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TheNextGamer


I'm totally sophisticated and smart. You see that cute kid in the picture? He represents my very soul... and my expert use with Google Images. I AM SMART DAMMIT

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(I kinda setup my own rules on changelings logic. So if there are any other changeling stories that have different logic, I won't follow it.)
[2nd POV] A changeling is a mindless slave, and was only born to serve Queen Chrysalis. It does not have feelings, so it does not feel remorse. A changeling cannot think or choose for itself, as it is not sentient. It only moves without question, and only constantly feed off of the love of ponies. Since it is not sentient, it cannot be befriended, cannot learn to communicate, and cannot feel love. Its sole-purpose is to feed off love out of every pony alive.
But... that doesn't seem to apply to you.
The day you met that one unicorn, was the day you began asking, questioning your own existence.
Ever since the fall of Queen Chrysalis, she was nowhere to be found. Your siblings can't seem to do anything without her guidance, and slowly, each one of your siblings begin to die out. As an endangered changeling in hiding, you use your newly discovered free-will and wits to try to find out the answer to your question. Trying to solve it before you die. "Who am I now?"
(I guess now that i think about it, I just made changelings the equivalent to zombies. And you are a.... Sentient zombie?)
On hiatus for the moment. Until I get my shit together, this story is going to just linger there for some moments.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 213 )

actually like so far, faved and liked, waiting for the next chapter

1976929 Thanks! I'm working it out soon. Glad you enjoyed my story!

Your title, I don't think it means what you think it means. Other than that, the rapid switching between present and past tense along with the lack of indentation makes this hard to read.

1978911 The title seemed like a good idea at the time! "Changeling That became Sentient" Doesnt really seem like a good title. I work what i get....

1979884 Ah, if you're trying to say that a changeling became self aware you mean "Changeling With a Consciousness." Having a consciousness is a state of will inherent inside people, conscious means you're awake and is only something you can be, not have.

1979895 .... GENIUS! Fuck me for not thinking about that! Thanks alot!:pinkiehappy:

1980031 Glad you found this interesting. I am working on more chapters as we speak

Hmm i like this Story so far, the only complain I have is that it is a 'You'-Story.

1980576 Well it is 2nd POV.
So it's suppose to be 'You' in the story.
But I'm glad you like it! That just means i'm not doing a shit job!

Not bad.I believe this story will be worth the wait.:twilightsmile:

1980599
i know, i know it is just that 'You'-stories try to make a connection between the protagonist and the reader by using the 'You' and it Never worked for me. Heck you could just name the protagonist 'You' and it woudl have the same effect for me(well there was a story which did exactly that).
But hey i'm a fan of Changelings, i have the opinion that Twilight is best Pony and i like the 'strange outcast'-Stories. So i will read it (and weep:scootangel:)

1980703
Amazingly, I got the idea of this story by watching a lot of zombie movies, reading alot of romance fanfic, and been eating alot of toothpaste. I think it was mostly the toothpaste.
I'm gonna work on a chapter 3 soon. This might be good for you, since part of it is in 3rd person. Probably.

1980720
Now i kinda wanna know what kind of toothpaste you ate,sadly it is very lilely that i'm gonna regret if i ask:twilightoops:

1981371 uh.... yes indeed... uhm... yes what now?

1981539 idk, I just thought 'Yes!'. Something original in this story.

1981763 Original? Wow, I hoped so. Glad you liked it!

I like this story. I really do. I'm about to read second chapter.
My grammar nazi sense will kick in when needed. So far, I've noticed only a few minor mistakes.
with that said... CHANGELINGS!!!

1982372 Unleash your grammar correcting powers upon me! I shall follow each command!
But I'm glad you enjoyed it. :P

Hmmm... This gets more and more awesome with every chapter.
Comparing awesomeness of chapter 2 to one of chapter 1 it got...
*puts on sunglasses*
...20% cooler.
YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAH!!!

1982413
Well in chapter 3, it might seem dull for a little bit, as it is switches to 3rd person on another character that may or may not have a huge impact on the plot.
But i added some funny jokes in there. Thank you!

I'm loving it! You update fast and I couldn't be any happier *sniff* it brings a tear to my eye :fluttercry:...

Wow. I found no mistakes. I'm impressed. My grammar nazi sense is still bugging me though.
I know! I'll go use facebook now! My semi-retarded friends will satiate my grammar nazi sense!!!

1982441
Don't get too happy.
I am right now in what you call a "Writers Block"
Don't worry though, usually a healthy dose of toothpaste poisoning will help me out.

1982444
I try my best to not get any mistakes in there.
Because I actually fucking speak English.

I have read all your chapter thus far. I like what you are doing with it. I am just waiting to see if/when this changeling and Twilight meet. As well as where. Either way keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

1982671 If this changeling and Twilight will never meet, then why did I add a "romance" tag? HMM?:ajsmug:
Anyway, don't worry. You are slowly trotting your way to Ponyville right now.
I'm glad you enjoyed my story too! thanks alot!

1982684
I don't know. I might have ended up with Pinkie Pie.:pinkiecrazy: After all, she tries to make friends with EVERYBODY!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

1982916
Oh god, if I wasn't the author of this story, Pinkie Pie would be the death of that changeling.
Haha, anyway, if you want to know when the story will update, favorite this story. It will also help me out alot!

Still like it
Keep going please!:pinkiesmile:

I'm guessing were going to Ponyville?Great!:ajbemused:Now Pinkie's gonna throw a "Welcome to Ponyville!" party after her pinkie sense goes off,and we all know that will.

I'm also making my own story about my oc,but It's just going terribly.I must get better at desribing!Through sci- I mean through reading.:twilightblush:

1985289
Yes... reading... of course...

MM! Juicy! :pinkiecrazy:
I'm guessing you should know by now that since everypony is hunting down all the changelings, this means that 'You' are going to wear a disguise.
Kudos to those who know what the disguise will be, since it should be obvious.. :twilightsmile:

1985303
Let's see.....not an earth pony.......an alicorn would draw alot of attention....and I believe we,or I,want to get the beautiful purple unicorn's attention soooooo......I will disguise myself as a unicorn and impress her with ma- OW!STUPID TREES!

1985342
Haha! Oh, you used my running in a tree-gag against me!
But no, it's something better. Not just any ole pony.
You'll see. :raritywink:

"...Why do I get the feeling that my entire race is going to be screwed?"

Why do I have feeling's that he was the one funny changeling who was hit when PinkiePie used Twilight as Gatling gun , on the other side she hit many of them, so I run out of ideas.

Still, he sounds more like he was cured by Pinkie then by Twilight, but who I am to judge.

1985678
Not really, It was the power of love at first sight, that helped transform this changeling into something better.

Finally got around to reading this.... And hated it.




It's so awesome compared to mine. I ish jelly. xD Gj.

1988348 I can help you write like me.
Here, care for some toothpaste poisoning? :ajsmug:

To be perfectly honest, I too am at a writers block. I feel your pain brudda :fluttershysad:.

Still a good chapter though, but I would have liked it if we knew if he chose pegasus, unicorn, or just a regular earth pony.

2004345
Well... maybe you have? Hmm?:ajsmug:
It's "You" so you decide! It won't really change alot of shit for the story, but you know.
I like the option of freedom for imagination.
Glad you enjoyed my story!

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