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Soulcarver101


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The land of Equestria has been discovered. How will the USA react to this? Find out in this human's recollection of the past.

(First story I'm publishing; and quite honestly, the only one that adheres to the guidelines. Don't be afraid to voice your true thoughts.)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

Thank you for the review, InuYasha–luvs–ponies! :twilightsmile:

Made an account just to i fucking love this and can't wait for the next:pinkiehappy:

2051137i must say that i cant eait to see wich nation will be the 1sthell to set up relationship. With them and wich nation will keep them safe. And now i shutup youhave a nice day

Comment posted by brodash deleted Jan 31st, 2013

2049387 thanks for the good story cant whait for the next chapter

Like the story, but the massive wall of text and the lack of proper punctuation are degrading to the whole thing. Otherwise good.

>>Fireheart 1945 Interesting. Could you please elaborate? Like I said, I have a massive case of Writer's Block–so no chapter for who knows how long–but your advise would surely help me in other things I have to work on.

Yeah, I don't think I can do this; too many things on my shoulders and such. Well, guess this is a tale that's lost in fragments. Oh well.

2211392 shame, despite the questionable grammar, and I'm a bit confused on who's P.O.V. it is.
However, it is an interesting plot so far, and I for one would like to see how it would develop.

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