It has only been a short while since Discord was released from his prison of stone, and reformed in order to use his powers for good. However, what is it that he is required to do now?
It's up to Discord how he decides what he's going do with the freedom Celestia has gifted to him. He needs to get in touch with the Friendship of Magic, and quickly, before he finds it hard to fit in.
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likewise, ditto, me too, etc.
Discord + Trollestia = Equestria is screwed!!
yes! i like where this is going! X3
This is SO GOOD!
I love the heartfelt feel to this chapter, hopefully this theme shall continue.
Keep up the good work!
Suite at the castle? Awesome. I'd have placed him in the Everfree Forest at the ancient castle of the royal pony sisters. Maybe after sprucing it up a bit. Story looks good so far though. I did notice a couple typos though, don't know if you fixed them already or not.
In this paragraph:
There's an extra space between "reformed" and "Discord". And later, when Discord was checking into his room for the first time, there's a "T.The" in the middle of the paragraph.
Awesome beginning. Don't make it like my stories and start off with an awesome premise only to squander it with poor writing in later chapters
2002111 Thanks for that, I don't like there to be too many spelling mistakes in my work so when they're pointed out to me, it's very helpful
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I aim to please ^_^
That cover image...
Poor Discord!
lol nice
Discord trying to pass his time without chaos.....this should be good >:3
I bet he's gonna start working at a prank shop.
Sacks of Flour, for all your romancing needs! Just drop one on someone's head (really, anyone. It doesn't matter who) and all your romance-related troubles will be solved! Side effects include, but are not limited to: becoming covered in flour, gaining humorous stories to retell later, losing the respect of others, looking rather silly, straining yourself by lifting too many bags of flour, laughter, chuckling, giggling, smirking, and spontaneously turning into a fish.
I have to be honest, Celestia seems to out of character, I'll continue reading, But Celestia isn't as stern as she needs to be.