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Doctor Perseus


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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves Episode 7: The Good, the Bad, and the Derpy


The Doctor, the Mane 6, Derpy, and Spike travel to 4376 and find themselves on a luxury spaceship called the Queen Philippine, which is currently on its maiden voyage. What starts off as an interesting adventure turns into a fight for survival when the ship loses power and becomes host to some unwanted passengers.

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(Joke) Alt. Title: Doctor Who Cares? Episode 8: Hallowed Be Thy Starship

I just noticed the Space station is named after my sister: Esther.:pinkiehappy:
Keep the awsome stories comming. And now, time for more mustache:moustache:

Wow that's creepy.

We're you basing this off of "burn with me" by any chance?

Pax

CYBUS INDUSTRIES CREATED THE CYBERMEN (THIEVING BASTARDS.)

when i saw the title:
".....you born Philippines bro?"

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No. I wasn't born in the Philippines. I just liked the sound of "The Queen Philippine."

"We're definitely not in Equestria anymore!"

Another Wizard of Oz reference from My Little Pony! :derpytongue2:

Cue Doctor Whooves theme:

Okay, time for some headfanon. That's right I'm going to headcanon a fan fiction. It's that good.
It's clear at this point that Matilda is Rarity's daughter. :duck: She's an earth pony with a red coat. Perhaps her father is an earth pony with a red coat. :eeyup: Then again, Rarity's father might be an earth pony. (And Doc Perseus speculated this in his blog's review of Sisterhooves Social.) So, Matilda's father doesn't necessarily have to be an earth pony. Matilda shares her name with a donkey from A Friend in Deed. Perhaps that's significant. Matilda has some Time Lord powers like River Song. Perhaps she was also conceived in the TARDIS. Most likely we have yet to meet Matilda's father. Very likely, Rarity will be traveling with the Doctor again, meet some stallion, they'll be in the TARDIS, yada yada yada Matilda. :twilightoops::pinkiegasp:

1973194 Yes it does seem to be inspired by the Doctor Who episode 42.

I just realized. At the end of their scene, I think Applejack and Rainbow Dash were in a bed together. Foreshadowing :ajsmug::rainbowwild:

"At the moment...run,"

There's always running with the Doctor around.

The Doctor smiled. He couldn't help but think how cute Twilight and Derpy looked when they shivered. He quickly realized that he was staring…

Oh, so he's thinking it too. :twilightblush::derpytongue2:

"I'm glad that you did," Rainbow said happily as she knelt down next to Applejack and gently stroked her mane. Rainbow leaned in close to Applejack, making sure that nopony could hear her, and whispered, "I'm glad that I didn't lose you, AJ."

As George Takei would say, Oh my!

There was a massive pull behind the Doctor's naval and he could feel himself flying back up towards the ship.

It's a portkey! Harry Potter reference.

"Do you love him, Twilight?"
"I...er...what about you, Derpy?"
"What?"
"Do you love him?"

I think it's clear at this point that they're both in love with the Doctor. And Pinkie Pie hilariously interrupted them before they could admit it. :rainbowlaugh: I'm looking forward to the future episode where they come in contact with a substance that lowers their inhibitions and Derpy and Twilight fight each other over the Doctor! :twilightangry2::derpytongue2: I wonder who would win though. Of course, the Doctor wouldn't be affected maybe because he's a Time Lord and Donna wouldn't because she's awesome. (And maybe Rainbow Dash and Applejack end up affected as well :raritywink:)

"Wibbly wobbly timey wimey!" the Doctor exclaimed.

First time the Doctor says that in these stories!

"I guess it is. Good luck with the Gailenean 1000, Rainbow Dash," said John.

Foreshadowing. (Triple Rainbow) :rainbowdetermined2:

Two words were welded into one of the sides: Cybus Industries.

CYBERMEN! And there was a Cyberman in Thalia's memories!
I've noticed that not every fan fic author is good at writing the Mane 6. It kind of annoys me if they just happen to skip one and she happens not to appear in the story. Doc Perseus though is good at doing all the Mane 6 and they all see very true to the show. And once more, their interactions with the Doctor are just wonderful. Once again, we also see a complex MLP inspired Doctor Who-esque villain.

2920965 agreed, it most likely was based off of that one. heheheh, living sun....

2921076 you two arent the only ones. :twilightsmile: i may also be of a different species -alien, like the doc- , but that isnt stopping me!

2921298 but i have read him say that in previous episode. or maybe that was the new alt series...idk anyway, да ссведения (sorry, need to continue to practice my russian. dont want to forget it. but i just said good bye. my vita can type with the russian alphebet.)

"Make everything cold as hell!"
That's really ironic if you think about it. :rainbowlaugh:

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Your awesome you know that

Lol looks like sat least someone has enough common sense to realize what the doctors arrival signifies

"The party planet, well, the current one anyway. Parties all over the planet, 24/7."
Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy?

Wow first living ice then living water now living fire what's next living rock!!!

"Oh will you two stop fighting over the Doctor like little fillies?!" Rarity snapped. Twilight and Derpy fell silent. "I'll go! Besides, I have the box that supposedly is going to solve all our problems." "But!" Derpy cried. "No buts about it! I'm going and that's final!" "I guess it's settled then," said the Doctor as Rarity marched forward with her box.

Lol my thoughts exactly i can't wait for those two to duke it out over him my vote on Derpy

I just can't help but see Monstrume as the Phantom from Devil May Cry. Anyone else?

"Is pretty much all you can say? And if you say pretty much as a response to that then I swear I'm going to break your jaw!"
"I think I'll be on my way then!"

damn i wanted him to say pretty much :trollestia:

"Make everything as cold as hell!"

isnt hell hot? :trollestia:

YOU WILL BE UPGRADED. ANY WHO RESIST ARE NOT COMPATIBLE AND WILL BE DELETED.

The Doctor smiled. He couldn't help but think how cute Twilight and Derpy looked when they shivered. He quickly realized that he was staring…

I'm fine with you liking Derpy, but Twilight and Rainbow is always going to be my OTP. Even if they don't get together, which I doubt they will, I'll still read because this is very interesting.

Applejack had made a full recovery and now spent most of her time hanging out with Rainbow Dash in the viewing halls, watching the stars move by the ship.

Okay, I concede. No TwiDash. I really don't like AppleDash but because this is Doctor Whooves, I'll read it anyway. Well, also because you're doing an amazing job at writing all the ponies and dragon in this.

Y'know, after i rewarded some episodes of Doctor Who, I realized that this episode of Doctor Whooves takes heavy inspiration from the episodes "42" and "Journey To The Center Of The TARDIS", with the idea behind what's going on with the ponies being from "42" and the design of the afflicted from "Journey To The Center Of The TARDIS". Am I right in assuming this?

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42 was definitely an inspiration. The similarities to Journey to the Centre of the TARDIS are just coincidences as I wrote this story well before that episode aired.

7512195 I didn't realize that episode aired after this. Glad I at least a got it half right, though.

"We can scold them later! Just run!"

The irony is overwhelming .

Ha ha very funny joke about rarity and her hatred for all things crustaceans🤣👏

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