Like many of us, Twilight likes to start her day with a piping hot cup of caffeinated bean juice. But when she wakes up one morning to find that her can is empty, she sends Spike out on a mission to fetch her a fresh cup before her scheduled study time.
What could be easier?
Poor Spike. Today's just not his day.
I felt that the Coffee Cake joke was a bit morbid for a story like this, but it did make sense in context. Otherwise, nice work.
Nice Story. I especially liked the ending.
That's why you always keep secret stash of coffee (and vodka, and gunpowder, and sugar, and salt, and soap, and coal and trowing axes). You newer know when you need them.
i can relate to twilight much too well
1996321 I DID think it was a little morbid for a first joke, but I couldn't resist the temptation to use the phrase "bean-grinding accident".
1996341 Thanks!
1996346 Oh, ESPECIALLY throwing axes.
1996356 Can't we all?
Great job, Poor Spike.
Haha~ Bravo good sir! For once, a story like this genuinely made me laugh.
Usually I get sick and tired of the "(Insert pony/dragon) goes to/does (Insert activity or item)" kind of stories, I actually found myself laughing to myself. Props to you!
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Okay, I lost it at that point. And the bit with Xavier's oddly-specific hatred was also hilarious.
Overall, I found the story to be amusing; the pacing seemed very fast, even breakneck at times, but unless I'm mistaken, that was sort of the point. So all in all, well done!
Cute farce-work here.
Poor Spike, we all know that feeling of having to go just a single day without our daily cup.
Great job with this!
This was the first thing comes in my ming when i read it
Someone needs to write a fic. addressing the issue of Spike abuse. Anyways, nice story.
This was really fun to read Good job!
“It means FAILURE, Spike! FAILURE!!” screamed Twilight. She grabbed Spike by the shoulders and started violently shaking him. “FAILURE, FAILURE, FAILURE, FAILURE, FAILURE-“
I could see this gag being in the actual show
Neurotic Twilight is funniest Twilight. Very good story. Perfect timing on the jokes. Kinda saw the ending coming though.
Nice madcap comedy. It wasn't as hilarious as it probably could have been, but there were plenty of moments that made me laugh.
i dont know if twilight is trolling spike or she just forgot about the spare or the author just got addicted on playing temple run
This... Should be an episode in season 5. I would die of laughter if I saw this on tv.
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Hi, Wilde! I really think this is funny! I made an audio drama out of it. i hope you don't mind. Don't worry, I gave you full credit! Please check it out? It's called "(MLP SHORT AUDIO DRAMA) Coffee Run: Run Spike Run" on my channel EMosite CC