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Mak Manto


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Set five years after the epic conclusion of Nemo defeating the Nightmare King, he returns to the dream world with Icarus, going on a new quest with Princess Camille, Professor Genius, Flip and the Boomps in a strange new land that may prove to be far different than anything Slumberland has to offer.

When Princess Luna senses that new people have entered the dream world and have come to Equestria, a brand new adventure will come together as the Mane Six come to meet the unlikely heroes of Slumberland for the first time.

At the same time, a darkness is rising again, one even more powerful then before, and with it may be new dangers that even our heroes can't stop...

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 34 )

So far I'm liking it. It's good to see there's someone else whose seen Little Nemo :twilightsmile: I'm gonna keep on reading.

Not bad. There are a few errors here and there, but I'm still hooked on the story. Aside from looking out for errors, try to make the chapters a bit longer. I usually avoid stories when their chapters' word counts are only in the hundreds. Roughly one to two thousand words would do--but longer the better. Well, I'm gonna give this story a shot. You seem to have something good here. :twilightsmile:

I am expecting great things! This movie was a personal favorate growing up. :twilightblush:

Interesting read. I've seen the original movie, and still have it on a VHS along with "Mom & Dad Save the World," "Bebe's Kids," and "The Mighty Ducks," in that order. Good VHS. And good movie. So, I'm hooked. Let's see where this goes! :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Comment posted by moviemaster8510 deleted Feb 11th, 2013

I wonder what Winsor McCay would say about this.

So far, so good. Keep up the good work!:twilightsmile:

My very first thought when seeing this, "The Nostalgia Critic." x3

Thanks for all of the comments, and don't worry, the chapters will be getting longer now that the story's becoming more involved.

Who else thought it would be a Finding Nemo x Equestria crossover? :rainbowderp:

I just want to say, you should establish right away that Icarus is a flying squirrel for those not familiar with the film.

However, I was roped into your story because I am taking an animation history class in college and we were learning about Winsor McCay, the inventor of the original Little Nemo in Slumberland comic strip that the movie was based on (so me reading this has nothing to do with the movie or the review the Nostalgia Critic made of it). Right now, I want to say that your story has really hooked me. The descriptions of the settings and actions are vivid for only being a 1000 word or so chapter, and I can already tell that I'm going to really like Nemo as a character here.

You've earned a deserved like and favorite from me. Can't wait to read more.

Awesome! :pinkiehappy: Looking forward to more! :twilightsmile:

Haha! The fun as been Doubled today!

Never thought I'd see a crossover with this!

Looking pretty good so far. The only thing is that the chapters are a bit on the short side, but you seem to be updating fairly frequently...

I know that the chapters may seem short, but this is going to be a LONG story. This isn't going to be a twenty chapter story and that's that. I'll be posting every day, or at least every other day.

Get ready to have your minds blown...

Parents read the note.

"Why the hell would he want to go buy a new mattress at this time of night?"

Comment posted by Mak Manto deleted Feb 18th, 2013

Does this story take place after she becomes a princess, or is Twilight still a unicorn?

It takes place before Twilight becomes an Alicorn.

I was rather surprised to see this crossover while searching through the site. So far it looks to be off to a good start and seeing as this is a crossover an going by the character tags I imagine the mane cast will meet up with the film characters. You know? I could see Rarity and Camille getting along and of course Rarity would probably hate Flip's cigar smoking.

I'll keep an eye on this.

It was interesting to add more drama to Nemo and his family It makes sense seeing as he is older.

Oh god! This movie scared me spitless as a child. :twilightoops: Not sure if want.

Been some time due to school, work and a bit of writer's block, but I'm back to continuing the story!

Holy shit! I loved this movie when I was a kid! I usually don't like crossovers, but I'm actually considering reading this!

Despite the fact how small the chapters are, this is going to be a LONG story, with at least around 200 chapters, so it's going to get interesting.

Its been a year and still no updates for the story when the next chapter I can't wait.

Same here - I want to read the rest of the story! It's very well done so far.

It's good to see this alive. Keep them coming! :pinkiehappy:

Thank you. :)

It's good to be back and for all newcomers, don't worry about the chapters being small. This is going to be one long story, and so far I have at least two hundred chapters planned.

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