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  • T The Tales of the Ponyville Nursery

    Each pony in Ponyville has a story. Here are the stories of the newborns at Ponyville's nursery.
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  • 19w, 5d
    Update

    I have good news and maybe not so good news. The good news is, I'm almost done with the next chapter of Discord Did It. I've just got to write one more section, and then the author's note, and it will be ready to be uploaded. The maybe not so good news is that this chapter will be fairly short. It will be over 3,000 words, but I know that isn't very long, especially when you factor in how long I've been on hiatus for.

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  • 50w, 17h
    Good News

    For anyone who is a fan of my first ever Friendship is Magic story, "Discord Did It", I am planning to take the story off hiatus soon. While I can't make any concrete promises, I am hoping to have the next chapter posted by this time next month. The fact that I will be on break from college in two weeks will definitely help with giving me time to write.

    I will warn everyone that this next chapter will likely be somewhat underwhelming, both in length and in quality. There is a reason why I always try to post new chapters within a couple months of posting the previous chapter: because if I take too long updating, I have to get used to writing again. So, this next chapter will possibly be among the least well-written of the story, and will no doubt be very short for how long it's taken to write it, but I still hope you will all enjoy it, and I promise that I will do my best to avoid taking this long to update again.

    Edit: I'm sorry to say, but the update might still be delayed. I am going to do my best to make sure I get it posted by the end of January, but for the time being, my main focus is on trying to write a gift-fic for a good friend of mine.

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  • 77w, 6d
    TVTropes

    Let me start off by saying I am someone who frequents TVTropes, better known as a "troper". I have an entire folder in my favorites/bookmarks for the TVTropes pages of my favorite shows and movies, including, of course, "Friendship is Magic".

    Occasionally, I would check the recommended fanfics for "Friendship is Magic", just to see if there were any stories that I'd be interested in, mostly because I'm a little too lazy to scan through hundreds of stories on a website, even if I use tags or character selection to help make the search more...exact (I know there's a better word for what I'm trying to say, but I can't think of it at the moment). And, one day, I'm scanning through the recommended stories, and I find that someone had listed "Discord Did It", which, of course, made me very proud. I mean, I knew the story had done well (better than I ever expected, especially for my first Pony story), but this was a big deal to me, since this was basically someone saying that other people should read my story.

    Well, a few weeks after I first saw "Discord Did It" on the recommended fic list, I was scanning through again to try and find some more stories to read...and found that "Discord Did It" was gone from the list. I got really worried, and wondered if I had apparently lost whatever had made the story worth recommending when I had last updated the story. So, feeling a little upset, I went to the main fanworks page for "Friendship is Magic", and decided to check out the stories that had their own TVTropes pages. And , as I was going down the list, trying to pick a page to look at, I saw six words that I never imagined I would see on that list in a million years: "Friendship is Magic Discord Did It".

    I have no idea who made the page, but whoever you are, if you happen to be reading this post, I just want to say "Thank you". Just knowing that people really like my story is enough to make me smile like nothing else, but being as into TVTropes as I am, the creation of this page is like a dream come true...as cheesy as that may sound.

    Below is a link to the page, if anyone wants to check it out. As a warning, there's not really a lot to the page at the moment.

    Friendship is Magic Discord Did It

    ((Note: The title of the TVTropes page comes from the title of the story on another website, where I have to include the name of the fandom before the title of the story, in case that confuses anyone.))

    ((Note 2: Also, I am very sorry that "Discord Did It" is still on hiatus. Thankfully, I have started writing again, but it's slow going. I will try to end the hiatus as soon as I can, but when that'll be I can't say. Hopefully this post makes up for it, at least a little bit.))

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  • 80w, 1d
    Hiatus

    Okay, since it's been taking me so long to do the next update, party due to the fact that since the last update I've entered the last part of my college semester (including finals which just ended to day), had my birthday, and just haven't been that motivated to write fanfiction lately, I decided to put "Discord Did It" on hiatus, until the next chapter is ready for upload. The hiatus may last a few days or a few weeks, but hopefully not much longer than that.

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  • 89w, 9h
    Making Up For Lost Time (Q&A)

    To be honest, I'm not entirely sure if I can do this, but since this is a blog post and not a story, I figure the rules are not exactly the same. Besides, I feel like I owe my readers something for dealing with the fact that recently I have taken so long to update, and this is the best thing I could come up with.

    Basically, this is going to be where you can ask my original characters (the ones from Discord Did It) questions. Just try to make sure the questions are safe-for-work, and realize that if answering the question would involve spoilers to either "Discord Did It" or either of the sequels I have planned, I will either be very vague in the answer or I will put the question on hold until answering it will no longer involve spoilers.

    As of right now, here are the characters you can ask questions to:

    Butterscotch

    Velvet Star

    Firestorm

    Roxbury

    Libby

    Meadow Lark

    Token Medal

    Ocean Breeze

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A year after his defeat by the Mane Six, Discord finds himself able to use a bit of chaos energy. However, he isn't able to free himself, so he decides to get revenge on the ponies who trapped him. This is the story of how the girls deal with Discord's revenge scheme, which also means adjusting to something none of them ever expected having to deal with: truly single motherhood.

First Published
22nd Jan 2012
Last Modified
21st Mar 2013
#1 · 147w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Strange......

Continue, I am curious where this is going.....

#2 · 147w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

So..... Discord knocked up the mane 6? that's messed up. :moustache:

Pretty good story though.

#3 · 147w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

So Discord is really The Stork? :derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

???
#4 · 147w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!! I FELL OFF MY CHAIR!!! :rainbowlaugh:

#5 · 147w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

SHIT'S ABOUT TO HIT THE FAN!

#6 · 147w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: this is awesome

#7 · 147w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

HAHA this story is great.

???
#8 · 147w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

i can't wait to see their reactions when they find out the father is discord :rainbowlaugh:

#9 · 147w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

What... the...? Just... what...?

#10 · 147w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

This is actually pretty good, the guy above obviously didn't read the previous chapters.

"I say, twas a fine chapter that was"

*Smashes keyboard*

"ANOTHER!!"

#11 · 147w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

Well... this is... to be honest im not sure what to think here. Tracking out of curiosity.

#12 · 147w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

I'm finding that the long term of this story is either going to show the chaos of having a child, or the children will have chaos powers as they grow older or something of the like, in any case though I await more to be written before I make any real assumptions.

I'm tracking this now :P

#13 · 147w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

this is an interesting read *tracks*

i can picture twi's face at the announcement of the foals... :twilightoops:

#14 · 147w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

"but instantly shut their mothers"

umm, i think you might have missed a spelling error there. :derpytongue2:

other than that, i like how the story is going. :pinkiehappy:

#15 · 147w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

"No harm will come to your foals. I can assure you all that there is no safer place in Canterlot than our castle".

Yeah... That made me laugh. Everypony knows what happens when someone in any story says that some location is perfectly safe...

Hogwarts

Helm's Deep

Ministry of Magic

Needless to say, I think somepony will be missed...

#16 · 147w, 3d ago · · 1 · Chapter 6 ·

First!

#17 · 147w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

>>159242 oh you polite troll you are the first polite one ive seen

#18 · 146w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

>>159606

He's (sorry if I called you a boy if you're actually a girl. :derpyderp1: ) trolling? Hey, if it means this chapter gets a comment, that's fine with me, especially since he's not being a jerk about it.

#19 · 146w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

Ahhh, gonna be a wonderful Nature vs nurture thing innit?

#20 · 146w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

So much D'AWWWWWWWWW in this chapter, also loved little Firestorm's "You Mad?" look to Pinkie:rainbowlaugh:

???
#21 · 146w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

......not enough chaos....but good anyway :pinkiehappy:

#22 · 146w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

>>184291

Firestorm has already perfected his troll-face, as has little Meadow Lark.

#23 · 146w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

welp, this story seems to be very promising. I look forward to more additions.:heart:

#24 · 146w, 8h ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

I like where this is going so far, I just hope the chaos isn't too bad because the cuteness you get from this chapter is amazing XD

#25 · 144w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

all of this cuteness

somethings gonna happen next chapter

SOME ONE GUNNA DIE

#26 · 144w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

pinkie. stop being a "do as i say not as i do" parent.

#27 · 144w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

Its still falls under the lines of adorable, although I have to admit I'm not sure where the babies are headed at this point, I would hope that its not so sinister, as I've read quite enough dark/grimdark for my lifetime.

Also, FIRST!!!

#28 · 144w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

Oh boy.  Things are going to get interesting, aren't they?

#29 · 144w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

This chapter reminded me so much of The Incredible's "Jack-Jack Attack" short.

Personally, I didn't like the idea of having them inherit their father's looks (fangs, red & yellow eyes). I would have focused on the abilities they inherited from their father, such as them breaking the laws of physics and exploding. It's just me, though...

#30 · 144w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

The suspense!

#31 · 144w, 2d ago · · · Prologue ·

umm... lol?

#32 · 144w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

Fun chapter. Suspense and parenthood, very fun chapter :pinkiehappy:.

#33 · 144w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

>>227817

That's your opinion and I'm not going to refute you for it. As for why the foals look the way they do, I don't plan out the appearances of my characters, I just get an image in my head and that's what they look like. So I didn't really have a concious choice in the matter.

And, if it makes you feel any better, the story really won't focus much on their looks, and will focus more on their personalities and abilities.

#34 · 144w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

("Butterscotch…please stop defying the laws of physics…." Pinkie requested.) Pinkie your not one to talk.

I love this story plz make more or ill go insane!!!!

#35 · 144w, 20h ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

>>228491

Please continue ignoring that guy.

I love the way they are developing physical traits as well as magical, can't wait to see which direction this story takes.

#36 · 143w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

One thing that occurred to me while reading this chapter was that I remembered hearing that supposedly human beings are the only species that actually feels pain while giving birth.

#37 · 143w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

>>235503

Well, considering the ponies on this show don't exactly act like normal horses in every aspect, I think I deserve a little leeway here.

#38 · 143w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

>>235513

I know; I just felt like bringing it up is all.

#39 · 143w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

>>235548

Thank you for the education, then. :raritywink:

#40 · 143w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Uh oh.:unsuresweetie:

#41 · 143w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

>>236998

You scared of the baby ponies?

#42 · 143w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

I WISH MY DAD WAS THAT AWESOME

but in all honesty my dad is awesome

#44 · 143w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 9 ·

Kinda feels like it's a bit all over the place. In some places they seem absolutely evil, in others they just seem playful. As for blueblood, well, he kind of deserved it. I have a really hard time ever feeling bad for him.

#45 · 143w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 9 ·

>>258054 Look at most toddlers. They seem either evil or playful depending on who you ask. As for the foals here....well, Libby just didn't like Prince Blueblood, so she wanted to mess with him, Meadow Lark was hungry so she was just getting an easy meal (nature taking its course, basically), and with Firestorm's leg getting broken, it was just rough-housing that went too far, something that happens a lot with kids.

#46 · 143w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 9 ·

>>258065I see your point, and will look forward to more.

#47 · 143w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 9 ·

You ever read the book "Good Omens"? Cause this kinda reminds me of that, in a good way. Satanic powers filtered through childish innocence. Fun times.

#48 · 143w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 9 ·

>>258113 No, I haven't read it. But I've heard it was a good story. What's it about?

#49 · 143w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 9 ·

I enjoyed this chapter. These Foals are adorable in their wacky and childish ways, admittedly, the foal eating the eggs was a little dark, considering that animals are semi-intelligent in the show.

Still that aside I enjoyed this chapter, Blueblood's nightmare warms the canticles of my heart :raritystarry:.

#50 · 143w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 9 ·

>>258116

Well, in a nutshell, it's about a demon named Crowley who is tasked with bringing about the end of the world by having a mother give birth to the anti-Christ. Crowley doesn't really want to do this, since he rather enjoys modern times and the various ways they provide to inflict misery upon humans, but that's higher management for you. Sometimes you just gotta do the sucky jobs. But what happens is when the anti-Christ is born, he accidentally gets switch with another, normal child. The normal child is raised by satanists to bring about the end of the world (which obviously goes nowhere), while the anti-Christ kid lives a normal life in a British suburb. There's a lot more to it than that, but I'll just cut to the chase. The parallels I'm drawing to your story here is that as the story progresses, the anti-Christ kid's evil powers start manifesting. But because he was raised as a more or less normal kid, he doesn't even realize he has them. Whenever he, in his childish naivete, disapproves of something in the world (war, pollution, etc.) he subconsciously removes the offending article from existence. Later on, when he starts to realize his powers, he desires to reshape the world into an ideal child's paradise. No bedtimes, eat whatever you want, no wars, perpetually happy families, etc, etc. He was supposed to be raised to want to destroy the planet, but instead all he wants is for things to remain simple and happy forever. It's like I said, satanic powers filtered through childish innocence. It's a good book, not mention really funny.

These babies have Discord's elderitch powers at their hooves, but have no understanding of the concepts of chaos, beyond a few pranks. They only use their powers to pursue their own split-second desires, much like the anti-Christ kid.

(That was a lot of text, wasn't it?)

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