• Member Since 7th Jan, 2012
  • offline last seen 56 minutes ago

TheMessenger


Amateur fanfic writer and reader. Sometimes I get dreams, dreams of ponies, and wish that someone would write a story based off them. So why not me?

E

Under the employment of Sigmund Corp., Dr. Eva Rosalene and Dr. Neil Watts have often been tasked with the seemingly impossible. Their job? To grant those on their last breath a chance to fulfill their heart's desire through the alteration of memories.

Eva and Neil are often tasked with the seemingly impossible. They reunited a man with a brother long dead and helped him reach to the stars and to the moon to find lost love.

How hard can it be then to help a man see his daughter one last time?

A To the Moon crossover

No prior knowledge necessary.




An unofficial, fan-made sequel to My Little Dashie by ROBCakeran53. You can find it here.

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 35 )

Interesting... Loving it!

Comment posted by wiiman deleted Mar 12th, 2014

Well decided to read it. Good fic so far.

How is this not more popular?

4228191 I agree with the person with the strange profile pic.

4230580
4228191
Feel free to throw it in any group you deem appropriate.

Review request acknowledged. 37k will take some time....but I can do it.:ajbemused:

4308796
Oh, sorry. Someone else requested a review on this. Possibility of me promoting it if I feel it deserving.

They really should have asked you first.

4308839
Well I'll leave it to you then. If you want a review and a shot at my promotion just let me know, otherwise I'll leave.

4308850
Y'know what, go right ahead. It's not like I've got anything to lose, and if it helps others who'd might enjoy this story find it I'm all for it.

I mean, it's not like you'd tell all your readers to go here just to thumb it down.

4308899
That's plan F.U. saved for three people on this site:twilightsheepish:

You're not one of them.:twilightblush:

Did like this one, hope to see more soon.

Good chapter, as always.

4614328
Thanks, sorry it took so long.

The chapters are worth the wait as always :)
You get a moustache :moustache:

I'm assuming that RD is his metaphorical daughter.

Why, ain't that just a heartbreaker?

Well, that was a nice ride. Now to go read other things you've written and I've been ignoring.

A bit sad to see it come to an end, but good things don't last. Tnx for writing this and I hope to see a lot of future work soon.

Spot-on characterization! From the dialogue to small little actions, Neil and Eva are just like I remember them from the game. I think the references were a little forced, but the conversations still managed to put a smile on my face.

"Pfft, no." Eva threw a hand full of popcorn into her mouth. "It's all about the crashes."

Favorite line of the chapter above.

Honestly, I could not ask for better execution of the characters (at least at surface level). There's still a fair number of chapters to go, so I expect an exploration of their depiction in the game at the critical points in the story. Nevertheless, this is a fun, lighthearted read so far!

I got here so far. My biggest complain is that as far as I remember from reading My Little Dashie, Act 2 is copy paste of it with one sentence or two changed or added to include Neil and Eva

5776358
Not to mention the switch from first person to third person narrative, a more detailed explanation to how the character got money for the new house, the process of selling and buying the new house, why they had to move in the first place, how he got a new job, an expanded telling of Dash's maturation, introduction of additional characters besides those from To the Moon...

One sentence or two changed indeed.

I am legitamently upset right now mate. This kind of stuff always makes me sad when I read them, and though I k ow it's gonna be sad, I still hope for a happy ending that isn't gonna be full of tear inducing stuff... But you still did a great job mate.

That "Cupcakes!" reference.

I really enjoyed seeing a crossover with this particular game on FF.net. I never thought I would actually find one! TBH, I'm planning on writing one myself, with it being set in the EqG universe. The premise will be that unicorn scientists in Canterlot came up with the tech that can do the memory alteration thing, and then Princess Twilight gets a message in the journal from Rainbow Dash, asking her to come and help her give Scoots her last wish; to be able to live a full life. No spoilers here, but I can guarantee you that this is gonna be a tearjerker!

What a madlad, defying physics and reality just to get to see his daughter back. Robert has transcended beyond bronies.

Login or register to comment