After a hard day's dungeon crawl Kazuto, Asuna, and the gang relax at the Dicey Cafe. As they sit they hear on the television about new developments in cross dimensional technology. Naga then tells the group that not only was he able to get his hands on the code, but he attempted to use part of it to create random new virtual worlds. The gang whole-heartedly agree that they should try it out. When the party does check it out they find themselves no longer in the virtual world, but in a very real alternate universe of Equestria.
What adventures are in store? Where will they go?
Crossover between MLP and Sword Art Online.
Thanks to Marten_T_W and Charles Isaac for cleaning up my verbal vomit
Chapters (5)
I enjoyed it, very much. You have some issues with the technical stuff, but all in all you you did a excellent job for your first time. Plus, is a SAO crossover, the best anime from last year without a doubt.
You have a big party to write, Kirito and Asuna, Yui, Klein, Lyfa, Lizbeth, Silica and Recon. Plenty characters are interesting but just five chapters would be so short for give them enough screen time...
Well, I really liked it! Have a fave and a green thumb. I'm a huge anime fan and I write most crossovers too, so I would like to see how this one goes.
LOVED IT PLZ MAKE MORE
FINALLY!! I have been looking for a good SAO crossover for like FOREVER!!!!
One word. SPACES. You need to space out your sentences man.
2114587 Could you please show an example of what you mean?
You should try Accel world, its the same idea/concept just like 20 or more years in the future and they make references to SAO.
*Thrown Room -Throne Room
Just Pointing It Out :3
Thrown. Spelled Throne.
besides that omigawrsh omigawsh omigawd!
Two of my fav shows, THANK YOu!
Why WOuLDNT people tell you this is awesome?!!?
This is AWESOME!!!
please write more?
You need to have Kirito show off his sword skills against Shining Armor.
Actually it's really good!
Nice work!!
2190693 OMG THAT IS AN AMAZING IDEA, TOTALLY STEALING IT!!
2190983 Yeah show the Equestirans why he's known as the Black Swordsman of SAO.
I like the concept, but please don't mess with kirito, derping him up, I will haz a sad...
2190983Yeah make it happen
2409753Please
2190983 My friend you have just made my week,neigh you have made my month thank you for this wonderful contribution to the world of equestrian crossovers
*twitch-twitch* w-where is *twitch* ch...chapter *twitch* f-four
2190983 were is the next chapter i want to see it
Well better Hiatus than Cancelled.
....MOAR :I
hulu you can find it there
..Well, if you lost Sword Art Online and forgot..
Do what i do! WATCH EVERY EPISODE WITHIN THREE DAYS IN A MASS MARATHON!
Acknowledged. I will wait.
2874249 been there, done that... twice? I kind of prefer the light novels, because I can read ahead.
keep going! I love sao, please more sao with ponies!
maybe the ponies leave equestria the way the charecters came in?
So dowdlekid you are having trouble remembering Sao are you going to watch it again or ask people?
This is so Cute!
I like this! I'm happy you still exist.
Found this today, I liked it :)
God yes, why hath thus taken so long for gloriousness to be acheved in the form of a new chapter? or is it that I hath not looked to the glory that is sao and fim crossbread?
Well... this may be the best damn SAO story on here that I've read... then again there's only like... 4 in the Anime Crossover group.
I love what you've done here... Not sure about the transformations though, that's something I'll have to see more of in later chapters.
I just read all 5 rather short chapters in one go and I have to say, well done! Needs some serious editing and proofreading done to it to polish this already quite enjoyable story off, but VERY NICE!
Also, if you take MONTHS to update this... I may have to blast your page with hints/ideas on a near daily basis.
Definitely a bit interesting. Nice to see an SAO crossover taking the route of a Kirito adventure, as opposed to my path of human OCs in Equestria's Strife Online. Definitely some inconsistencies with how New Alfheim really works, but since you haven't read the books after the anime's end or read up details on them from a wiki, that is understandable. Characterization is pretty solid so far, except that Sugu/Lyfa is a bit extra abrassive towards Naga/Recon, obviously intended to be used for future conflict in the story, so that too is understandable, but probably could have been toned down a little bit. Can't help but wonder where you will be taking this story when you pick it back up, since the only hint of tangible future conflict comes from Recon, and Celestia's pontification is a bit too vague to give a sense of what may be coming.
Try giving my Sword Art story a look. I recently made a second chapter for it and have gotten the ball rolling a little more.
Thoughr it was leafa. I still have the annoying Leafa-chan of recon's stuck in my head.
What season?
Interesting, hope to see more
Do it!
Drown me in new chapters!
Please master!
I will promise to enjoy them!
Authors note from chapter three. I find this ironic.
At this point, it kinda sucks as much as waiting for season 2 of SAO.
i would really like to read more chapters of this story i think it is really really good.
Please proceed, this is entertaining!
Have a wonderful night!
~Adam
P.S.: Fun fact: I'm from Hungary and Pina means "pussy" in hungarian, thus making me glad that I have headphones, or else my family would think I'm watching porn, whenever they say the name out loud in the Anime.
It's a great intro. I've been looking for something like this!!!
I'm guessing SAO II didn't start yet?
Yui and Cadence would get along so well.
Woohoo! Third story to be added to the SAO: Remastered group!
And PM me of you want me to help you edit those last two chapters of yours!
not bad, a few mis-spells grammatical errors and placements of words
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