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One thousand years ago, shortly before the advent of Nightmare Moon, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna bore witness to twin vessels descending from the stars. Fearing their power and mystery, they were quickly sealed away where they lay. Now, in the present day, a freak accident caused by three unknowing fillies has broken the first seal in the Everfree Forest. Were the Princess' fears warranted? Or were these behemoths indeed "More than meets the eye"?
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Oh my goodness, I'm the first person to get in a review! This is exciting, both your story and review thing. Anyway, looks like what you'd expect from the Transformers, some idiots reawaken them from slumber.
So, is Soundwave the main villain for the story and Megatron is a sort of Bigger Bad? That is to say, Soundwave will be the main threat because Megatron is absent.
1967707 Hello, and thank you for reading
As far as plot goes, I'm afraid I won't be spoiling anything. I've got the basic framework of the story down in my head, so you'll just have to wait and see ~
This is one of the best written, no, THE best written Transformers crossover so far.
have a Like, a favorite, a
and a poster
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Keep up the good work
I am really liking this story. Very good. And I have a suspicion of what actually happened to Luna prior to her fall, but I will wait until that is revealed.
Where's megatron
I really like what you've got so far, Everyone seems to be in character so far and I haven't spotted any plot holes. Though I'm a bit worried about the foreshadowing at the end of the last chapter and the Combaticons still being unaccounted for. I also really like how your weaving the G1 continuity with Fall of Cybertron into a sort of afterword with Shockwave's case files (Though I'm wondering how you're going to explain Prime's girlfriend and her crew missing the evacuation.) Also I'm very intrigued by how you're having magic and energon interact.
Liked. Faved. And Followed.
2113211I thank you for your kind words. It's stuff like this that give me the motivation to create something nice ~
I can't say much, but rest assured that all loose ends will be tied. Loyalty to source material is really really important to me.
I must admit that I wad surprised to find a decent Transformers fic that implemented the Aligned
continuity in such a well written way.
I did notice a few issues, howev er. First and foremost is the tense. I see that constantly shift from past to ptesent and back very often, and it does kinda take away consistency feom the story.
2211634 I'm aware, but I'm not wanting to mess around with my previous chapters too much until I'm done with the first arc. This is my first written work after all, I'm a noob
In any case, I'm working to amend these problems for subsequent chapters. Thank you for taking the time to read ~
EDIT: after further consideration (40 minutes), i decided to at least fix the tense problems present in the first 3 chapters. it's not the most pressing issue to fix, but it'll be the easiest.
Yay, I love this fic.
Well, I can't say I've ever really followed Autobots, but from where I stand, this fic isn't half-bad. There's the tense issues, but you said you'll go back and edit, and I don't see anything else that's super glaring. It'd still be nice if you edited before you posted, but this is fanfiction, and even pros make mistakes.
Take all the time you need on working the next chapter. After all, if I had a choice between a mediocre story done quickly, or a good story less quickly, I'd take the second option hands down. True, it'd be great to have quality chapters in a timely manner, but that's life, and you're you. Don't push yourself too hard.
Good luck, and good writing!
I'm surprised you put pinkie with the most unsocial autobot, can't wait to see what happens next
I face-desked out of pure brilliance. I haven't even read this yet, but the last line in the description blew my mind.
Dis gon b gud.
The thought of what Omega Supreme will be like when Pinkie's done with him... terrifies me.
"PARTY CANNON: LOADED. TARGETS: SELECTED. AUTOBOTS: PARTY ON."
Starscream glances at Megatron. "Did he say..." Megatron: "Ignore that, and just run!"
KABOOM! The fleeing Decepticons are now entangled in massive amounds of streamers, their gunbarrels filled with confetti, and the bobbing for apples bucket is hanging from Megatron's head...
Good, GOOD!!!
Well done
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It's always a nice feeling when I get comments, even if they're just a few words. Keeps letting me know I'm at least doing something right.
I've had the idea for ch.5 in my head for the longest time, so with any luck it'll be out sooner than usual.
I'm looking forward to when Celestia and the ponies meet Optimus Prime. Meanwhile, I hope the Dinobots are able to rescue Elita-1.
I was just thinking that.
When that shark came up my first thought was Rippersnapper
..............Can't you just beat him the eff up?
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Him? Who him?
2947668Megatron
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Ehh, not really that easy. Gimme a little over a week and I'll explain
2947600No megs is in side solid energon cristle the only safeish way to of line him now with out causing a nuklerlvl dark eanergon boom would be to use eregon mining tools to bore or cut the cristel and him up or drill in to his spark chamber. But a eanergon weaponsword or firearm would kill him and every thing for miles. and beating at him would just free his skidplate.
Female Autobots? I thought they were extinct?
I hope Fluttershy and Trixie are alright. Not to mention the female Autobots.
Can somepony or somebody please hit Prowl? He's being a prick again and it's pissing me off.
Pinkie Pie socializing with Omega Supreme? Out of all Autobots? Then again, Pinkie Pie never saw warfare. This could only end well. I just hope she doesn't end up screwing up what Omega was meant to do.
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....... I think it's trying to communicate, what do we do?
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Cut him some slack, I'm assuming english isn't his first language
Pretty good so far. I'm getting a feeling Optimus Prime is about to "rise from the dead".
Will the infamous Death Battle between Rainbow Dash and Starscream be referenced in this story?
4205008 Starscream wasn't part of the final Exodus off Cybertron, but he's still around. As for what I'm going to do with him, that's for a later date. I mean, I can't write a Transformers story and not involve him
Do you plan on adding some of the multiplayer only characers like Ultra Magnus, Hound, Quake and Demolisher?
4207436 It depends on if the story needs them. There's a problem with involving too many characters in a narrative - not enough of them would get screen time, and as such, the reader doesn't have enough time to actually care about them and become attached. They would only be there to serve as plot fodder, and I can't have that
4207799 Thats understandable. Though I was hoping you'd include Slipstream, I've always loved her.
Twilight... you stupid idiot. You poor poor soul... you just tempted fate which as we ALL know leads to the very thing mentioned happening!
...told you so
Really... tept fate all day why don't ya!
...why is it the dense one of the group is the only one with this knowledge?!
Where's Optimus? Cause I want some Decepti-butts kicked by Prime!
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Trust me, we're in the same boat ~
Edit: I just noticed that 11 dislikes just vanished into thin air
It's time to start working on this again!
5528571 Lol
mutphie law initiated....twilight wat were you thinking
hey are you ever going to finesh this becasue I really want to know were it is going to go I want to know when Optimus will get hier if trixi is still alive when Starscream and the Dinobot will come to equestria and what is wrong with luna.
7050591 It's been a long time coming, I know
You'll have to believe me when I say I really want to finish this story. My problem is that I'm typically overcome with copious amounts of apathy when it comes to my craft. I honestly haven't written anything in months, despite me wanting to finish another story of mine on this site. Rest assured, I consider this particular story my magnum opus, and even if it takes another two years, I'm going to finish it one way or another.
Also, since this is the very first story I've ever tried to write, it's filled with grammatical errors all over the place in the previous chapters. Need to get those fixed to make myself feel better
so tell me when they do find Optimus will we see him and celetia interact I mean the both simaler in a way.
7058054 I've got the story planned out in my head for another 170k words. No spoilers ~