Princess Celestia, worried for her sister, decides while reading the latest friendship report from her faithful student to send Princess Luna away. But not to the moon. To Ponyville. To learn the magic of Friendship.
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The title sounds like a night with my friends when we're all baked as fuck.
I noticed the floor swimming, quite quickly, up to give my face a much need hug.
yep, thats Twilight alright^^ hehe^^ cant wait to read more of this^^
You sir have nailed Twilight's personality great job. i might use this as a reference it's so good
And let the insanity ensue
no romance tag? * disappointed*
no romance tag? * relieved*
concept is good. I'm glad you didn't make this a TwiLuna. Beyond being a cliched shipping, that whole scenario is cliched. So many cliche.
anywho, good stuff. EVH salutes you!
This is going to be one interesting story......
I agree with the others - this is twilight
Like!
Looks good and promising. Nice start. Do not fail me, comrade author. :)
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Thanks. I hope I don't let you down!
The story looks nice, but I would suggest getting an editor. The errors are prevalent enough that they start detracting from the story.
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I actually have an editor for this story but they are currently at work and thus unable to edit
Why can't I stop laughing?
I have decided to take the general format of your first chapter and make my own version
Thank you
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Thanks, I would enjoy reading such a work.
I should finish with the first chapter by weds so i can send it to you if you want
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Okie dokie lokie
I like it
can't wait for the next chapter, but I do have a quick question revolving around where you're planning on taking this story. Are you going to keep this strictly one on one lessons with Twilight or will Luna learn lessons from other ponies in Twilight's absence?
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Will probably end up doing several different ponies. I've been itching to use the word phalanges, since it is my second favorite word, so I'll probably even have a crazy Lyra moment
Title idea 'when it rains its pours' or 'and then the pinkie' or 'its going to be one of those days'.
Very interesting chapter. It was kind obvious Pinkie would show up to invite Lun and Twilight to a party that she had probably decided to throw not even five minutes before, though.
Oh well. Can't wait to see more!
this seems like a cool idea for a story and it was presented well. A couple grammatical errors but other than a good job.
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Well, this was a fun start but it seems to be thoroughly dead.
i really like the story so far hope to read more soon