Caramel can't seem to do anything right. When he finds he has a crush on a certain purple unicorn, this proves doubly true.
Story now coming out Bi-weekly thanks to Sanctus, more soon!
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
hilarious at how much i am like poor carmel when i try to talk up the lady styles... hopeing you continue this
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
really looking foreward to the next installment of this under-sea epic inspired by Jack Caruak's novel "Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace." The fact that you managed to keep Gandalf and Dobby in character speaks volumes about your musical skill. And that part with the lima beans and the car chase? Priceless!
go get her tiger!
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
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wtf
Cn you feel Da Magic in the air
ha, that was unexpected! really loving this story,i honestly thought Twilight was just being friendly!
AWWW they are so cute. Ahh young love. It's like a cupcake with Elite yellow icing
.
I am very happy with this. SOO CUUTE.
well, if a glir like Twilgiht tryied to talk to me, i'd proabablly give her a generic answer, walk away and spend the next month asking me why in the hay i did that. Even caramel is better at girls than me.
I dont usually read romantic fics, but i liekd this one
This is a very good story
The writing is pretty darn good.
The characters are handled well.
The content is neatly put together; we have these moments of appropriately apportioned drama woven together with cute moments like at the end of this chapter.
I'm enjoying it quite a bit and looking forward to more.
I'm quite happy about the positive response everyone! Here's the final chapter, I hope you all enjoy!
Comments appreciated as always!
lovely story
Ahhh, shame it has to end...
great nonetheless, although i wouldnt be disapointed if you added another chapter or two!
D'aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww
And that was absolutely adorable. Wonderful story.
Dawww what a cute story
Great story. I find it funny he can now not only sell apples, but might be able to start a sign business on the side.
Adorable story, it just enforces my liking for this pairing, and i do hope someone makes a pic of the sign.
Excellent. Just a few grammar mistakes here and there ("too" instead of "to", etc.).
Seriously, this is how Twilight shipping should be, imo.
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FFUUU---
I need MOAR!
This is too good to let it end here!
Think of your fans!
...Please?
love it
I said it before and I'll say it again...YOUNG LOVE IS SO ADORABLE. ESPECIALLY THESE TWO
.
The Fluttershy demands more though
. And I want more too. PLEEEAAAASSSSEEEE
moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar
But... but it was just getting adorable!
On a scale of one to YOU-BETTER-MAKE-IT-NOW(
) how likely is a sequel or continuation?
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I'll second that D'aaww and add some more d'aaww!
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Well...I could write another short series of chapter next week...where Twilight goes to dinner at Caramel's house...
That story had me "D'aww"-ing and smiling all the way through!
Simply lovely!
(And I join in those who want a continuation. 83)
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THANK YOU!!! 
You rock!
"Why am I so delicious?"
Must...have...more...It was so d'aww. I need to read more fanfics like this. They just leave me so happy.
I just made an account just so I could follow this.
this isn't the end it can't be
Its like an addiction after its done you still want more!
This was a very nice story, and I enjoyed reading it very much. The ending, however, was a bit sudden. I do hope you plan to either continue it, or write a sequel (Perhaps a series? I know I'd love to read more about these two
).
Anyways, great job...
Very nicely done, I really enjoyed it. You have earned a watch, and not a gold one.
but... its... COMPLETE!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I agree!
Oh dear Celestia this is so adorable!
Aww...I love this stroy, but the ending was far too soon. It seemed like this story was just beginning.
Omg, Caramel sounds SOOO much like my BF.
I don't often read romantic stuff, but you always do good work Squeak.
So is this complete? The story says incomplete here and complete on EQD.
Either way, love this story. Caramel is soooo adorkable, and seeing his luck change at the end really made my day.
Please let there be more! please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh man, I just figured out why I like this story so much.
Caramel is so much like me. The socially awkward clumsy screw-up that still manages to find love.
wait... you changed it from complete to incomplete?
THERE IS A GOD
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More Caramel!