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Terolie


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Have you ever seen the world and known of it's beauty and wild views and felt nothing?
Are you the kind of person who can see people die in front of your very eyes and not bat an eyelash?
Can you fathom an existence where not even the most powerful of events can touch your heart?
A man once said that a truly mad man only wants to watch the world burn, I disagree. I would argue that a truly mad man is a man who can watch as all of existence crashes around him and becomes purged in pain and chaos and feel nothing.
No remorse. No pain, nor regret. No Nothing.

This is the story of a person who viewed by the phenomenon we call society would only be called "Half a man".
Ryan Kent is this man. And now he shall be thrown into the world of tolerance, love and harmony.
Listen to The Fickle Notions of Half a Man as he is thrown into the world of his idle fancies and has his life literally change, for better of for worse. Nothing will ever be the same.
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Cover Art by Ayra: http://ayramatao.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d5s5bxy
Thanks a million!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )

1986484
Bannable offence.

This story is legitimately one of the best written stories I have ever read. Good job sir. Please continue.

1989085

I am glad you think so. I shall try my best to keep the quality to your standards

So you like comments? Here ya are.
I enjoyed the shit out of this chapter. It was funny and there was nothing wrong with it other than a couple grammar mistakes. Or maybe they were just Zicoro talking. He was sounding more like Yoda than Yoda.
I hope Guylight gets a good fill of scientific jazziness.

Oh god, I can clearly see where this is headed

2109624 yay^^ glad ya liked it! Thank you for helping me with my fix :) just one more comment man! Just one more and thats it. I can stop when I want! ... Tangent

Aaaanyway, I'm glad I got down Zicoro's personality like I wanted^^

2110771 I will try to be more subtle in the future :trollestia:

I just fell in love. Faving and liking, and obviously looking for more.

I simply love the narration

Why did you had to change the genders... WHY?!

Only thing I dislike in this story.
Well done so far, looking for more.

Peace

2255997
Glad you liked it! Always cool to hear from people^^
2256124
I changed the genders for two reasons, 1: To mix it up from standard Brony in Eq, and 2: To fuck with the character.

1986549 It's also an ignore-able one.

Let him comment in peace.

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