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The Art of Lounging


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Many people are set into a single frame of mind, sure that there can be nothing left to explore, nothing left to learn now that the vast maw of space has been tamed. You were one such person.

It was a normal day for you, slacking off in between deliveries for your job as an express courier whilst you try to pull some artistic inspiration from your view into a nebula. No one could have predicted that said nebula would collapse as you flew through it.

Now you find yourself on terrain unknown, where just daily life seems confusing and surreal while adventure that stretches the imagination waits right around the corner. Friends will be made, hardships will be overcome, and horizons will be broadened.

You are Anonymous, and this is your story.

(Rating subject to change. More tags will be added as story progresses. Please give me your honest opinion)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 45 )

Good. I like it.
The part where they measured his unconscious brainwaves made me smile.

i loved that the clangs were getting slowly louder adds tension

omg i love it i cant wait for the next chapter

GAAAAAAAAH *brain hemorage*

Hmm...I wonder if the human is going to end up being really strong compared to the ponies, since Earth has higher gravity.
(Higher G = Stronger muscles to deal with it. If you want an example, just look at the Elcor from Mass Effect)

/Oh man, can you please update again? thjat was incredibly awesome!

yay, new chapter:pinkiehappy:

EDIT: wow, that was great, finally a meeting with an alien that actually makes sense instead of the ponies just accepting it and just be happy about it like it was an everyday thing.

i love it, keep up the GREAT work! i expect much of youand this story, pretty sure we all do!

this should have WAY more likes by the way.

I'm just waiting till they realize that the mask isn't his face....

2008617 yeah that'll be a blast:pinkiehappy: they will think that he is ripping of his own face:rainbowlaugh:

also i would like to see their reaction to a holograph:rainbowlaugh:

Without even realizing what you're doing, you reach an arm out and scratch the unicorn right behind her ear, drawing a chorus of gasps from the onlookers. She stiffens in surprise, before a dopey smile finds its way to her face as she leans into your hand, as if trying to get you to scratch harder.

You pull your hand away but remain crouched, mentally berating yourself for taking such a huge step out of your boundaries.

Scratch all the ponies behind the ears!

>Next update should be in a few days, then my speed will drop to about one update a week for real.
how horrifying
i just cant get enough!
maby an update every 2 days? id even be fine with 3...

this is getting really good

With only 23 days left on this strange world, Captain Olimar, with the help of these strange..... wait, no that's a different story.

Although if there were ponies in Pikmen that game would've been over day one

another great chapter:pinkiehappy: keep up the good work!

and thank you for writing their reaction to a hologram :pinkiehappy:

this is by far one of my favourite stories

Oh man these chapters are delightfully good
keep up the awesome work man 10/10

cant wait to see how ponyville reacts to him

Just found this gem and... wow. It's so very rare to find a "hard sci-fi" HiE story. Well, not super hard SF like Asimov but you know what I mean. Every HiE cliche has been blown away so far which just adds to the irresistible attraction.

I'm throwing all my favs at the screen but only one stuck, sorry. I am most assuredly tracking you.

As I can only favorite and like once, I will instead give you mustaches. Just cause.:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

You know what? This story sucks! I mean really, if its from the future, why do I have to wait a week for a new chapter!? :flutterrage:

I'm just jerking your chain, this is really, really good! I can't wait for Ch V! :rainbowkiss:

2002711 This, coupled with a number of other factors, make me think of only one thing. Just the first two minutes, though.

This is amazingly entertaining I expect great things from you

A very strong start. This story has so far shown both a good concept and execution, consider me along for the ride.

I'm lovin' it so far artful. Gonna be waiting in the threads for more.

Simplistic Equine language, go!

In other words, plot! YUS

Anonymous, Luna, he has a name” Celestia gently chides

I'm going to leave this Irony right here...

how does this not have more likes its really good so far

I swear if the ponies and human both speak the same language...

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certainly no language you've ever even heard of.

Oh thank god.

2014333 When I read this, Pikmin was the first thing that came to mind. Glad to know I wasn't alone.

They had all the facial expressiveness of a human, get you noticed that affectionate gestures and contact were by no means in short supply despite it being less hassle to convey emotion otherwise.

They had all the facial expressiveness of a human, yet you noticed that affectionate gestures and contact were by no means in short supply despite it being less of a hassle to convey emotion otherwise.


which would mean he would know the words that have no idea what order to put them in and us talking to him with just be confusing gibberish.”

which would mean he would know the words but have no idea what order to put them in and us talking to him with just be confusing gibberish.”


Slipping off the hazard suit and letting it’s bits and pieces fall to the floor, you sit back and the leather seat and drift off, dreams of ponies dancing within your mind

Slipping off the hazard suit and letting it’s bits and pieces fall to the floor, you sit back in the leather seat and drift off, dreams of ponies dancing within your mind


She says, watching a star should across the sky.

She says, watching a star shoot/streak across the sky.


The peace treaty states that we are not allowed to hide events of this magnitude participant in the treaty, and the landing of the alien is sure to cause a storm of political intrigue.”

The peace treaty states that we are not allowed to hide events of this magnitude from other participants in the treaty, and the landing of the alien is sure to cause a storm of political intrigue.”


emergency situations take pretense over obligations

emergency situations take precedence over obligations

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Thanks for these, English is not my first language so I tend to miss things here and there.

The unicorn gets to her feet and looks down

Feet

Feet

Feet

*Hooves.* :twilightsmile:

Favorite! Also, I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter(which I hope arrives soon).
I will stick with you till the end :yay:


This is great!^_^

A good fanfic!^_^

I like this!^_^

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Love this, man, just love it. I hope to see more at some point.

I am liking it so far. Although I cannot stop imagining he looks like Moltar from coast to coast. Just with more tech stuck to the outside of him and cameras instead of a view port.
1.bp.blogspot.com/_abU55e6yt-c/THQY5AraaMI/AAAAAAAAAO0/QQLi0uhr4_s/s400/moltar-reading.jpg
Here he is reading a book.:trollestia:

Pretty well-done there, theyre acting quite rationally too, and you put your own spin on things...now lets see if it goes anywhere.

Why do all the good stories get abandoned?

what a good story! i sure hope it hasnt been abandoned since the last 10 years!

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