Strange......

Continue, I am curious where this is going.....

So..... Discord knocked up the mane 6? that's messed up.

Pretty good story though.

So Discord is really The Stork?

BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!! I FELL OFF MY CHAIR!!!

SHIT'S ABOUT TO HIT THE FAN!

this is awesome

HAHA this story is great.

i can't wait to see their reactions when they find out the father is discord

What... the...? Just... what...?

This is actually pretty good, the guy above obviously didn't read the previous chapters.

"I say, twas a fine chapter that was"

*Smashes keyboard*

"ANOTHER!!"

Well... this is... to be honest im not sure what to think here. Tracking out of curiosity.

I'm finding that the long term of this story is either going to show the chaos of having a child, or the children will have chaos powers as they grow older or something of the like, in any case though I await more to be written before I make any real assumptions.

I'm tracking this now :P

this is an interesting read *tracks*

i can picture twi's face at the announcement of the foals...

"but instantly shut their mothers"

umm, i think you might have missed a spelling error there.

other than that, i like how the story is going.

"No harm will come to your foals. I can assure you all that there is no safer place in Canterlot than our castle".

Yeah... That made me laugh. Everypony knows what happens when someone in any story says that some location is perfectly safe...

Hogwarts

Helm's Deep

Ministry of Magic

Needless to say, I think somepony will be missed...

First!

>>159242159242 oh you polite troll you are the first polite one ive seen

>>159606159606

He's (sorry if I called you a boy if you're actually a girl. ) trolling? Hey, if it means this chapter gets a comment, that's fine with me, especially since he's not being a jerk about it.

Ahhh, gonna be a wonderful Nature vs nurture thing innit?

So much D'AWWWWWWWWW in this chapter, also loved little Firestorm's "You Mad?" look to Pinkie

......not enough chaos....but good anyway

>>184291184291

Firestorm has already perfected his troll-face, as has little Meadow Lark.

welp, this story seems to be very promising. I look forward to more additions.

I like where this is going so far, I just hope the chaos isn't too bad because the cuteness you get from this chapter is amazing XD

all of this cuteness

somethings gonna happen next chapter

SOME ONE GUNNA DIE

pinkie. stop being a "do as i say not as i do" parent.

Its still falls under the lines of adorable, although I have to admit I'm not sure where the babies are headed at this point, I would hope that its not so sinister, as I've read quite enough dark/grimdark for my lifetime.

Also, FIRST!!!

Oh boy.  Things are going to get interesting, aren't they?

This chapter reminded me so much of The Incredible's "Jack-Jack Attack" short.

Personally, I didn't like the idea of having them inherit their father's looks (fangs, red & yellow eyes). I would have focused on the abilities they inherited from their father, such as them breaking the laws of physics and exploding. It's just me, though...

The suspense!

umm... lol?

Fun chapter. Suspense and parenthood, very fun chapter .

>>227817227817

That's your opinion and I'm not going to refute you for it. As for why the foals look the way they do, I don't plan out the appearances of my characters, I just get an image in my head and that's what they look like. So I didn't really have a concious choice in the matter.

And, if it makes you feel any better, the story really won't focus much on their looks, and will focus more on their personalities and abilities.

("Butterscotch…please stop defying the laws of physics…." Pinkie requested.) Pinkie your not one to talk.

I love this story plz make more or ill go insane!!!!

>>228491228491

Please continue ignoring that guy.

I love the way they are developing physical traits as well as magical, can't wait to see which direction this story takes.

One thing that occurred to me while reading this chapter was that I remembered hearing that supposedly human beings are the only species that actually feels pain while giving birth.

>>235503235503

Well, considering the ponies on this show don't exactly act like normal horses in every aspect, I think I deserve a little leeway here.

>>235513235513

I know; I just felt like bringing it up is all.

>>235548235548

Thank you for the education, then.

Uh oh.

>>236998236998

You scared of the baby ponies?

Image: http://th737.photobucket.com/albums/xx19/GabeCube/Internet%20Craziness/th_1273540195415.jpg

I WISH MY DAD WAS THAT AWESOME

but in all honesty my dad is awesome

>>237021237021

eeeeyup

Kinda feels like it's a bit all over the place. In some places they seem absolutely evil, in others they just seem playful. As for blueblood, well, he kind of deserved it. I have a really hard time ever feeling bad for him.

>>258054258054 Look at most toddlers. They seem either evil or playful depending on who you ask. As for the foals here....well, Libby just didn't like Prince Blueblood, so she wanted to mess with him, Meadow Lark was hungry so she was just getting an easy meal (nature taking its course, basically), and with Firestorm's leg getting broken, it was just rough-housing that went too far, something that happens a lot with kids.

>>258065258065I see your point, and will look forward to more.

You ever read the book "Good Omens"? Cause this kinda reminds me of that, in a good way. Satanic powers filtered through childish innocence. Fun times.

>>258113258113 No, I haven't read it. But I've heard it was a good story. What's it about?

I enjoyed this chapter. These Foals are adorable in their wacky and childish ways, admittedly, the foal eating the eggs was a little dark, considering that animals are semi-intelligent in the show.

Still that aside I enjoyed this chapter, Blueblood's nightmare warms the canticles of my heart .

>>258116258116

Well, in a nutshell, it's about a demon named Crowley who is tasked with bringing about the end of the world by having a mother give birth to the anti-Christ. Crowley doesn't really want to do this, since he rather enjoys modern times and the various ways they provide to inflict misery upon humans, but that's higher management for you. Sometimes you just gotta do the sucky jobs. But what happens is when the anti-Christ is born, he accidentally gets switch with another, normal child. The normal child is raised by satanists to bring about the end of the world (which obviously goes nowhere), while the anti-Christ kid lives a normal life in a British suburb. There's a lot more to it than that, but I'll just cut to the chase. The parallels I'm drawing to your story here is that as the story progresses, the anti-Christ kid's evil powers start manifesting. But because he was raised as a more or less normal kid, he doesn't even realize he has them. Whenever he, in his childish naivete, disapproves of something in the world (war, pollution, etc.) he subconsciously removes the offending article from existence. Later on, when he starts to realize his powers, he desires to reshape the world into an ideal child's paradise. No bedtimes, eat whatever you want, no wars, perpetually happy families, etc, etc. He was supposed to be raised to want to destroy the planet, but instead all he wants is for things to remain simple and happy forever. It's like I said, satanic powers filtered through childish innocence. It's a good book, not mention really funny.

These babies have Discord's elderitch powers at their hooves, but have no understanding of the concepts of chaos, beyond a few pranks. They only use their powers to pursue their own split-second desires, much like the anti-Christ kid.

(That was a lot of text, wasn't it?)

>>258136258136 If it makes you feel any better, Meadow Lark doesn't understand what death is, so her eating the eggs wasn't out of a desire to be cruel, but rather a desire to get some food. Plus, Fluttershy didn't exactly teach her that bird EGGS are still considered friends rather than food. Meadow gets that she can't hurt or eat the animals that are moving around, but to her, eggs are just meals. She'll learn, though.

>>258145258145 Well, now I have to read that book. Wonder if the library would have it...

>>258145258145 damn I think I'll need to check out that book. Terry Pratchett wrote it, if I'm not mistaken, but I haven't had time to buy and read that one, I'm still getting my hooves on one or two Discworld books.

Fluttershy will realy need to be more Assertive to handle Medow lark or this will not end well.

>>258378258378 Motherhood is going to teach her how to toughen up and definitely be more assertive.

>>258386258386 eather that or Fluttershy will have a breakdown when she realice her daughter have killed animals.

so does each baby have an enhanced trait passed from the mother?

>>260473260473 Can you maybe explain what you mean a little better? That way I can explain things better.

Another great chapter.

I don't really have any questions or comments other then good job and around about how long till next chapter.

>>263338263338 I really can't say how long it will be until the next chapter. It could be anywhere from a few days to a few months, especially now that I'm working on other projects as well.

The scene with Fluttershy and her daughter reminded a wee bit too much off that gorefic over on fanfiction (FluTteR I think?) where Fluttershy also gives birth to a catlike pony except it happens to be a thousand year demon that slowly corrupts her and turns her into a murderous monster.  

>>268579268579 I was somewhat inspired by that. But, don't worry, Meadow won't be like Blackthorn was in that story. She'll be able to supress her urge to hunt for food and kill living things. She and her brothers and sisters will still hunt, but it'd basically be tag.

Love Roxburys powers it makes him like 20% cooler

May God help them when they try to get cutie marks. Also why do I think Diamond Tiara and Silverspoon are going to be a problem.

>>299286299286 Well, considering one of them has the special talent of creating explosives....I think it's safe to say them discovering their cutie mark talents is going to be...interesting.

>>299160299160 Glad you liked his power. It took me a while to figure out what he would be able to do. For the others, I had a basic idea from the beginning. Firestorm can basically cause things to combust with his mind (including his own body). Butterscotch can simply ignore the laws of physics entirely. Velvet can essentially turn herself into a part of a painting or any piece of art that is on a wall or a window. Meadow Lark has a mixture of Fluttershy's stare and mind-control. And Libby has telepathy and illusions.

Love it can't wait for next Chapter!!!

>>299438299438

I thought of a good cuitie mark for a explosives expert

two sticks of dynamite in a v shape with the wick's looped back over.

but I don't think who your talking about would enjoy anything even vaegly heart shaped

>>301782301782 Most likely his cutie mark is going to be either something like that, a mushroom-cloud, or a bomb.

Fun chapter, love the Foals in this one, do they get to keep the dragon too? All will be answered in the next chapter, I'm sure of it.

>>299450299450 its like x-men but ponys

why has nobody said ALL HAIL MEADOW LARK

>>312365312365 I didn't even think of that reference, and I love that show. Congratulations, here is your free internet. *Hands over one internet*

This, is not going to end well

i wanna see what goes on in ponyville btw youre awesome cupcakes  my face if more ::my face if no more

>>359089359089 Don't worry. Not only will there be more of this story...but I'm making this a series.

yay im a happy brony now

love it love it LOVE IT

i can't wait for the next chapters!!!!

>>384774384774 Well, I'm working on the next chapter right now!

Is it weird that I was playing the theme to Rosemary's Baby while I was reading this chapter? Personally I did not  want to read this story cause it seemed a little bit messed up but now I can't stop reading, it's so dark and twisted I want more please?

Wait just read the 1st chapter and then clicked on without commenting so Discord just inpregnated the elements?

>>469260469260 Pretty much, yes.

>>470330470330 Read all so far i enjoyed it so any idea when theres going to be more?

>>470432470432 Within the week, probably.

I just realized that the half zebra was the 'Token' character. Well played.

>>478746478746 Yeah, sort of stole that from South Park a little. The only African-American kid in the show is named "Token Black". But I wantd to be more "clever" so I called my character Token Medal, to play on the fact that tokens are metal coins, and his father and uncle are Gold and Bronze.

i realy hope someone figures out that Medow lark can hypnotice others before somthing realy bad happens...

and maybe Twilight should look into finding a magic dampening spell for Liby...

Been waiting for an update forever. You did not disappoint RESPECT *Brohoof*

Great chapter, plenty to make me smile and chuckle and just gosh darn entertaining overall .

>>479271479271 Glad you enjoyed it. I'll try to make sure the next chapter doesn't take as long.

That cliffhanger last sentence…

>>480656480656 Good cliffhanger or bad?

>>480718480718 Ominous, I would say.

Great story thus far. I look forward to seeing how the ultimate battle of nature versus nurture plays out. Definitely following this...

Oh. Hello, Butterscotch. Could you be a dear and go back into the story, please? And tell your mother I say "Hi."

>>482982482982 Well, the idea of the story is "nature versus nurture". The foals are naturally inclined to cause trouble and chaos (though at this point in their lives they aren't fully aware that nobody else can do what they can do and so they're just having fun or being babies) but you know their mothers are going to try and make them ignore the urges to spread and create chaos. Luckily, they will listen to their mothers enough to not plunge the world into chaos. Downside is that they will live much, much, much, much longer than their mothers, so who knows what'll happen when the Mane Six have died?

Butterscotch: I don't wanna go back into the story. This place is a lot more fun! *Grows some claws and starts playing with a Gameboy*

>>483017483017

We're doomed.

MORE PLS!!

Those six can cause some REALLY chaos now.

>>649130649130

Six ponies with chaos powers in the Everfree Forest? We're screwed.

6 virgin births...is Discord god?

Tau Sunflare

Lauren Faust

I see what you did there!

>>649168649168 Well, calling the pony version of Lauren Faust "Tau Sunflare" wasn't my idea. It's apparently a common name for Pony-Faust among the fans.