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Rainbow dash goes to the ever free forest one day and goes missing.
So Twilight and her friends decide to go looking for her, but what will happen when they meet the Slender pony? Will they ever escape the forest with their lives alive?
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This is a great story so far I haven't noticed any errors.
So keep up the good work!
Great use of a cliff hanger!
I noticed you spelled cost wrong it's coast, but besides that it was great!
Thanks it's not really great, cause it's my first time writing about Slender man.
Oh thanks for the tip I'll try to fix that spelling error.
I'll be sure to read this later...
I'm still working in this chapter and I will fix my errors and mistakes.
I'll try to make Zecora talk in rhymes ok?
I love it so much
That was very good, other tan grammar keep going.
What a creepy ending Lovemare.
I noticed some errors in this chapter as I was reading make sure you correct those ok?
But besides that I was at the edge of my seat asking for more.
Great work! But ask someone to help you edit this story okay? And once you get more
writing experience you should write a sequel to this story.
Um ok then
Ah hell no! Not the go to sleep. Shitfuckaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrggghhhh!
I love it
WAIT WAIT WAIT...the slender pony...just... dropped rainbow dash? BULL SH*T THE SLENDER PONY CAN EASILY TAKE ON ANYTHING the slender pony is slender man in pony form which means he is still basically slender man and the slender man is invincible to litiraly everything including the elements of harmony and also god YES SLENDER MAN CANT EVEN BE KILLED BY GOD and i should know because i did alto (about a years worth) of research so that whole him running away is invalid
Slender man isn't real by the way and neither is Slender pony.
In my sequel Slender pony comes back to get his revenge.
It's called 'Slender pony's revenge'
THERE SHOULD HAVE BEEN CUPCAKES
Well done
1996817 Actually Slendermane's cannon.
oh well shit...
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Bill Cipher vs Slender Man. Should totally happen.
Finished with the first chapter, pretty good start! Really enjoyed Zecora’s dialog lol
Good story, and an interesting one too, but I noticed a few flaws.
1st
- Who takes casual walks in the forest when they cant sleep in the middle of the night?
2nd
- I'm suprised that not one of the Mane Six hasn't gone insane or started hallucinating after having multiple encounters with the slenderpony.