come up with a backstory similar to this for a story of my own, yet to see it not only written in perfect, intimate detail, but from the perspective of what could be the antagonist of this story's sequel that I will read soon? I'm absolutely speechless!

10/10 for you, my friend! You deserve it, and I look forward to reading the sequel in my free time.

I love how you implemented the G1 references in this tory.

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Just paying tribute to what came before.

Ok por ahora es interesante

No entendí la referencia pero sigo leyendo

Una evolución de personaje creíble

no entendí la referencia

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There is no specific reference in this chapter.

. . . . . It seems as though I have competition for the ruler of darkness title.

is it just me that the pictures arnt there?

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They should all be fixed now.

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It’s not Kratos, if that’s who you’re thinking.

Well this was nice.

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I swear if I see a golden sword in the man's hands later I'ma fucking leg it

thumbs up to you if you got that reference

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So glad you liked it. :raritywink:

Its just as they say, you either die a hero, or live long enough to become a villain

who are you reffering when you say the man who slew a god.

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The main character of TLE, James.
A human man who kills Discord himself.
I highly recommend reading The Lost Element for the whole thing.

The pics are messed up :fluttercry:

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