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Twilight Sparkle has fallen from grace, and now is a fugitive from the law. On the run from the Police Internationale, she sets out from the port city of Trotterdam on a five hundred kilometre trek to the distant city of Königsberg, while at the same time, trying to stay one step ahead of a ruthless detective determined to bring her to justice.
Celestia REALLY went blind for a minute if she missed this one (unless it is assumed she knows 
)
Also, I just noticed something. Other than Fluttershy, Twilight is the most reclusive of the mane 6, and she has gotten more action in your stories by more... THINGS than any other character.
Unless I forgot an encounter Vinyl Scratch had...
>>155944 "work together until its time to get the pay 
"
There's just so much one pony can do,and Twilight has by now probably connections in the underground at least through her dogfriend(no idea how to call it with a male dog heh )
And Pierre "La Coq" (thats who ill call him 
) cant just flash his badge to get answers (or whatever he has) ,but since hes a hard ass i dont think he plays by the rules all the time hmm?
Let's tote up what she has to live down when the dust clears: falsely accusing RD of cheating on her, fleeing the country, becoming a gun-runner/discount prostitute and international incident on hooves. It sort of makes this timeline's Ditzy's pretending to be a clueless, out-of-control simpleton because that's what everypony thought she was anyway look sort of harmless and cute.
I don't know, that first one wasn't her fault at all. Especially when you consider that Rainbow ADMITTED to Twilight that she cheated because Rainbow thought she did. Sure it was an illusion, but not false accusation in the way you mean really.
... but yeah, that's like me arguing that a mass murderer is innocent of jaywalking 
"Its 3:00am. I'm going to refresh this page real quick, just to see what happened in the last hour"
*refreshes page*
"Oh look, a story I'm tracking just updated. I'm going to just see which one did"
*checks*
*Sees its this one*
"... looks like I'm getting 30 minutes less sleep tonight..."
And if that was all real, oh yeah. But at the same time, I'm so confused. I'm guessing it was the book trying to get Twilight to get it back. But does the book work that way? Why would Pierre, the best detective, even do that!? Why is Monty back??
*head explodes*
so we have Rarity: get stranded on prison island with the worst criminals of all, suddenly thinks all are criminals out to get her 
La Roche: Rapes his pray, how the hell did he even get away with such stuff if he did it in the past, or was Twilight special since shes a unicorn,former student of a princess of equestria.
Monty is the god so just appearing around would be possible,but if he just pops the book out of nowhere then f*ck it hes fake.
No memory of the past chapter? Nothing in the last chapter actually happened anymore (except their physical positions in the world)? I see what you did there...
But yeah, I understand why Celestia needs to be removed, even if she does have a... reason for the way she is, but Luna? Either she is hiding something from everypony, or I missed something in the past few chapters...
I was a little confused at first as to how in the world Twilight could have developed feelings for Heinrich while under the tome's influence, but the more I thought about it, the more sad it became.
That one sentence was more potent to me than any death in the entire series, including the death of Rainbow Dash.
My question now: What's going to happen to heinrich :C
Please, if we know Wheller, something much more deadly and powerful is going to gain possession of that book.
And I do have to say, for God-like beings, letting Heinrich keep his memories of the past two weeks (unlike Twilight) was either a major slip up, or the trolling of the century.
Not only did she help, but she helped THREE TIMES!
Honestly, as much as this book scares me, I'm still worried about a few things, namely...
1) The CMC selling technology, and what Celestia the Eternal Tyrant (trademark pending) is going to do as a response.
2) Is Archimedes going to make a return? He was an interesting fella, and I don't see him disappearing forever.
3) Legion is still alive, and from how I read it, Whirlwind could either be doing a mental battle with him/them, or is working towards a common goal. Either way, won't end well
4) How is Twilight going to act when she finds out WHY she and Rainbow broke up?
4a) Is Rainbow even going to go along with the relationship again (as it looks like atm), or is she going to go by what she said a while back, and not try to get back together because even if it wasn't an illusion, she still would've done the same thing?
4b) How is Pinkie going to react to all of this?
4c) Whirlwind and Rainbow are now in the same group. Where does THIS lead?
5) That robot that Rainbow fixed while hiding in the missile base (forget acronym) is still flying around somewhere (forget if it had a name).
6) Derpy/Ditzy, while being still part of the Nymphites, now has all the past life's memories. How will this change things for her with the group?
7) Appleloosa (or whatever it is now) is still mad at the Nymphites about the whole "Ditzy going apeshit" thing. When does that hammer blow fall?
8) While "order" is now Legion and atm, neutralized, "chaos" is still out there, just WAITING to have his memories returned.
I could probably get to 10, but at this point, I think I'd be reaching. Either way, I guess you could say there are so many questions, so few answers
My predictions are that CMC are going to the moon, Archimedes is actually a serial killer, Legion is going to go apeshit soon, Twilight is going to turn into Murdershy when she finds out, Robot is going to destroy the moon via lasers (killing Luna and CMC in the process), Ditzy is going to go Spanish Inquisition style crazy, Appleloosa is already completely wiped out by a plague, and "chaos" is having sweet sweet love with Discord.
Those make sense... right?
Silly guys, you know all what wheller will do can be put in one sentence : "Shit will get real"
Also, Celestia is as much of a tyrant as any other world leader, she does what she thinks is best ,but unlike most of the other world leaders she does what she thinks is best for her ponies.
If she was Tyrant she would just try to wipe out all other races, but shes content with keeping her ponies ignorant (and that way happy)
Maybe then the other side gods would interfere rather then sit back ,eat popcorn and lol at the puny mortals killing themselves.
Im talking about this new world celestia, the old world one was a asshole.
I also think that we will see some more of Zecora, we still dont know why Celestia allowed her to live in Equestria, both old Tyrantlestia and new Overprotective mother Celestia.
Also Chaos/Discord would be... gay incest since Discord was their father? 
Seeing as chaos and despair is happening so often in equestria I'd say that the stillness and peace is anything but normal. Before this is over there will be mental breakdowns, if not from the insanity around them then at least from them not knowing what to do once their adventures is over for good and reality is turned back to peace and quite.
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