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RapeTrain-Express


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Ooh, another fic by RTE? *yay* :yay:

Fuck yes. This is glorious.

This train is so fast...

Please Rapetrain, slow down and let me finish your other fics I can't keep up.

Liked anyway cause I can guess it's awesome.

How many stories can you write? :pinkiehappy:

Hmm, you going to write a sequel to this? Because I think I can go much further with that ending.

Well that escalated quickly. Awesome job.

A story where you didn't make the rapist a cold hearted bastard who actually regretted it? :rainbowderp:

How do you write so fast? Please, tell your secrets!

I gotta say considering this is a rapefic, you got Spitfires characterization pretty good.

I'm happy you fleshed out the story to show how their relationship was like. I also like how errors were at a minimum amount and that you even got someone to proofread your story beforehand for once!

There's like no rapefics of Spitfire at all on the internet save for like 1 or 2. I'm SO happy you wrote one! :pinkiehappy:

how the hell did rape train get in the feature box?

That...was actually a good story, regardless of the rape. You made him regret his actions and made it seem like he's going to turn himself in.

Fuck the complete tag. I want to see more of this story written!

For a bit there I was trying to figure out what the sad tag was for.

I can never get tired of reading your stuff. This story was excellent!

I didn't realize that it was possible to dowse for a fire. Well, I suppose you learn something new every day.

Now make spitfire and dash rape him in a new story :pinkiehappy:

A Spitfire rapefic. First time I've read a story about her getting raped, and you know what? I loved it! :moustache:

I had the feeling this was going to get featured.

Commence read.

Soarin...not how he should have one about it, but what is done is done.

Ah hell yeah! You actually wrote it!!:rainbowkiss:

Not bad. Your editor did a rather good job, though there was a few areas that could have been touched up a bit more on. Other then that you got a rapefic like you promised but you also seemed like you put a bit more story in rather then just outright rape. Your improving with each story and it's almost like a guilty pleasure to read all of them.

I love how Soarin went from favorite teammate to being ousted from their friendship.

Wow, so he's going to turn himself in? Rapist actually having remorse?
I approve.

1965738
>Implying almost 80% of rapists don't
the media really only plays on the fears of the mass by talking about the really vile gruesome serial murderer/rapists. what I'm saying here is: think for yourself, don't let the media do it for you

Pretty solid story you got, though a few areas could have had a bit more description to it. Like putting more description into the race and the surrounding area since it seemed to be a big turning point.

Good thing your editor decided to remain anonymous. He missed the errors in the frikin' TITLE! :facehoof:

1966165
Do you even know how to spell? The words are correct.

1966183

Dowsing is correct? Because it's certainly not in the English I was taught. Barring the possibility of it being some regional spelling, one should never write periods in titles.

1966183
dowse [douz] Show IPA verb, dowsed, dows·ing.
verb (used without object)
1.
to search for underground supplies of water, metal, etc., by the use of a divining rod.
verb (used with object)
2.
to search for (as water) by or as if by dowsing.

Perhaps you are looking for the word "douse".

Haha and to think that people here fancy themselves writers.

1966255 So, do I have permission to continue this?

Spitfire fic from you? That can only end well...:moustache:

1966579 Alright. Thanks

Another nice story Rape. Now do another romance where Soarin has a threesome with both Rainbow and Spitfire and ends up knocking both up.

Atleast Soarin has remorse and feels guilt.
Most rapists lack said feelings. On a unrelated note:
ALLLLL ABOARD THE RAPE TRAIN! There IS no stops on this train.

1966585
RinbowWolf WTF are you doing here?! :twilightangry2: get back in your cage. :unsuresweetie:
or not, whatever. :moustache:

Well, judging from the comments, it wasn't the other way 'round with the rape. Still good though:twilightsmile: But Sorin turning himself in? Didn't see that one coming:rainbowderp:

Well, that happened.

I'm not sure what bothers me more, the story or some of these comments.

1966198
yes, surprisingly, dowsing was a thing done with a "dowsing rod", basically a big slingshot shaped stick that was sold to gullible travellers for it's magical quality of finding water, there was only one problem: it didn't work

1967009
You know, when you think about it, the title makes sense.

*Is writing a Spitfire fic.
*Sees this in the feature box.
*Checks it out and sees the tags as well as the comments.
*Nope, just gonna walk away...
*Fails.

1967032
hmm, dowsing for fire... Oh I get it, because Sorin' had spent a good portion of his life trying to get with Spits (i.e silent, but noticeable advances that spits shrugged off) indicative of the money spent on a dowsing rod. But now that he has finally used the rod, (some pun intended [I'm so sorry]) and found that it doesn't in fact work he gets angry and does something that he does, and will continue to regret (if you can't figure out what, read the fucking story again. Or better yet, just look who the author is) inevitably, this poor choice is the culmination of the story of both the weary traveller, and the rapist (sorin'). So yeah anyways.
>all your respective faces when I summed up a rape_train story by being deep and introspective (dark and edgy)
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>my respective faces when your respective faces when
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and a moustache for good measure :moustache:

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