Rainbow Dash has always acted on instinct and it's always helped with her stunts but what happens when she uses it for something else, something that she may not be willing to consider, something that she finds terrifying: love?
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Seems good so far, tracking.
Good chapter, here is a moustache.
I await the next chapter.
2004805 Thanks for your comment and the free mustache!
The heart is usually located in what is commonly known as the chest area. The torso also holds lungs and stomachs.
There, found the heart!
EDIT: To be fair though, this is rather good. You get yourself a thumbsies up.
2005407 Can't argue with that, thanks though
Hmm... Very short but it's gotten my interest for now
the answer to the third question is Dash got a wing boner, isn't it?
Poor Dashie is so confused.
I could just hear Rainbow's gut saying, "Sorry pal, you're on your own."
I like it, i like it
Rainbow's friends would never have allowed her to try something like that. And she could've easily had a think about finding her heart without needlessly risking her life to do so. It may not have been as interesting but it would've been a damn slight more realistic.
Anyway, that and that there are a bunch of typos are my only criticisms for this chapter.
cute
Epilogue?
Way to kill the mood Rarity.
Horny couple are they?
^No of course not, neither of them are unicorns.
And so Dash makes an ass of herself for no reason, to the only pony who wouldn't be able to see through it. great, just dandy...
OMG LOVED IT.
Sequel pretty please
3782767 Quit reading my mind
3784375
OMG REALLY! !
Finally came to reading this after seeing it 100 times. I didn't expect the awesomeness inside.
Great Start To A Series!
Seriously?! A-a-a wingboner?! Rainbow couldn't believe that a siimple hug from Pinkie Pie had done this to her. The Cyan Pegasus Told Herself
I Didn't Like Rainbow Pie Or Pinkie Dash Before I Read This Thanks For Opening My Eyes!
Great Story Great Narativ And They Are So Cute!